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Jim
Hey /p/, looking for some critique/criticism on this one. It's a little tribute to Douglas Adams' Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy. I have the feeling most of you will dislike it, but the only comments I've had on it so far are positive and I need some real critique.
>> Jim
OP here.

Yeah I've been struggling to get a good shot of this thing since I was a freshman (it's a pretty recognizable landmark at my college), and this is about the closest I've come. I still don't think I really like it all that much though.

About the text, the last part of that quote is "I always thought there was something fundamentally wrong with the universe", but I couldn't exactly get it in the shot.he idea is that within conventional architecture they did it ALL wrong.

Thanks for the input though, lines up somewhat with what I had expected.
>> Anonymous
>>135136
yeah, no one is going to get that unless you tell them. youre trying too hard to make things fit.
>> Sicko !L3HRY/miC.
>>135136
Well then why didn't you use that part of the quote?
>> lrf !xi8/JKFwzo
Th wall on the right, is very distracting?
>> Anonymous
>>135136
I dunno, maybe go on the other side where the bike racks aren't and lie on the ground...though I'm not sure...

climb up on the roof too.
>> Falldog !2qYdimqiHs
I think the building in the background is more distracting. It just seems out of place with respect to all the brickwork.

& Don't mind people not getting the quote. It's not really that important.