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>> heavyweather !4AIf7oXcbA
The overall tone is too muddy, and there's little to no pure white. The background isn't doing anything for you, either.

Decent concept though, if a bit emo.
>> Anonymous
Background, AHG.
>> Anonymous
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>> linkiE !ei5A1FPDuk
>>161314
>>161319

Needs some white to punch
>> Anonymous
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>>161324
Not OP here

But more white added and hand made bigger for PUNCH

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>> Anonymous
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>>161353
cant say that i like that at all.

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>> Anonymous
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>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
I agree with the other comments. Needs more contrast. Too much gray throughout.

Also, the first shot would be better if it were in, say, a dark alleyway rather than just standing against a blank white backdrop.