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Anonymous
I just made this Samurai Champloo wallpaper in illustrator.

What do you guys think?

Any suggestions on how it could be better?
>> Anonymous
Really hot original design? Looks just like any other vector art out there nowadays except there's not much to look at.
>> Anonymous
I like it.

Make it better? Hmmm. Maybe do more with the floaty balls, play around with the composition. Not sure I like the color choices for Fu.
>> Anonymous
Well, Im not coming here claiming it's hot shit guys

This is my very first wallpaper, and want to know what I can do to improve on it.

>>127269
>>127266

I think Im gonna add a Custom "Samurai Champloo" logo on the far left. Maybe that will take up space?

And I'm on the fence with Fu's Colors.
But I'll just change it to her original colors.

Thanks :D

Any more comments are appreciated!
>> Anonymous
>>127261
>>127245
same person, lol
>> Anonymous
>>127274

Umm, it isnt.
>> Anonymous
>>127272
Well most of the people here hate logos and text in general... I do, anyway. All that white is pretty hard on the eyes, so maybe you could do more with the background in general? Also, I like the circles, but they're pretty plain. Maybe try doing more designs with them or something like that. I don't think this is horrible for a first try, but there's definitely more to be done with it! I'm sure you can do great things if you keep on with it~
>> Anonymous
i think mac-heads would love it
I, for one, am saving it, because some day I might be in the mood for it.
>> Anonymous
white background?

enjoy your eyestrain
>> Anonymous
Different color choice for Fuu. Mugen stands out too much IMO
>> OnyxCat
Very awesome, kind of feminine touch background. I agree the white is a little harsh, but I'm not sure it'd work with another color.
>> Anonymous
to liven up the background you could try adding a few small to med width swatches of color like a messy paint brush stroke, light vibrant colors would probably be best