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Anonymous
model// me
music// System of a Down - Mesmerize album
piercings// fresh and very real

what does /p/ think?
>> Anonymous
eww what if those piercings get stuck on clothes
>> Anonymous
i think you should probably kill yourself
>> Anonymous
OMG CLOSE MINDED /B/ TARDS

Anyway, the posing is fine, although your posture looks a little strained, as though you're on your way to stand up.

Shadow work is excellent, and the placement of the necklace draws the eye perfectly down to your piercings, which, I might add, look wonderful on your body.

Leg placement and shadow is very provocative. Good work.

MOAR?
>> Anonymous
>>96358
1) this isnt /b/
2) not closed minded, just dislike shitty retarded piercings. the post is pretty bad, and either make it silhouette or dont. the highlights on the front of the face make me want to look there, but then its too dark. dont really like how your leg is out of the frame. just because youre a girl posting photos doesnt mean we like it. get out
>> Anonymous
Interesting piercings, and I like the light in the picture (although perhaps a warm light on the face would add greatly to the picture). The pose looks awkward, though, and the composition of the photo is quite horrible. I know it's hard when you set the camera on a timer, but please try a bit more.
>> Liquefied !!CF1+3tSFCce
>>96348
I can appreciate what you were trying to accomplish with the light quality which is nice but the pose is just too awkward. Also, backward necklace is weird and distracting.
>> Anonymous
lace up those piercings, and try to take the same photo to see what happens.
>> Anonymous
>>96367
yes sir, lace or ribbon, maybe think about some indoor lighting and a more natural pose
>> eku !8cibvLQ11s
Sometimes, it's hard to tell the difference between /p/ and /b/.

>>96348
Some more natural pose would do good. And lacing those piercings.
Light is like that quite nice.

Can we a photo from front, too?
>> Anonymous
I hope you're treating this set of corset piercings as play piercings... they VERY rarely heal and have a tendency to reject (even more so than navel piercings on those who don't have the proper anatomy for them)

are those surface bar piercings? sorry... the piercist in me is coming out
>> Anonymous
Photo is sexy, but I cringe whenever I see the piercings. They're not bad( and I might even argue that they add to the photo), but I still shudder to think of how much they could hurt.

Try a more natural pose( I know, I know, in after thousands of people say the same thing), but maybe something where you're standing kind of straight up and looking over your shoulder, like looking down to a kid behind you and on the ground, or something.

Other than that, I like it. The lighting from outside is fine, very clean and soothing. I think you should try to make the piercings look less scary( for lack of a better term).

Also, the necklace. Reverse it. I like the gem, but it's too fake, unfortunately.
>> Anonymous
Also, you're ridiculously pretty. Not like "ZOMG id fuck you lolol" but... "You're an excellent model" is what I guess I'm trying to say.
>> Anonymous
>>96414

desperate virgin is desperate
>> thefamilyman !!rTVzm2BgTOa
>>96424
this is 4chan remember
>> Anonymous
>>96414

yellow fever!
>> Anonymous
>>96424
>>96427
Probably, but I still think she's a beautiful woman. Maybe I'm biased after seeing cows and traps all the time, but she looks like a normal, attractive woman, and the piercings( while a little unnerving) add something intangible to the photo.
>>96426
You win for "truthiest post of the day"
>> Anonymous
OP here

thanks to the people who left nice comments :/
>> Anonymous !bs9fqRKKCM
yay piercings
>> Anonymous
It's a nice picture and I like the things the light is doing.

But I wouldn't do you.
>> Anonymous !MjcMqTX/iM
>>96508
Don't let it get you down. This IS 4chan after all. And somehow even /p/ can't seem to be mature.

Oh, and System of a Down sucks. (Nice picture btw)
>> Anonymous
>>96508
if all youre doing is fishing for nice comments, get the fuck out.
>> Anonymous
I think the pose looks a little weird, other than that I think it's a pretty nice picture.
Also - yay for piercings!
>> Jal
Well its nice. More focus on your face instead of you back would be nice. But I guess that tripod photos aint all that easy.
>> Anonymous
Your composition sucks . your pose is leading my eye out of the photograph and into oblivion.

if this was my gig

pull your legs together and put your right ass cheek on the window sill with your back and every thing else the same

this will center your body in the photograph more.
place slightly more opaque drapes or maybe natural canvas over the window behind your profile . crop your feet out if they are distracting .

don't give a shit about your hardware or music
>> Anonymous
>>96763

>>96763

Daaaaamn, tell it like it is man hahaha...

i do agree with the leg... both infact... they just look really awkward... the left leg on the chair.. that's just distracting...

she looks like a chicken.
>> Jeremo !iKGMr61IHM
>>96766

oops forgot the tripcode. that was me.
>> Anonymous
>>96848
no one cares about what people on your DA think. we dont fall for attention whores like everyone else does. now seriously, get the fuck out.
>> Anonymous
>>96848
Get off DA if you want to grow as an artist. The community's largely sycophants to anything "cool."

