File :-(, x, )
Anonymous
it needs something... but what?
tell me anon!

(sage=free bump)
GOOD hijacks welcome
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
I was originally going to give a smart-arsed remark, but upon reflection, I'll actually try and help-I think the amulet and wings add too much 'noise' to the image.

Oh, and for the hell of it, smart arsed remark too: needs moar uguu
>> Anonymous
a base image that doesn't have the texture of a manga scan
>> Anonymous
her ass is waaaaaaaaaaaaay too boney, that's what's wrong
>> Anonymous
>>371713

This.

Apart for that, looks good to me.
>> Anonymous
sage =/= free bump

the lines all over the background need to be softened, to look more fire like and less like auto pinstriping