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NatureGuy
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>>128261 hur hur hur you want a more formal critique for your lol WATERSDROPPINS??!?!
The focus is off and the noise is distracting.
Your poor use of flash has blown out a large section of the photo to true white for no artistic and compositional merit.
You've placed the only, somewhat in focus, subject slightly off center which is visually jarring and ruins any hope of proper eye movement destroying what little composition you had.
You have some lines leading to "interest" and some repetition of shape which I find highly doubtful to be purposeful on your part.
You have it in color when color doesn't play any roll for interest or composition.
The water drop itself is boring lacking detail that expected when you have such a small area of focus which could be remedied with proper use of positive and negative space.
There is an expectation of but lack of precise detail in where the water drop is exiting.
You have the image tilted for no one reason at all, further damaging your composition. Tilt should be used only in the most perfect of moments, not for attempts to create insta-art. Further if you tilt try to relate the corners more to subject creating better emphasis as that is often the only valid reason to tilt and should only be done when you can't do it in a normal view.
There's plenty more but I'm tired and going to bed.
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