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Anonymous
Hello, i made this the other night, what do you guys think?
>> Anonymous
Well...it's kinda...messy.

Nice try tho.
>> Anonymous
its pretty shit.
>> Anonymous
>>494180
yea, it was my first one

>>494183
why ty
>> Anonymous
>>494183
This anon speaks the truth.
Even the size is wrong.
>> Anonymous
Internet has way better. But Elfen Lied fucking rules.
>> Anonymous
I'll be honest. It's crappy. The head in upper left is..
It's a LOL :)
But i like the blood effects.
Try working more on it, the idea isn't bad.
>> Anonymous
>>494365
Lol shit sucks
>> Anonymous
>>494478
Nothing a little lens flare can't fix...
>> Anonymous
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>>494538
Like this?
>> Anonymous
Man, kick out that damned head.
>> Anonymous
>>494545
Even worst. Why the text?
>> Anonymous
>>494548
No idea just sprang to mind as i was doing it, hold on i'll reedit it with lens flare and the face gone
>> Anonymous
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Okay re-edited. Any better?
>> Anonymous
>>494556
Now it's starting to have legs and arms :)
Work on it some more, and it may be a good wall.
Try to balance the colors of the characters.
>> Anonymous
>>494560
Samefag here
Also try to make the hands look more different. They all look the same, and it spoils the effect.
Good luck with the work
>> Anonymous
ok, what in the where now?
>> Anonymous
>>494562
Rofl, hate to burst your bubble but im just some random fag that thought fuck it i'll add some lens flare, im not the OP
>> Anonymous
>>494564
I lol'd
But it doesn't change the fact, that it's better now.
Thank You almighty random fag.