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Critique moi! OiD
I need some opinions on a few pictures i've taken

*Prepares for /p/ critique D:*
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>> OiD
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Agbar tower

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>> OiD
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Wanted a slow shutter, but not this slow :/

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>> OiD
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Crappy car shot of some mysterious construction.

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>> Anonymous
Work on framing and remembering the rule of thirds.
>> OiD
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Flash came in handy :o

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>> OiD
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Devils bridge, interesting legend behind it.

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>> Anonymous
>>174424
go reshoot this place!
>> OiD
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>>174425
Definitely need that yeah :\

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>> OiD
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>>174431
That is my intention next time i visit, hopefully i'll be walking and not driving. Loads of odd buildings.

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>> reinfected !ow2gJBhuig
>>174419
Generic boring shot is boring.
>>174421
I like it but only kinda. I have a feeling of wanting something more from it but I'm not sure what.
>>174422
Centered point of interest = generally bad.
>>174424
Go 'sploring inside. Looks interesting. Shot though...blah.
>>174426
Another boring shot is boring.
>>174428
Point of interest is too centered. Plus boring
>>174433
This need a good cropping. The car HUD needs to go. If you do that, I think you'd have a nice photo.
>>174435
Meh. Try cropping the people out on the bottom maybe.I dunno.
>> Anonymous
>>174426
Flash did nothing for this. It's a hill. Your flash has no effect on a hill in bright sunlight.
>> Anonymous
I'm not even going to read other critiques, I'm just giving you my honest opinon.
>>174419
Quite good. Strange contrast/color on the bottom of the picture, but nice framing
>>174421
Excellent, I think. It's just a nice semi-abstract pattern photo, which is good.
>>174422
Not sure why you used the long exposure, but other than that it's decent.
>>174424
Pretty bad, with the car, streetlight, and trees in the way. Doesn't look interesting in the least.
>>174426
No, the flash didn't come in handy at all. I don't see any reason to use it, it adds nothing.
>>174428
Incredibly boring framing, no real subject, poor exposure, just bad bad bad. We don't know about the 'legend'.
>>174433
From inside the car? Really? When do those ever look good. Not in this case at least.
>>174435
Poor crop/framing, not really interesting.

Overall good stuff, but you went downhill fast.
>> Anonymous
>>174435
I love this building. I wish they would complete it this century though.
>> Anonymous
Thanks /p/ Still have a long way to go :3
>>174451
>>174455
Actually I could'nt get the grass in without over exposing the sky, Is there another way?

Thanks again!
>>174469
Pff... If they ever do, many ppl say it wont last long with the AVE going under it.
>> Anonymous
>>174627
>Actually I could'nt get the grass in without over exposing the sky, Is there another way?
Protip: don't worry about the goddamned grass. It's just grass. It means nothing. It's fine if it's wildly underexposed. To be honest, the picture isn't that great anyways, and the sky seems to be your subject. It's actually being taken down a notch *because* the grass is more visible with the flash.
>> Anonymous
>>174426

oh lawd is dat sum windows desktop background?
>> Anonymous
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Bettar?

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>> Anonymous
>>175596

could benefit from a polarizer
>> Anonymous
>>175601
Yeah, i took it of and forgot it in the car :( real bummer
>> Anonymous
>>175596

this pic need lens flare, i feel it. still cant hear it. halp