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>>249804
Dosnt rly work....
Poor composition, the lines lead in, but the background lines slope down, almost back to the first leading lines.... just dosnt work, and feels very forced.
>>249805
Very insta art... but i like the dog there (is it a dog.... looks like a wolf!)
Could have done more, but this scene is nothing without the dog, and am guessing itn ever stood there for long, so good snapshot, but not much more.
>>249809
I like this one, unusual perspective to be shooting from, An i like the distortion youve got from shooting so wide.
>>249811
YES!! Very nicely done, my only problem is the foreground, while these shots do benefit from foreground interests, this one is FAR to strong, drop it into photoshop, and soften it up, blur them a bit.... that will improve it if done right..
While your there work on the colors, aswell, i want to see the lovely rich blues and greens!
>>249813
No.. just no :P
Bokeh dose not work well with these types of shots, never has done, never will.
>>249815
Its half a horses head....
Youve got a nice subject, then destroyed it :P, learn from this mistake!
>>249817
Holiday snap shot, nothing more... (I never knew ireland had art in the style of Grim Fandango)
>>249820
Close, but no...
That wall is far to strong, and destroys what could have been a nice shot, the path should have slowly lead the eye in, not "BAM WALLL!!", but its a good holiday capture for you.
>>249822
Nah, Not enough going on
>>249823
has a nice "old style" feel to it....
As i said in my other post... work on your processing, you need stronger blacks and whites..
>>249826
Already commented :P
>>249829
Holiday snapshot..
All in all, not bad...
You seem to understand the basic rules of composition, which is good, and rear of D40 users, keep at it and you will improve.
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