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Anonymous
>>282318
Shadows all over the kid and his clothing is underexposed, use a flashfill. Plus, tilt down a bit to fill the frame better, the headroom is uncomfortable.
>>282319
Same thing with headroom, plus 1/4000sec exposure time? Really? Decrease the aperture size and get a little more detail around the edges. Also, the sky is pretty white, maybe artificially edit it to a light blue.
>>282321
The point of the gun is killing me, get a better depth of field next time, you don't need to shoot at 1/320sec for such a still subject. I would've repositioned myself about a foot to the left and asked the kid to look my way, you'll get a better background without the white line at the left.
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