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Anonymous
That's a nice lens you have there, I am surprised by it's quality. Sadly, in some shots, you depend too much on your nice lens and sweet creamy bokeh, and forget composition. OP's picture is nice due to the head on composition, but the second doesn't have anything interesting besides the figure, which clearly isn't your work. The first costume picture looks weird due to the low viewpoint, making it look very very ugly. Her head gets cut off by your composition. The second is okay, but the background is a bit distracting, and the light makes it look very flat. The wapanese portrait picture is nice to look at (Due to the subject as well.), however, the background in the upper left part is completely different then the background in the upper right part of the picture. By placing her head exactly on this line of changing backgrounds, it looks very confusing. Especially due to the fact her hat and the left background are much alike in color. 3/10
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