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Anonymous
Dude, it's one of mine - what do you think?

Don't judge the artifacting - it's taken on a 35mm SLR and scanned with an old Canon USB line powered doofer.
>> ?????????????????????????????Anymonous?
Dude, I don't like it.
>> Anonymous
Too much dark placed in an uncompositional way
>> Anonymous
I actually like the composition, but its not big enough, and the background doesnt suit the foreground.
>> Anonymous
Yes, it would work if it was 2 meters tall. Not any smaller.
>> Anonymous
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OP here

Any thoughts on this one?
>> Anonymous
>>80994
Dude, don't overcrowd the frame, bro
>> Anonymous
I quite like the composition, but I feel it's a little crowded. Needs more "space" in the middle. Keep experimenting, and you'll eventually hit gold with something like that :)
>> Anonymous
edit: I'm talking about the first picture obviously :)
>> Anonymous
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another. sorry about the grain and dust - blame the scanner.