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Anonymous
besides the text and other stuff how is the picture? im noob this is my first time posting here so please be gentle anon.

any tips to make the picture better?

i shot it 400 iso with the stock lens and at i think 4.0 fstop shutter was at 25 the raw is reallll blurry as it is here im sure too but i didnt want the whole flash in my face thing.
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>> Anonymous
op here

lol i didnt even know that exif thing does it automatically so i guess its at 4.5
>> Anonymous
Did you make this ad?
>> Anonymous
yes i was bored though nothing serious lol
>> Anonymous
The picture is a little underexposed and the guy's face could be more centered, since this is an ad. A crop and a few adjusts on PS would make it perfect.

I lol'd in the "it also takes kick ass bathroom profile pictures for Myspace"
>> Anonymous
ad needs to feature zOMG battery grip

extra sales and wannabe pro factor
>> Anonymous
I was trying to be as centered as I can in the pic but its so hard cus I wasnt looking in the viewfinder.

sorry to be noob but whats PS? thanks for the tips i didnt think of cropping it lol!
>> Anonymous
once i get a battery grip i shall return with another ad for it haha
>> Anonymous
PS = photoshop

yeah, crop some part of your left arm to center it. just keep proportions.

zOMG battery grip n' pro factor for extra sales would kick ass.
>> Anonymous
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Needs an eye-catching element that can be absorbed quickly. Then they read the copy. They get the message. You reiterate your eye-catcher at the end. Bam.

Incidentally, I like the photo, the exposure, and the color very much. This is really pleasant. You just needed a little better typography. I'd consider a revision of the copy, too, but I didn't feel like doing the shooping necessary for that. Original pic plox?
>> Anonymous
cool thanks for the replies guys
>> Anonymous
il post the original give me a sec il do some of the shoops i did with the wall so you wont have to :)
>> Anonymous
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heres the original with a bit of shoop to get the back nicer and some blemishes off the wall. other than that its a slightly higher quality.

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>> Anonymous
>>192956

why so much noise?
>> Anonymous
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^ it looks all weird im reposting with a smaller one maybe thats why.

heres a smoother one but smaller

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>> $19.99 !OSYhGye6hY
>>192959
what the noise!
>> Anonymous
jpeg artifacts?
>> Anonymous
either its my monitor or what but the smaller one to me looks like it has less noise. i shot it low light since it is in my bathroom lol but does anyone know a program or a way to get rid of noise without ruining the picture?
>> Anonymous
OHHH and my shitty dirty mirror too
>> Einta !!MWv3ICYobCM
>>192967
NoiseWare or Noise Ninja. I've heard good things about NoiseWare.

I use Noise Ninja. After calibrating (you shoot a test chart slightly out of focus once at each iso/one full set for jpeg, one full set for raw/tiffconv), it's pretty damn good.
>> $19.99 !OSYhGye6hY
>>192968
did you sharpen? might want to lay off a bit on the sliders.
>> Anonymous
do i calibrate for noiseware also?

javascript:quote('192970')

i did sharpen a bit
>> Anonymous
i fail i dont know how to do that

>>192968in red lol
>> $19.99 !OSYhGye6hY
>>192972
post the unedited.
Noiseware?
>> Anonymous
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im bored, so here is somewhat eyecatching
>> Anonymous
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i meant Noise Ware as the No.192969
mentioned.

< this is straight from my camera then batched into jpg.

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>> Anonymous
its so noisy cus

1: im noob
2: it was dark
3: i used 400 iso

and i dunno what else?
>> Anonymous
Only>>192956is noisy.

The rest is fine, OP.
>> Anonymous
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is this better centerwise?
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>> Anonymous
>>192995

hell yeah. a lot better.
>> Anonymous
>>192995

Try to increase the brightness a little bit.
>> $19.99 !OSYhGye6hY
>>192979
noiseninja is probably the best noise correction software, the noise reduction in lightroom is pretty good though.
>> Anonymous
>>193002

The noise reduction in Camera Raw is pretty decent too.
>> $19.99 !OSYhGye6hY
>>193005
>>193005
It's pretty much the same thing. Lightroom's modules are copy+pastes from bridge and photoshop.
>> Anonymous
>>192933

You still have a tag on your jacket.
>> Anonymous
>>193013

lol
>> Anonymous
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>>193013

damn you saw it lol

< heres it brightened but slightly by like +3

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>> Anonymous
>>193019

Try adding moar 3 or 4 brightness points and you're good to go.
>> Anonymous
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thanks for all the tips guys.

< here it is with 4 moar bonus points of brightness

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>> Anonymous
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I made it undeniably better.
>> $19.99 !OSYhGye6hY
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>>193073
sorry, this is way better.

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>> Anonymous
op here, u guys
>>193073
>>193078

hilarious
>> Anonymous
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>>193078
Yeah, well suck on this amazing display of win.
>> Anonymous
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Someone had to say it.....

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>> Anonymous
>>193089
Why yes, it is!
>> Anonymous
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>>192953

any better?

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>> Anonymous
>>193078

HOLY FUCKING SHIT!

IS THAT WHO I THINK IT IS!

ROFL!
>> Anonymous
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>> Anonymous
>>194274
Best yet !
>> Anonymous
>>194278
>>194278


LOL thanx .D
a bit bored
and his face makes me laugh every time :D
>> Anonymous
my favorite rebel ad is the one in the football stadium

a bunch of people with rebels and 18-55s

"take shots just like the pros!"

and they're all using popup flash, too. Fucking canfags.
>> Anonymous
>>194274
>>194274


LOL
>> Anonymous
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loldeviantart
>> Anonymous
>>194843
its like your, just amazing maaaaannn u should become a pro
/deviantart comment
>> Anonymous
>>194843

The watermark isn't obvious enough as I can still make out some of the image compared to dA's watermark and the edits aren't as EXTREME as they should be.
>> Anonymous
http://windsofcreations.deviantart.com/art/The-Ocularis-Infernum-pt9-85435220
>> Anonymous
>>195083

oh dear god...
>> Einta !!MWv3ICYobCM
>>195083
Gack. Why the chinbeards? If you can't grow a real beard/mustache, you shouldn't grow one at all, dammit. Also, looking exactly like all yours friends = fail.

Also: They need haircuts. And this is coming from someone with >>shoulder-length hair.