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shot for my photojournalism class

assignment was a pictorial
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>> Anonymous
op:

caption: A student leaves the Founder's Wall on his way back to his dorm at Soka University on Novemeber 2, 2008. Soka University, located in the hills of Aliso Viejo, is able to run and grant generous scholarships primarily because of donations.
>> Anonymous
Caption should tell me what the founder's wall is.

The blurb on their website isn't a bad place to start: http://www.soka.edu/page.cfm?p=181

Would have liked a shot of the actual wall and student, instead of OMG REFLECTIONS, which do nothing to make it obvious what I'm looking at. I looked at the picture, thought wtf am I looking at, looked at the caption and went, wtf is the founder's wall. I don't think that should happen.

What is the headline for the story/what is it about exactly?
>> Anonymous ­
OP, when i look at the photo i see alot of potential that you did not harnace. the situation is obviously awesome, but there is something awkward about the composition of the curve.
>> Anonymous
>>286968
seconded, you shouldn't have included the curve at all maybe tried to move across to exclude it
>> else !L6xabslN96
>>286962
> I looked at the picture, thought wtf am I looking at, looked at the caption and went, wtf is the founder's wall.

founder's wall = wall with all the founders of the university engraved in it.

but you're right, the reflection isn't clear enough to balance out the composition. a shot of the entire wall, student and their reflections would've been better. and given it some context.
>> Anonymous
>>286968
>harnace
is this a new word I haven't heard of? i think you meant harness
>> hinks !qIKW3I8bLQ
i work for the paper

we would never use something like this, 1 no faces, two what the fuck kind of crop is that, 3, this picture tells me nothing, its a guy fucking walking on a puddle?

i mean seriously
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
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>>287225
That description sounds familiar...
>> Anonymous
bad crop. don't crop at a subject's joints... it looks awkward.