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I love spontaneous portraits, especially of friends; I do them all the time. I've been meaning to post some, but I want to get permission from all the friends I've shot that I want to post a photograph of and I haven't gotten around to it. 4chan = not the typical photography board.
These are great compositionally, but I think fiddling around with them in levels would really help. They're still great photographs, though.
>>56734and>>56734are the best; I see no problem with them other than the thing with levels.>>56735is a genuinely wonderful photograph.
>>56733would have been better if you had taken a step or two in the guy's direction, or if you cropped off the space to the side of the girl. Too much empty space. Also, if you could have been able to get the girl leaning at just a little bit less of an angle.
>>56737would be better if you took a step or two back, to frame their heads against their bodies a bit more.
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