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Pictures from my class this quarter that just ended.
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>> M?e?e?s?e??? !iZn5BCIpug
Reposted photos are reposted
>> Anonymous
>>212986
this is still a terrible page lay out.
if you did well on this then your teacher is an easy grader.
it is horrible and would be rejected from any magazine.
>> Anonymous
>>212984
this is also totally terrible
the red text is too close to the color of her hair.
and no cover looks like this ever.
it is missing much information from a cover.
and a lot of the text blends in to her jacket and the background.

look at covers of actual magazzines.
they do not look like this at all.

C+ at best.
>> Anonymous
These are excellent. Probably the best set I've seen on /p/ since 4ever.
>> Anonymous
>>212989
Oh sorry, I didn't realise you were god.
>> Anonymous
>>212970
lol copyright infringement

>>212976
>>212977
>>212979
>>212980
>>212986
I like these a lot. Nice work.
>> Anonymous
>>212997
whats so wrong about it?
>> Anonymous
>>213089

Not the same anon as before, but I felt compelled to respond.

You've not justified your text.
Rule of Thirds.
Some of the reflection on the water makes the text harder to read.

There are 3 things to think about.
>> Anonymous
>>213089
>whats so wrong about it?

it does not look at all like a real magazine layout.
it looks like someone who just learned how to use photoshop put some text on top of a picture.

go look at a real magazine some time they do not look like that.
>> Anonymous
>>213106
These were for a photography class, not a graphic design class. But I can probably say I can do better graphic design than you can do photography.
>> Anonymous
>>213175

LOL!!!!!!
yeah good one.
i have been doing graphic design professionally for over 10 years.
newspaper layout, book design, exhibition design, product design, you name it.

some of your photos are very good (especially the exterior/interior shots of the model home) but your graphic design is horse shit and your model photography is not very good either.
>> Anonymous
>>213178
As I said, this wasn't a graphic design class. It was a commercial photography class. One of the assignments was to make a magazine cover and a 2-page spread.
>> Depressed Cheesecake !vEawx7Krcs
>>212970

Worst picture of the Eiffel tower I have ever seen.
Did you shoot this with a fucking Kodak Easyshare camera?
Because that's what it looks like.
>> Anonymous
>>213390
You faggot. I think it looks great. Why don't you fly over there to take some shots and add your extreme vignetting?
>> Anonymous
>>213393

butthurt eurofag op

what is it like being from such a failcountry, france-fag?
the world laughs at your "culture" and hates you even more than they hate the usa.
you are the toothless crack whore of the world.
>> Anonymous
>>213393
wrong tripcode is wrong. Lurk moar
>> Anonymous
>>213390
After all this time, I was one of the few anons who was nice to DC and actually gave good, lengthy, constructive criticism to. I rarely rage or troll on /p/ and actually add some good input. I'm nice to newfags with shitty photos and try to help them improve without the usual "Shitsux."

I thought I was helping out the /p/ community, but it looks like some tripfags never change. You better be trolling, DC. You're just starting to get up to this anon's caliber. Enjoy your Aperture Priority mode and pattern metering.

Oh, and maybe turn down the exposure on that Eiffel tower pic, OP. We're losing some of the detail in the building and between lights because of how blown some of it is.
>> Anonymous
>>213390

Oh, come on DC, look at the exif, EOS 5D, you of all people should know about using professional equipment. :P

But wait... is that his tripcode?
>> Anonymous
>>213400
Here. God I hate needing to memorize tripcodes. Nevermind.
>> Anonymous
>>213400
Generic shot. Blown highlights. C+

>>212971
Blurry people wreck the scene, but excellent exposure. B+

>>212975
Generic, though technically good. B-

>>212976
Oversaturated sky, but otherwise flawless. A-

>>212977
Too heavy on the warm tones, but otherwise flawless. A-

>>212980
>>212979
Marketable interior shots, but nothing special. Solid B

>>212986
>>212984
Awkward poses, generic layout. C-

>>212987
Technically flawless example of real estate photography. A
>> Anonymous
DC can suck my dick. I like OP's shot of the Eiffel tower, it's honestly one of the better shots of it that I've seen in a long time. I bear no hatred for his country, either. I like that picture, even if it's a little overexposed. I feel the colored sky, rather than a pitch black one, really adds to it.

About the graphic design, I will honestly have to agree with anon up there. It isn't the best that can be done with the picture. I feel it reads somewhat awkwardly, and the shot could have been taken in other ways.

>>212977
>>212979
>>212980
>>212975
>>212971
>>212970
These are well done. I don't like the model shots too much however.

Just my 2c, op. Take the constructive criticism and ignore the trolling faggotry.
>> Anonymous
About the magazine pictures...

The cover:
Yeah warm red is a nice flashy color and you feel good as soon as you see it. But it clearly doesn't work here and it's making the thing hard to read because of her hair color etc. The white text is also hard to read and the ELLE headline that goes behind her head on the first L but in front on the second looks awful. I'd try a light yellow font.

The spread:
The text is once again hard to read, especially in the lower right corner when its over the water reflections. You should have placed it higher up or blurred the right side of the spread.
>> Anonymous
>>213400
>>213390
>>213393
>>213403
obvious fucking samefag = cancer killing /p/
>> Anonymous
>>212986
MAN THE HARPOONS!
>> Anonymous
>>213427
>>213424
0/10
>> Anonymous
OP here. I live in the USA. I was in France during Spring break and took the Eiffel Tower shot for the class.
>> Anonymous
>>212971
The people ruin this shot. If you could go back and shoot it again, have them stand still but look like they were moving while you took the shot. It would have made the shot amazing.
>> Anonymous
>>213424

DEPRESSED CHEESECAKE DETECTED
>> Anonymous
>>213448
You mean the motion blur ruins the shot? I think it looks neat. The shot is along exposure, and having crystal-clear people would seem out of place.