One of my keepers from vacation last week w/ the wife. D40 and an SB-800.I wish the light was a little more directional, but the D40 can't command and I haven't purchased a cord or ebay triggers yet.
I can't put my finger on it but somethings just not right here....besides the vignetting.
She seems a little too bright for the background and her facial expression is odd.
it looks like shes standing infront of a backdrop.
this is not enough vignetting
nice light and general ideavery weak composition
that really does look like a backdrop
heyis your wife single?
meter for the background and light her with the flash maybe it would help