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Anonymous
First attempt at a vector. Forgive the dodgy lines D:
>> Anonymous
very appealing character!
I know nothing about this. But just looking at the image, the triangular shadows in the hands to suggest the palm concavity...something about those triangles is too straight-sided, feels less than organic, not sure what it is. They are like the only straight lines in the pic.
Totally amateur feedback on my part, but it's what I have to offer. I do like the pic overall very much!
>> Anonymous
Moar Sketchbook vectors? Aw hell yes!

Anyway, my thoughts on the matter (but please take with a grain of salt, as I'm new to this too). The lines are a bit too angular in both the shading and other stuff. I really like how weird the eyes look, even if it isn't 100% true to the style. My only advice is to take it a bit slower, since the hands look really funky and rushed.
>> Anonymous
gb2dA
>> Anonymous
>>423323
disregard that I suck cocks
>> Anonymous
I was honestly looking at the fact her mouth was open...
>> Anonymous
i love the vector, but what i would suggest is making it a little softer. (like the glow or colored outline effect not chii and cutenotpedo uses)
>> Anonymous
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>>423441
Like this?
>> Anonymous
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Also, this was the original image.
>> Anonymous
>>423856
that way looks worse imho
although in original shadows are pretty dark I would try another combination less dark than the current one
>> Anonymous
avoid using stroke all together and experiment with shapes and it really add different weight to your outlines.