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>>238979 my eye is drawn to her tattoos and shape of her curves, but i feel like the photo is too far away to focus on those things. i think it would benefit by cropping the top and bottom >>238980 i remember seeing your work on velvia, but i think these shots just don't turn out the same on digital. the photo is good technically, maybe a little too shallow DOF, but the subject doesn't interest me. green leaves, one brown one, nice bokeh, the foreground almost blends into the background too much >>238981 same for this one - looks good technically, but not that interesting. very nice colors, but i keep thinking, "it's just some brown leaves." also the sunlight highlighting around the stems makes it look a little funny, almost artificial >>238983 too much sky in my opinion. especially for black and white, it's all grey and not interesting. the boats aren't bad, but wishing there was more to it. were the boats colorful? maybe better in color. i'm thinking a scene like this is colorful and bright and fun, summer day, but it's kind of depressing with that much grey sky. >>238984 the texture and angle are sort of interesting on this one, but i wish there was actually more detail in the wood. shadows on the left make me want to move out of the way to see it more clearly in direct light. >>238985 this one is more interesting to me - nice red fruit, green out of focus background. wish there was a little more light on the fruit, plus maybe a little bit more DOF, some of the highlights are out of focus, and the green ones aren't sharp either. >>238987 the leaf with all the holes is a little more interesting, but otherwise, see>>238980
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