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>>479078 It looks good except for his left hand... you probably should have connected some of the lines a bit more. In fact, there's a few more places (tie, chin) where the lines seem to get wispy, when you have other lines that end sharply.. It looks like you couldn't decide on how you wanted your lines to look. It looks very good though.. Nice job on the eyes, those are hard to do :)
>>479079 Looks good. The only two places where it looks like lines may have not quite connected right right on her left hand, middle finger (very slightly) and on the bottom of her shirt on one side. I'm not familiar with what it's from though.. is she supposed to be that wide?
They look pretty good though. I saved the Kyon one, although I'd like to see it with the lines on the hand not so blotchy ;)
>>479081 No. We don't apologize on 4chan.
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