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NiaSimon Not Chii
Hello /w/

Looking for critique on Simon's right shoe. Details, orientation, placement and the like.
>> Not Chii
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Original. Also used page 17 from chapter 2 as a reference.
>> Anonymous
Looks fine to me.
>> Not Chii
Thanks for the comment. Anyone else?
>> Anonymous
the right foot seems a little too long
>> Not Chii
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Like so?
>> Anonymous
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>> Anonymous
Why does it go from black to white?
>> Not Chii
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>>591618
It's transparent. The thumbnail defaults to black (save the thumbnail image)

>>591600
And this?
>> Anonymous
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>>591576
>>591294
The right foot seems broken below the knee. fix plrx.
>> Not Chii
>>591632
So move the foot back farther? I can do that. All in all it looks like I have to change the lower pant leg from the manga. For all I know the foot could still be oriented incorrectly.
>> Not Chii
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Straightened out the leg.
>> Keira
the foot looks like its directly viewed from its side yet Simon is running in an angled direction need to see a little bit more of the front of the shoe rather than the full on side.. otherwise Simon's leg is twisting to his right