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Nia Simon Not Chii
Hello /w/ progress update. Not sure where (much less when) the other thread fell of to.

No color balance. Still looking for shoe critique before I finish it up.
>> Anonymous
good shit as always
>> Anonymous
ffffff i can't wait for this to be finished
>> Natsume !Cr9FR9aB7g
Nice! Keep up the good work.
>> Anonymous
Looking very good. For his shoe, maybe make it a little bigger? It looks a bit too small.
>> Not Chii
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>> Not Chii
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Heyo, final color balance check. Sorry for the bar--don't want you to save this one before the release. Learn the hard way.

Looking for final critique, color choice, etc. Is her hair too bright, is his shoe really that way, that sort of thing. Just don't ask for thicker lines =)

I'll release in a few hours, otherwise.
>> Anonymous
>>593122
Hmm...

It might just be the awkward angle that Simon's lower body is at, but neither of his feet seem right to me.

I think...his right foot should be pointed a bit lower and should be a bit larger. At the angle Nia's dragging him at, we'd likely be seeing more of its side than the bottom. In the first post, the extra foot would fit better, but its angle is also a little off. Like, it's pointed too far away from the viewer.

Now, Simon's left...well, leg and foot, actually, seem to be off. If you don't mind, try a quick sketch where we see more of the leg's inside than the outside. Just sorta take the whole leg from the hip and rotate it a bit so that the heel is closer to the center of the body.

Those are my two cents. I think it's amazing, to be honest, and far better than what I could ever accomplish (but you asked for an honest critique and you deserve one). Nia is positively adorable.

I can't wait for the finished work!
>> Anonymous
Bracing for win
>> Not Chii
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>>593150
Thanks much.

I had a friend take a look over and made one other change. As he noted, given the angle of running, the way Nia drags Simon--and the overall poorly drawn Simon which doesn't help--Simon shouldn't be as big as he is in the manga.
>> Not Chii
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>>593225
So as suggested, I've another alteration, background provided to help with the angle.
>> Not Chii
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>>593230
And lastly, I'm fairly certain this is the one you do want to save. Thank you for your patience.
>> Not Chii
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>>593239
Geez, that took a while...
One for immediate desktop backgrounds.
>> Anonymous
>>593230
i like this background, would appreciate 1440x900
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>> Anonymous
incredible work with the colors,
about the right shoe i think that you could just change a litle the angle to fit with the leg,
also red shoes caus' simon is a pimpin' bastard
>> Not Chii
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color I can change; shape is more or less a done deal now.

What goes with red shoes??
>> Anonymous
>>593664
shoes colour is perfect
thanks
and i just noticed, on the manga it looked like he broke his leg, you did a very good adjustement
>> Anonymous
>>593225

oh fuck i'm the one who requested this a week ago, awesome work notchii, hope you can also do the guys around the picture like leeron and the others.

awesome btw thanks.