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>>138571 for starters, there's font choice sf new/old republic is already pretty crappy to start with, but then going in and artificially making it small caps just makes it ugly as fuck ocr a extended is also ugly as fuck, like some evil bastard child of lcd and courier new eurostile on its own is a great font, but doesn't really match a manga atmosphere. tempus sans is decent, but as with everything else, you used too large a font size vivaldi is meant to look pretty with swash caps, not be legible. granted, when you make the text zomg huge, i guess most anything can be legible
as far as general typesetting goes, as i said above, way too large font size across the board. encroaching on bubble edges way too often. also, pisspoor wordwrapping, with tons of topheavy/bottomheavy/bottleneck blurbs (e.g. 1st page 2nd frame 1st bubble), splitting words that wouldn't need splitting if you simply adjusted the wordwrapping, even without a desperately needed decrease in font size
poor text centering within bubbles, inconsistent and erratic punctuation and capitalization, obsessive need for font and font size variation making the edit distracting - it's one thing to change when the raw changes (and if you pay attention, the raw only uses like 2-3 fonts, as opposed to ww roman AND ww italics/bolditalics AND ocr AND tempus sans AND bradley hand AND eurostile AND sf new/old republic and whatever else. i mean, if you want to use different fonts, that's fine, just don't use the excuse of basing it on the raws), another to just spooge all over yourself over all the fonts that come with windows.
shit, field too long
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