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Anonymous
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hmmm I kinda agree with you on the shoulder (the back with the left hand), it does look kinda funky there.
but as far as the left hand goes, I see nothing wrong with it, as you can see with how perfectly it goes with the original.
i do see a little problem with the front hand, it seems a little too extended, as you can see from the trace, it looks like the hand isn't punching but rather just resting because of the length it has.
however i do think you can work around it, depends on how the coloring will be done and effects you can add to make it look like it is swinging.
as for the inconsistent lines, it depends as well on how you color it, and as well as how you want to present the vector, if you want to place emphasis on the swinging hand, then what you've just presented is fine enough, but there's a chance that the hand will compromise the attention on ryohei as well.
anyway hope that kinda helped, lolz and btw /ic/ is just full of trolls now.
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