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Needs moar exif. Quit pulling from your flickr account.
>>223204 I'm a wide-angle fag. I really love to shoot like... 14-40mm for events and landscape and even portraiture. Colors are really great in this shot. Is that a rainbow in the upper-left corner or some kinda weird spectral cro-mab shit? Might be my monitor, but this looks a little too dark, might wanna bump exposure in post-processing. You really captured the "big sky" feeling common with these kinds of wide-angle shots, but now try something with a more prominent subject in the foreground. Rows of flowers are really a nice touch too, shows you were thinking about repetition and lines with your composition, but it's a shame they're not leading us to anything (like the tree). That would've been perfect. Great shot though.
>>223205 Great angle, I love to see it when somebody's actually getting on the ground or trying something different. I know you're thinking, "OMG, composition," but this would really be much better if you cropped out the left 2/3's of the photo. There is NOTHING interesting going on over there. Don't give us 2/3's of nothing and then say, "Lol, rule of thirds!" You're doing it wrong. However, lighting's great on your subject. Try to get a little closer though.
>>223207 While I don't hate this as much as the rest of /p/ will, I feel that that this scene had so much more potential. Are you in a car? Get out of it and take this horizontal, straight on against the graffiti'd wall, umbrella in lower-right thirds (just as an example). Point is, the diagonal slash of nothing doesn't do anything for me. However, the lights are great and this is the perfect exposure for this shot. If you got on the ground and shot up at the umbrella and wall and got some of that "floating lights" look, it'd be great. I love how your exposure makes it seem as if the wall just ends into nothingness.
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