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Anonymous
Photoshoot in an abandon house the other day.
thoughs?
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>> Anonymous
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>> Anonymous
get more light on the face, thati s where os much of a person's character is.
>> Anonymous
not too bad, your composition is alright
but the model looks a bit tired or bored
>> Anonymous
First one is good. Second one doesn't feel good at all, I don't like the placement of subject and angle sucks too.
>> Anonymous
Overall, I think the model is very interesting but that t-shirt is very distracting. I really don't like the hourglass either, because it is also distracting.

The first photo is interesting, but as I said drop the hourglass. I like her expression and the capture of her eyes. I like how her expression is blank, it's like she's showing us something.

In the second one you reeeaaalllly need to not use that angle, it's extremely overused and the only reason it looks good with most photographs is because the model is photoshopped to all hell.

I really like how the lighting plays with her hair.
>> Choamsky
The first shot is great. Nice and sharp and good detail on the hands. I think she should be a bit more in frame, as she really is the focal point, so she should take up a bit more space.
>> Anonymous
I want to see more of the house.