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Syphilis !SC5mMmABng
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Can I get a critique please?

How can I improve
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>> Mr. Higgzbuffonton !!Xsltv1VWxZT
>>236521
seems like you're still upping some, but let me just slip in that this one could use way more DOF.. at first I thought it was out of focus because of the guy.
>> beethy !vW/UaE6zYU
>>236526
this is the only one i like... the composition is really pleasing.
the others don't hold my interest for too long and the subjects don't work for me. they're just too snapshotty
it's tricky using a long lens and shooting spontaneous shit, the fact that you got one pretty nice shot is great
>> Anonymous
>>236521
Framing sucks. It looks like they are struggling to keep in the frame. Colors too dull. It would be nice to bring out the hair for these people.

>>236523
Other than lolgay, the lighting isn't very even. One of them is brought out more and the other is dulled down. You'd want to keep balance for an intimate shot like this. Composition is rather cramped and the aspect ratio is uncomfortable.

>>236525
Nice DOF, colors and good lighting on the face but the out of focus arm in the background is distracting. Shoop it out.

>>236526
This one's nice but the girl should either be not there or in focus. Would be nice if it were just a bit wider to give his collar more room and more distance from his hair to the edge.

also, these are faggots, not niggers.
>> Anonymous
>>236521
Honestly..This one is bad.

>>236523
A decent shot, would work better with nice lighting!

>>236525
I like this one alot, maybe a little more light around the face would help.

>>236526
Cute! Nice photo, just get the girl behind into focus :)
>> Honest So You Dont Have To Be !9UISPtwBPo
>>236521

Could have been better, you should have given a wider DoF to catch the guy.

Its fine to put one out of focus, but not when there interacting like this.

>>236523

Looks to much like a snapshot, forced expressions, bad cropping, just not for me.

>>236525

Give your subjects room to look into!! empty space behind them is to distracting (especially when a arm now looks like a cock). I understand that rules are there to be bent and broken, but it has to be something good to brake it.

>>236526

This one works, nice composition, no active interaction so the shallow DoF works well.

All in all, not a bad days shooting, where was this taken? some kind of gig or or random people you saw in the street?

Oh, and saw this in your EXIF:

>Exposure Mode Auto Bracket

TURN THIS OFF!!!

Untill you do, only every 1 in 3 shots are going to be correctly exposed.....
>> Anonymous
Every single one of those photos is cropped way too tight.
>> Syphilis !SC5mMmABng
Yar har, cheers, anyone else?