Hell, at least Flickr users are at least sycophants to anything with boobs.
>> elf_man !!DdAnyoDMfCe
>>96848
Are you dense? You asked for criticism, you're going to hear about where you can improve, not shallow flattery. And in case you didn't notice, there are some positive statements mixed in.
And telling us that devart likes it won't help. Around here, it's likely to get you flamed.
>> BlackAdder !!bSWRwu/NqzQ
>>96848

Oh dear. You really need to lurk more. That was not a clever thing to say.
>> Anonymous
Sounds like you wanted a bunch of guys to say "LOL UR HAWT LETS SEE BOOBS PLZKTHX". You came to the wrong place. We're trying to help you grow as an artist, not tell you how hot you are or how sexy your piercings are. You can GTFO.
>> Anonymous
>>96848

fuck off chink
>> Anonymous
>>96863
Fuck off, racist.
>> Anonymous
Actually, I think its great
>> Anonymous
OP, just one question: the piercings - why? For the love of God - WHY?
>> Vincent
The more I look at this picture the more I like it for some reason, Though those piercings confuse me.. How are they seated? Like what holds them in?

Also its nice to see some tasteful nudity (although a very subjective label) worked into photo's on here.
>> elf_man !!DdAnyoDMfCe
And, more on topic, I would love to see this shot reworked, as has been covered, and with those piercings laced up. This really does have potential, just needs more work.
>> heavyweather !4AIf7oXcbA
Wow. Hot. If those piercings float your boat, cool, but damn. Ow.

I must reiterate. Fucking hot.
>> sage sage
I see the starved virgins have arrived at last. OH WOW, IT HAS BOOBS AND A VAGINA!

The photo is shit. Sage.
>> Limones
I think that the picture is absolutely wonderful. Doesn't matter whether or not the piercings will be awkward or not, they only add to the picture, and if you like them, no one else matters. I love them. The pose is unusual, but shows off your legs nicely.

Also, S of a D rocks.
>> Jeremo !iKGMr61IHM
>>96863

As a Chink, if i ever see you i'll stir fry you in my wok.

>>96848

One thing you're really going to have to learn is to take criticism. There will never be anytime that EVERYONE likes your work. The people who offer only compliments with no criticisms are people you shouldn't take seriously.

As i typed this, the bottom of the photo was cut off, and the legs were showing... i like it much more now.

The posture of your torso is fine, like i said the awkward position of your legs make you look like a chicken or you trying to take a ...

Just do it over and come back.

Like most of us, the idea is there, but the execution takes a while to perfect.
>> Anonymous
I'd bet if a guy did this shot there wouldn't be nearly as much fawning or kind words. Sad.
>> Static
Excellent use of backlight for the contrast. There is too much space between the left border and your body though; possibly lean on arm? That might balance it a little better.
>> Vincent
>>96933
I think you would have a lot of trouble finding a guy that curvaceous. Also you are right, men do not want to be labeled as effeminate or homosexual, and appreciating another mans body is a good example of behavior that would be considered just that.
>> Limones
A few more thoughts, in retrospect. The one finger of your left arm visible alters the smooth curve of your shoulder and distorts the contrast between your silhouette and the curtains. Other than that, this pic is amazing as it is and everything, including my opinion, is more subjective taste than artistic improvement.
>> Anonymous
>>96947
Why would someone have to be curvaceous to pose like that? It's just kneeling, thrusting one's buttocks out, and crossing one's hands over the chest.
>> Anonymous
are you ogint to post this every day?...
any ways you legs ook weird it'd look better if you were sitting
>> Anonymous
going**
>> Liska !!LIVFOETqL8j
>>96348

not bad- pose is decent- but the light behind you still washes you out. Work on being a little more natural, if you can, so sitting in front of a window is a "normal" thing. I highly doubt you normally sit like that. Looks a bit awkward.

if you can, try to use the natural light to your advantage a little later in the evening. JMHO
>> Anonymous
>>97138
i think ive seen this post before
>> Anonymous
I think we permanently scared OP away
>> Anonymous
>>96865

fuck off chink
>> Anonymous
>>96928

fuck off chink
>> Anonymous
>>96933
Yeah, it'd be fucking disgusting if I saw a guy with piercings and shit in that pose.

OP, your pose is fucking ridiculous, but you don't look fugly like a lot of other people on 4chan, so take solace in the fact that you have potential. I liked
http://jullieit.deviantart.com/art/Piano-Thing-71238498
(As per the rules, I can't post the image or I'll be asking for a ban) but you uploaded this relatively shitty image.

As for DA, don't go both to 4chan and DA. If you want people to jizz all over everything you do no matter what, go to DA. If you want people to criticize your work perpetually for the tiniest details, come here to /p/ and we'll do just that. Personally, I think getting your work torn a new ass hole is more helpful because when you finally submit it to someone with real sense they'll just see something that has had a lot of refinement and work.

Tl;dr I've seen better work on your DA account. Either go to DA and live a a pathetic career out, or drop your bull shit with DA and accept that you're going to want to cry yourself to sleep after uploading some of your photos here.
>> Anonymous
who the fuck cares what music you were listening to? it's photography..
>> Anonymous
needs less attention whoring.
>> Anonymous
Oh lawd is dat a trap?
>> Anonymous
Personally I love the piercings. I'm huge into body modifications so I dig it, I hope you take them out though, corset piercings aren't worth the massive trouble to try and get them to heal(they almost never do), they're supposed to be treated as play piercings.

As for the photo, I like the lighting personally, but the arm and leg placements are way wonky. The skirt also seems sorta off.
>> Anonymous
I'd hit it, and I'd probably cuddle for like a week afterwards. And cook food and hit it again. And cuddle more
>> Anonymous
>>97763
Anon shows his softer side?
>> Anonymous
I'd tear her piercings out, wipe the dripping blood and pus on my dick and jam my lubed cock into her ass.
>> Anonymous
>>97763
Thats a trap strategy.