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Lucky Star Diablo83
/r more Lucky Star Wallpaper
(1280x1024 and further is better)

PS: also a comment about my work
>> Anonymous
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>>332139
Saved
>> Anonymous
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moar konakona! xD
>> Anonymous
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>> Anonymous
>>332139
yes saved
>> Anonymous
>>332139
it sucks

why use comic sans?
and, why, lol, couldn't you get the stroke right? it's got DIRT in it. It has to be one of the most basic things to do in any design software.

oh, and only a retard would need text to remind him what the wp is about.
>> Diablo83
It's not perfect, I know it.

Maybe you can do better. So...uhm why don't you show us some of your work Mr ImThePerfectGraphicDesignerAndYouSuck?

I accept critics but not insults. Especially by a perfect stranger that hide under "Anonymous".
>> Anonymous
Comic Sans MS is the worst font ever.
>> Anonymous
>>332340
in that case... saging the newfag.
welcome to 4chan. do yourself a favor and lurk moar before posting next time.
>> Miskat
Actually, I rather like it.

Comic Sans was a good choice for font, looking just cartoony enough for effect while still remaining readable. Colorful, too, which is good.

Also, the text helps fill in the white space without making the wallpaper seem cluttered.

Don't let eliteist fags get you down, mate, you're doing well.
>> Anonymous
>>332403
follow this advice and happy failing
>> I'm Anonymous right?
>>332469
I wouldn't state it like that: No text... Just don't...
>> Anonymous
http://bancomicsans.com/

Nuff said...Text on wallpapers sucks!
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>>332139
Alright, Imma crit your work now.

1. Everyone hates words in their wallpapers. Fucking everyone. If not everyone, than most people. If there has to be words, they should be in a script that a. goes with the image and b. the colors should match.

2. The moonspeak up in the corner looks good when you're looking at the imae as a whole. The whole thing looks balanced.

3. It would have been better, aesthetically, to match the smudged picture border with the font. If they can't both be smudged then they should both be smooth. Yay for matching!

4. Tilting the picture added to it. Good use of dynamics.

Remember guys, this is supposed to be a raki star thread. Post t3h pics.
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>>332139
Agree with most of the comments here. All in all, not a bad job. I usually don't go for character names on walls (although, odd enough, I'm not adverse to the title of the anime on the wall). Regardless, thanks. Keep the work a-comin'.
>> Anonymous
>>332340
go back to deviantart, you sound just like those fags
>> Anonymous
>>332139

It looks like a piece of shit.
>> Anonymous
>>332139
fucking sucks

in before more "baw baw do better baw baw"

if i eat in a restaurant and have to throw up i don't have to go to the kitchen and "make it better" because the cook tells me to

now gtfo da-fag
>> Anonymous
>>332340
That's not the way things work. One does not need to prove that they can do better to criticize a work. You asked for a comment on your work, and my fellow Anonymous gave one. If you cannot live with the fact that it wasn't a positive one, I recommend you make your stay at 4chan a short one.

By 4chan standards, he was actually pretty helpful, in that he stated what he thought sucked about it, rather than just saying it sucks and telling you to bugger off.
>> Diablo83
>>332527

This is a critic, and I accept it (actually he's right and I'm trying to follow the advices)

>>332267
>>332683

These are insults.
Critics are right only if explained. Say only "it sucks" doesn't make you sound critical neither smart.

Now, my thread was mainly a request for wallpapers, post it!


PS:also suggestions about leave 4chan (or GTFO some of you understand only insults) don't make you sound smart
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wallpaper with text fail.
and you just crop a wallpaper into a border and added text making it fail moar!
>> Miskat
The link to the ban comic sans website was intersting and funny... but, come on. I understand people getting fed up with tards using stupid fonts where it's inappropriate, but that's why a lot of university professors require the use of Ariel or Times New Roman.

I think that in this context, it's being used for damn near exactly what it was made for.
>> Anonymous
But Comic Sans is typographically holocaus for style.
>> Anonymous
You got the 1900x1200 konata wp that's being reposted almost everyday.
You opened a new white canvas
you tilted the picture. added the smudgy border.

Then you looked for the lucky star logo. You didn't do much. You just resized it, making the LUCKY (STAR) STAR text look blurry and way too small.

You eyedropped the pink color from the logo and added the Konata Izumi text in Comic Sans.

You added the text stroke, but failing to get it right.


So... what work are we talking about? Some shit a 12yo that learnt how to use PS 2 weeks ago can do?

OK, you got the things well balanced. But that doesn't mean they don't suck. Everyone knows were to put things to make the whole look ballanced.

So... next time you do some shit "artwork" in 10 minutes, keep it to yourself, then lurk the fuck more, look for tutorials and see what can be done and what things look cool in a certain style of wp and come up with something new.

Oh, and btw, I hate white wallpapers with bright colors here and there. They burn my eyes.
>> Anonymous
>>332721
if you show your work out like that, you better accept any kind of comment, even if its just insults

gb2DeviantArt if you want people to circlejerk you
>> Anonymous
>>332905
i lold
>> I'm Anonymous right?
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>>332484

Ok I said that but after reading OP's comments: Just GTFO and go back to deviantart fucking wus.
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