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>>125553 1. Drop the pretentious title. Whether it's "non conformist orange terror" or "Tuesday, October 16, 2007, 8:16:26 PM, Target, 1154 S Clark St, Chicago, IL Reshelved Commodities" it's pretentious. "Reshelved Commodities" on its own worked, but nothing unique enough is happening in the photograph to make anyone care when or where you took it. In fact, how it could've been taken in any big box store, even the one five minutes from a viewer, would add to it if you hadn't specified.
2. Needs less noise. Usually noise or grain doesn't bother me, but it does here. Get a small quick-collapsing tripod if lowering the ISO would make your exposure too long to hand-hold, run in, do it, and get out.
Alternatively, shoot medium format film with a waist-level finder like Ulrich does. Or something that'll let you take a quick, surreptitious, non-noisy photograph.
Otherwise it's pretty good. Needs a little sharpening.
>>125560 Win for Ulrich.
>>125564 Lol Brian Ulrich on Flickr.
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