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>>54705 I agree that you should have focused on the tip of the gun, and had slightly more DoF to include all of it.
I like the amount of focus on the girl, though. Don't increase it. The bokeh on whatever lens you're using is really great, so contrary to>>54710I can make out the shape of every part of her visible body just fine.
>>54707 The small depth of field is really, really distracting, and the lens was doing something funky with all those weird overlapping circles.
Also, some color correction might be in order.
>>54708 I'm sure you know this, since you just called it "decent," but it lacks energy, which is the thing that makes a street shot work or not.
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