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>> Anonymous
too much photoshop but otherwise good
clothing selection is a bit strange, and the rail makes her bum look out of shape

lay off the blur and stop fucking up the eyes and I think its a solid picture.
>> Anonymous
>>291575
your fake DOF makes my eyes bleed.
girl needs to not slouch
go a bit more subtle on the eyes
AND VIGNETTE A BIT MORE MAYBE!!!! (sarcasm)

other than that not bad. way better than DC's forced shit.
>> Anonymous
Use your camera not photoshop.
>> Anonymous
>>291579
I agree. Too much postprocess. Learn how to not need to process, like ol'days.
Subject expression is too evident. The scenario is very dramatic and the subject should be te impersonation of that drama: so, no smile, no direct looking to the camera.
Work on it, it has good possibilites.
>> :3 anon
does she have a name? age?
ur friend? gf? eh eh eh?
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
>>291591
>Learn how to not need to process, like ol'days.
Pro Tip: postprocessing was not invented with Photoshop.
>> anon
>>291600
protip: stfu
>> anon
>>291609
true. i say u just get some nudes of her.
>> Anonymous
>>291614
That would be even worse cliched, but hey, tits.
>> Jeremo !iKGMr61IHM
not a fan of the overshopped eyes or the curve adjusted colours... it's honest to god no different than most of the teen 1337 fotografers on deviantart and flickr.

Just try something different.

YOU CAN DO IT!!!
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
>>291612
Yeah they did. Choosing their developer to get different contrast/graininess, dodging and burning, unsharp-masking in the old-school wise, hand toning, etc. Not as *many* people did it, because it was a hell of a lot harder, but a lot of people at the high end put a lot of work into their prints. Read up on Ansel Adams for an example.

Also, B in the D, some of the postprocessing that's more or less standard now with digital wasn't necessary. You didn't need to slap an S curve on the tones because film responded that way right out of the canister, for instance.

Not sure how much shopping is actually there, in any case. Aspect ratio and overall quality suggest a DSLR, which should be good enough to produce shallow DoF on its own. It might be full frame with a shitty lens on it with lots of falloff and blur at the edges. Or, as you say, it might be a vignette filter and too much gaussian blur.

(For the record: if it is 'shopping, I would prefer it without. I'm just saying that the idiots decrying postprocessing and pointing to the glorious manipulation-free past are just as wrong as the people in the early 1900s who decried postprocessing and pointed to the glorious manipulation-free past. Lrn2history.)
>> Anonymous
professional borkeh look
>> Anonymous
I see you are in Canada, OP?
>> Anonymous
protip: girls that have natural green eyes do not need them made blue.
>> Anonymous
i think you shooped the eyes, thats what i think.

shes cute, but shes not frodo.
>> Anonymous
i like it, the eyes are a bit over done and i am a big fan of vignetting but depending on where it is displayed i think it might be a bit much
>> i - !EoFJjFcCco
>Use your camera not photoshop.
this

Also, put some more effort and thought into working with your model and you would have something more interesting to show us.
>> Anonymous
i would destroy her pussy
>> Anonymous
1) Dont photoshop so much
1a) fuck you for the fake vignetting
1b) oversaturated to shit
1c) eyes look retarded
2) Get a model without cankles
>> Anonymous
incredibly juvenile
>> Anonymous
If you're gonna make a fake DoF dont make it so obvious.
Take off the shit on the eyes, holy god that looks horrible.
And tell that bitch to lose some weight.
>> Henri !!nmdoDIvoSAw
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>>291575
Bonjour, i like this photo, this young mademoiselle is very delicious je would like to "street photograph her", if you know what i mean...