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Anonymous
honest critique please
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>> Anonymous
>>179064
I think the burning is a little overdone (the increased contrast in the gradients of her pantyhose and skin are too much), and her eyes and teeth look literally plastered on, like googley eyes. I also think the white-ish halo around her in the background detracts from the image, considering the dark green on the rest of the wall. Her pose also seems a little unnatural to me.
>> Anonymous
Smokin hot.
>> Anonymous
Doesn't look like a photo, too smooth and plasticy (which would be a case of over-shoopage).

Unless, of course, you were going for that look.
>> Butterfly !xlgRMYva6s
shot in 2006 with a 5D...
>> Anonymous
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thank you for your comments...
how about this one?

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>> Martin !!ve2Q1ETWmJH
>>179075
Love how the hair creates a shadow across 1 side of her face. Also the composition is rather interesting.
>> Anonymous
>>179075

Okay, good going with the composition. However, the in-focus background distracts me too much. If you can go to 5.1, then why were you at 5.6?

Maybe blur the background when shooping to distance it from your subject.