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beethy !vW/UaE6zYU
/p/,

I tried to do a remake of a drawing (of one of my favorite artists)
I thought it was something new and interesting to try out.
.....I spent ages trying to get the right shot and shooping it to match the drawing.
But... after hours of revising and revising I'm still not content with it.
Critique me to shit on this one.

It's based on this drawing.
http://betteo.deviantart.com/art/pure-67373945
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>> else !L6xabslN96
>>237115
/p/ - Photoshop

thx to beethy.
>> Anonymous
Looks alot better than the drawing :P
>> Anonymous
I think you did a pretty good job considering how tricky it must've been.
It's a little too photoshopped but I don't know how you could have done it any other way, sorry.
>> Anonymous
id shoop it less. maybe use a red light instead of doing the red in ps (i assume you shooped the red)

unless your going for an exact replication instead of just like replicating an idea
>> NatureGuy !se3A3TwzdY
did you remember to color match?
http://www.unfocusedbrain.com/projects/match_color/

the red shadow on the breast bothers me as does the black border, but that may be part of replication goal?
>> beethy !vW/UaE6zYU
>>237342
I actually did use a red light.. haha. It's not shooped in.

>>237343
Damn, I'll try that. Totally forgot .. haha
>> beethy !vW/UaE6zYU
>>237343
tried it.. didn't really work.. just made everything really blue no matter what i did with the sliders.
>> Anonymous
>>237359
oh really? i guess her chest area threw me off. good job none the less by the way
>> beethy !vW/UaE6zYU
>>237383
yep.. the light was on the left side of me slightly in front of me resting on a chair.
>> Anonymous
Whats the drawing
>> beethy !vW/UaE6zYU
>>237415
http://betteo.deviantart.com/art/pure-67373945
>> Anonymous
She needs to turn her body to the camera more.
>> Anonymous
Looks like shit compared to the artwork.

Who were you using for a model?
Doesn't look like Long Nip Wong for once.
>> ilkore !!rybbb5OcRVp
>>237115
i think it's fantastic.. i love the different tones in this, and i think you complimented the original quite well!
>> Anonymous
>>237872
>Ooooh beethy, i love your cock--- i mean picture! slurp slurp slurp!
>> Anonymous
your drawing is shit, stick to photography. the photo is quite good.
>> Anonymous
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>>238360

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>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
I like it, although I think the model is trying a little too hard to get her mouth to match the awkwardly-drawn version.
>> Anonymous
>>238360

read the original post you retard, "I tried to do a remake of a drawing (of one of my favorite artists) "

good shot at it mate, nice one
>> Anonymous
>>239125

read the original post you retard, "I tried to do a remake of a drawing (of one of my favorite artists) "
>> beethy !vW/UaE6zYU
>>239125
Actually, it didn't match at all at first. I shooped it to match it more. Maybe that's where it fucked up.

>>239286
Thanks
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
>>239525
Ahh.

Yeah, don't do that.