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c&c 50 øre !!NM5mwCa2Qiu
hi /p/, c&c please. be picky.
shot with a 400D (rebel xti afaik), 17-40mm f/4.0L and studio light. photoshopped as well.

please be rude and picky with the critique
>> Anonymous
i like it
>> Anonymous
its a picture of a girl sitting against a lovely moody backdrop with lots of white around. oh and she has a hat!
>> Anonymous
I kinda like it.
>> Anonymous
get rid of the white border.
>> Anonymous
The way that the back of the girl is lost into a rather oddly squared off shadow looks strange
>> Anonymous
>>271273
what this dude said.

I can almost imagine her fat. I want to be able to see her back.
>> Honest So You Dont Have To Be !9UISPtwBPo
I like it, but there should be no shadow under her leg, it takes away from the whole idea of the shot, if you are going to have shadow showing there is a seat/wall there, you should have detail showing it around the whole frame
>> 50 øre !!NM5mwCa2Qiu
thanks for the feedback

the way her back disappears in a square which doesn't fit with the original, that was unintentional but the shot was not done as well as i was hoping, so that seemed like the only solution at the time. i'll try to see what i can salvage, so you can see her back as well. there's nothing of her outside of the frame, so she's not really fat, no. ; )

i'm not sure about the shadow, i'll try a different edit tomorrow where i remove the shadow. in a way i sort of like it because it gives the illusion of her really sitting on the edge of the picture, or frame if you want.

still, i'll do some re-edits tomorrow, thanks for the feedback /p/
>> Anonymous
it sucks ass
imagined body silhouette is wrong because of your cropping and merging of shadows and ass. gotta make her sitting on negative space. so her ass would pop out.

shadows suck donkey ass. not realistic at all. even if you negativespace'd the photo, right foot is still on higher grounds. work it accordingly.

original photograph is nice. except it could use more shadow detail.
>> Anonymous
lol norfag and tripfag
>> Anonymous
Is she leaning or sitting on or against that rectangle, if she's sitting on it then the perspective is screwed + what is her right foot on? Getting rid of the black corner behind her would fix the problem. Blokey was right about the shadows if we're being picky.
>> 50 øre !!NM5mwCa2Qiu
>>271287

the shadows are the real ones actually, just limited them. understand what you mean though. higher grounds, not exactly sure what you mean there, sorry--not native english speaker. as i said earlier though i'll try and salvage her ass tomorrow. ;p

>>271290
combo!

>>271381
she's leaning, there's a flipped table behind her. i'll try and fix the corner tomorrow. her right foot is on the table she's sitting on actually.

thanks again for the feedback, will re-edit tomorrow. i got plenty of time on this though, it's for an exhibition/series which is not due until late spring/early summer. school project, last year in high school i think you americans'd call it, the year when you're 18/19 anyhow.