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Anonymous
Hey /p/!

Got a pic i need some criticism of...

I know its not very good, but i suck, so for me its ok :P

Wich version is better... or how can it be improved?? open to all tips and ideas? Am a noob lol

Version one - Unaltered
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>> Anonymous
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Version Two - Dulled the skin tone a little (to orange in first one for me lol), and added a small vignette to stop the background been distracting..

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>> Anonymous
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Version Three - Same as Version Two but with a monochrome - orange filter slapped on it for the obligatory B&W version....

So /p/, your thoughts?

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>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
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ITT old people read newspapers.

My only real criticism is that you should have framed slightly downwards so as not to cut off their feet. I like version 2 best.

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>> Anonymous
>>170973

Thanks for input!

And yeah should have shot there feet in it... Am still new to this :P, so still shooting what i see to quickly without thinking of the picture itself
>> Anonymous
i like the black and white one, but i would adjust the contrast! MOAR CONTRAST!!!!