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Butterfly !xlgRMYva6s
Sup /p/

I've not posted anything from france yet even thoguh I was there ages ago, just not really had time to process anything.

Tear me appart.
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>> Anonymous
sage for butterpost
>> Anonymous
age for photothread.

post more plz
>> Butterfly !xlgRMYva6s
>>268480
I dont have any more to post atmo, most of the weather was overcast so nothing really came out nice.
>> Anonymous
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My opinion only.

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>> Anonymous
>>268491
you couldnt take any more fucking pics of the girl at the arc!? fucking fail
>> Butterfly !xlgRMYva6s
>>268505
Crop it yourself then.

>>268515
Not when I only had my 50, i didnt notice she was there till after i took the shot.
>> Martin !.CzKQna1OU
It's alright, looking forward to seeing the rest
>> Anonymous
in during lolsony
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
If your pictures aren't interesting enough, you're not close enough.

This could've been a good shot if you weren't standing a mile away from the subject.
>> Butterfly !xlgRMYva6s
>>268732
The subject is not the little girl but the building built into the mountainside.
>> Anonymous !SDPEsPMnww
>>268732If your subject isn't obvious enough, you're not good enough.

fix'd
>> Anonymous
>>268670

I'm>>268505

What's with this faggotry?
>>Tear me appart.

That's what you said. If you can't handle it, then don't ask for it.

If the building is the subject, not the girl, then the point stands. You did such a terrible job making the building the subject everyone thought the girl was the subject you aimed at.

There's so much crowding out the building that you can't focus anywhere, the sky is so random and distracting, the bottom is useless., the right side is totally obstructing the photograph.

It would have been better if you 1) got closer to the girl, or 2) shot the building from a differnet angle, or closer to it.

What the fuck? You wanted criticism. Whatever.
>> Jesus !1EQ.kCAg9c
>>268733
There's a bit too much distracting background/periphery stuff, it draws the eye away from the admittedly sweet mountain building. Also the little girl in the frame (as well as the angle) makes it look too much like "I was walking around with a tour group and this looked nice"
>> Butterfly !xlgRMYva6s
>>268829
Thats actual constructive critisim, what you did before was just gibberish that could have easily been expressed better like you just did.

I'll have a look at a tigher crop, but id still like it if you could do one as well.
>> M?e?e?s?e??? !iZn5BCIpug
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>> Anonymous
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>> Vincent !!8LCSE0Zp1mL
Butterfly post some more stuff, france is sweet, lots of potential there, I'm curious as to what else you shot / where you went.
>> Anonymous
The girl ruins it, IMO, she's out of place. Another person might've helped, but this particular person wearing those particular clothes in that particular positions ruins a picture I otherwise would really like.

Try seeing if convincingly clonestamping her out is possible.
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
>>268733
>The subject is not the little girl but the building built into the mountainside.
Mmmmm....no it isn't. The composition of this shot makes the building into setting rather than subject. Especially with the girl there--she draws the eye and basically forces herself to be the subject. If you want the building to be the subject, you're going to need a better angle, better lighting, and fewer distracting elements.

>>268757
>If your subject isn't obvious enough, you're not good enough.
Hit the nail on the head.