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Anonymous
C & C
>> Anonymous
I like the tone, and the composition overall.

Some of the window's background is sligthly discracting for me, I'd crop it out. Same for the small lights on the ceiling.
>> Anonymous
looks nice but burn the top right corner
>> Anonymous
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There's some C&C.

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>> Anonymous
Nice picture. Personally I don't like the tone at all, but I can understand why others would. Some of the trees or bushes behind the window make the reflection of her chin pretty ugly, it looks like she has a beard or deformed skin. This is also caused by the fact it is in black and white, in color, you'd obviously see it's from something different. (Wouldn't make it less distracting, though.)
I'm not quite sure what to think of her 'smile'. It looks like she's smiling, but it looks a bit forced. The lights in the upper left corner are rather distracting. Was this posed, or was this a shot you just happen to see?
Next time, I suggest you do not take the picture from eye-level. You can see that you, the photographer, are a little taller then your subject. This causes on a slight over-head shot. Next time, I suggest you get down on your knees. This would make the pose a lot more dramatic, and would've got her face reflection over the sky in the window, that would've made it less distracting then it is now.
6/10
>> Anonymous
>>206666
Music Factory?
>> Anonymous
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I don't like the reflection, and the UFO in the background distracts a little.

Otherwise, pretty sweet.