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Anonymous
Hey /p/, remember me from a few days ago?

I think I've got a keeper. What do you think?
>> Anonymous
looks shooped to hell
>> Anonymous
>>125910
i couldnt put my finger on it till you said that, something was just wrong with the lighting and shit
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
cool shot, OP!

However, I'd make the contrast less dramatic and the skin tones less pink.
The composition is lovely
>> Anonymous
>>125917

>beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
>I'd make the contrast less dramatic

Hacker, get out of Beethy's account.
>> Anonymous
OP here.

>>125916
Nah, lighting is natural, I didn't change anything at all lighting-wise. Changed levels/contrast, and did a couple low-opacity changes (5% sumi-e shading, 7% waterpaper) on the background to make the model stand out. Those are the only things I edited about the image.
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
>>125924
ahh cool, but yea.. fix them skintones :]
>> Anonymous
>>125909

The model looks too detached from the background.

Perhaps darken the background a little bit to bring them closer together.
>> Anonymous
You're getting there, the face looks a bit blurry.
>> Anonymous
She looks like she was shooped onto the background.
>> Anonymous
I don't think it looks natural having the model look out of the side of the frame rather than into it, especially with her already being positioned to the extreme right.
>> Mullenkedheim !ZD4Ay8nWso
>>126008
Agreed. I feel like, "Hey, what's she looking at? What's over there? Oh, the close window button. Yup, good idea lady!" <click>
>> Anonymous
I think this would be a lot better if she was looking toward the middle of the picture, and if the background was shooped less/the chick was shooped like the background

right now it just looks like you just copied and pasted her onto that picture and didn't even do a good job of it