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Anonymous
It shows promise but there's a couple things that could be improved. Fixed width linework is usually frowned upon. Using the line pen tool or adding strokes around color segments makes it look unnatural. Try doing the linework as a separate path.
Parts of the linework are blurry for some reason. Like above her crotch. Maybe that's just me.
You have to go back and check over everything when you save a PNG. Sometimes the layering is wierd or the linework doesn't come out right. For example: the tip of the first finger on the left hand, her left shoulder line overlaps her hair, right hand has a couple overlaps, right ribbon near the shoulder, left ribbon overlapping her ahoge and her right arm has color leaks on both sides.
Lastly, if you're going to sign your work smack dab in the middle, don't get all pissy if I post a detext a day later. Heh. Most vectors done here aren't signed but if you feel you must, try to keep it clean.
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