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Thanks, I'm no good at seeing those things based on the photo. But now that you explained it, I understand how you got that lighting effect. The dramatic lighting works, I think, given the comic book feel you're aiming for.
My only gripe is not on a technical level, but in that she dres the sword upside down which doesn't link to the next pictures where she is holding it properly. I'd reshoot that with the blade positioned properly.
Other than that, while I understand you were going for dramatic effect, the shot of the sword and club is jarring from a logical point. had the sword hit the club like that, it would end up sliding up and cutting the person regardless. Do you get what I mean? How you can make it logical while looking obvious and dramatic, I don't know. I'm a shitty photographer, it's just my observations as a newbie.
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