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Question to other experience waller .. how do I improve on this?

Is there a good tutorial for newbie wallmake like me?
>> Anonymous
ok, not trying to be too harsh or anything.

the sea is too "warm" - it doesnt really sit behind the grass. maybe on the left where the grass dips show a bit of sand going into the sea - then look at how sea water changes colour when its shallow on top of sand. talking of the grass, using that one PS brush to do it never looks good - try using a source photo as a base texture.

as for the girl, i can see what youre trying to do with the pose (unless youre using someone elses pic in your wall) but it reads now like shes an amputee - add just a hint of a foot showing behind her knee/thigh and itll not look so awkward.

broadly speaking the sky is ok, cept the cloud abover and right of her head, it doesnt fit - even it it does belong in the source photo.

its a good start though, composition is about right.
>> Anonymous
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OP here .. Thanks for the criticm.. I dont mind harsh .. As long as you provide a solution on how to improve it Which you did .. Thanks again.

Also, source pic.
>> Anonymous
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Turning this into a Shining Wind Thread
>> Anonymous
>>390399
If only it were larger.
>> Anonymous
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>>390463
OP here ..
Not wallpaper size , but w/e
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>>390596
resize and cleaning
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>> WTF H4X !2ChanX2uNg
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do what now?
>> Anonymous
>>390675

OP here .. back to my original advice seeking part?
>> Anonymous
Needs moar Shining Wind
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>>390675
>>390641
>>390596
>>390399

For this, I contribute.
>> the lunatic ibara
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actually it's pretty easy...
default sharpen
default surface blur
50% fade
some levels/contrast/saturation stuff

here's my widescreen version, i loved that scan!
btw... where's that scan from?