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Anonymous
ok, not trying to be too harsh or anything.
the sea is too "warm" - it doesnt really sit behind the grass. maybe on the left where the grass dips show a bit of sand going into the sea - then look at how sea water changes colour when its shallow on top of sand. talking of the grass, using that one PS brush to do it never looks good - try using a source photo as a base texture.
as for the girl, i can see what youre trying to do with the pose (unless youre using someone elses pic in your wall) but it reads now like shes an amputee - add just a hint of a foot showing behind her knee/thigh and itll not look so awkward.
broadly speaking the sky is ok, cept the cloud abover and right of her head, it doesnt fit - even it it does belong in the source photo.
its a good start though, composition is about right.
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