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First, does /w/ aprove my first vector?

Second, Sword of the Stranger thread, go!
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Sorry for the low res but can't find good walls of this film.
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>>597785
Coloring feels a bit off. It's like he was illuminated by neon lights or something. Other than that it's decent for a first.
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>>597785

Never use squared off ends like you used on the beard and other places.
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>>597799
>>597942

This, and it looks like you used fixed line-width on the hair and eyebrows. It would bother me less if the lines weren't so thin, it clashes a bit with the think lines of the face and ear. There are also a couple of lines that look weird, the line that goes around the eye on the left side (the character's right) doesn't really look like it should connect, and the the dark spot at the bottom of the nose I suspect should be the character's left nostril, but the line encircling it should in that case connect fully to itself.

I'd be sort of half-interested in seeing the original pic you worked from.
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>>597955
Its a screen from the film. Dont know what to use on the on the hair and eyebrows, obviously I used a cheap stroke, so it ruined the tips. What should I do?
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>>598309
I feel your pain man. I hate doing beards and hair with shapes, too. Make some custom brushes and use those instead of the default strokes.

Pic related. Hair is all brushed strokes.