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pskaught
new photoshoot, what do you jerks think?
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>> pskaught
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>> pskaught
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>> Anonymous
Very nice. The third one looks like it had a bit too much flash though, her face doesn't have much definition.
>> pskaught
>>39725
thanks, I did a lot of high contrast that day, so I tried to even it up.
>> Anonymous
>>39723

I would've gotten her to pose with her shoulders straight facing the camera in this shot, but i like the concept.
>> pskaught
>>39768
trust me, I've got that pose. this just happens to be my favorite.
>> Anonymous
>>39724
The other two are definitely better than this one. Perhaps I have the same complaint as>>39725. But I personally feel it's the choice of clothing that really makes the difference. It needs at least of something dark, whether it's the stockings or something. I just don't like the whole beige/grey on beige thing.
>> Anonymous
Very nice I realy like the first one, I wonder though how it would if she turned her head a bit looking out of the window but I like it anyway. The second one the lighting is spot on very tastefully done. The third one is my least fave im not sure if its the pose or the cloths not working just dosnt stand out IMO Very good the lot of them.
>> Anonymous
They're very well-shot, but except as a photographer who sees the "wow, these things are very well-shot" I don't see anything that would make them stand out from other fashion or glamour photography. They're certainly not bad photos at all, and they're much better than anything I could have shot, but they haven't that differentiating spark that a photo needs to be really great.
>> heavyweather !4AIf7oXcbA
no.2 was the only one that really leapt out at me, if I had seen the others in a magazine I would've just turned the page without a second thought.

It's creepy, it's cool, it's sexy, and it's a very interesting and well-composed shot. Good shooting, sir.
>> pskaught
thanks ervrybody.
>> Anonymous
>>39768

Are you going to defend all the critiques or shut the fuck up and just listen to what people have to say?
>> ac
>>39885
Wait, what? It's not like he was saying "No, fuck you, YOU KNOW NOTHING OF MY ART!!1!one!" His responses are all very polite, and the critics don't seem to have been offended by it. Why the sudden leap to flaming him?

Responding to "I think it might be better if X" with "Yeah, I considered/tried X and decided that Y looks better" is a perfectly valid way of accepting criticism. It's a dialog. The proper way to do it isn't to just lie back and think of England while you get pounded from all sides with criticisms.
>> pskaught
>>39885
is this guy serious?
>>39889
thanks
>> Anonymous
>>39885
Has never had a real life conversation with people.
>> Anonymous
No.1 Seems too busy, it's really hard to focus on one thing.
No.2 is very good and it does pop, it looks like a movie poster or magazine Ad.
No.3 Is good but it draws way too much attention to the center... where the model should have been standing. Darken the center a bit and should bring more of the attention back to her. I would also say crop out to the power lines? I don't see the connection.