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Anonymous
Comment and critique, please. Ignore the dust particles, I take terrible care of my negatives.
>> Anonymous
Hunched over, boring colors, unattractive face
>> Anonymous
her head doesnt look like it belongs? looks like a shoop.

EXIF?
>> Anonymous
>>145734


>I take terrible care of my negatives.
>> Anonymous
>>145736
yeah i didnt read the entire thing until after i posted that
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
Her hair is... unfortunate. It makes her look like she's piled three or four wigs on top of her head. This could probably be helped somewhat by having her tilt her head at a different angle.

I agree with the "She looks too hunched over" comments. Also, you've clipped off a sliver of her back and knee, which bugs me for some reason.
>> Anonymous !sAGEr9FFjw
reminds me of that exploding girl from cloverfield
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
photo almost works.
like ac said, position .. angle of head and slight framing issue
otherwise it would've been a nice shot
lens choice is nice