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2009 Anonymous
What do you think?

It's gonna be for a local club's 2009 New Year's promo campaign.
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>> Anonymous
more key lighting
more visible 2009
>> Anonymous
>>300977
this

also the way she has her legs is making my dick a rock.
>> Anonymous
I don't think it's bad. My only gripe is how you broke up 2009, it doesn't really seem to work.
>> Anonymous
>>300978
go desensitize yourself.
>> Anonymous
Fuck I wrote a nice long critique but 4chan killed it. Goddamn it moot

Anyways, to summerize.
Pros:
Nice use of lighting, good shadows, ok composition.

Cons:
Iffy IQ. Doesn't seem that sharp. Can you post a bigger (2000px) version?
blacks not black enough for me. I just like higher contrast.
What happened to her right leg? It's distracting.
I would have projected the 2009. It looks kinda cheap and cheezy. Body paint would have been a nicer touch.
Also, the 2009 contrasts with the mood of the rest of the picture. I don't think it blends well.

If I had shot this, I would have picked a less busty model, as I find large breast to be more pornographic, than erotic. If you had her laying down on the ground, with the 2009 projected on her torso. Her tits would be a little flattened, which I find to be cool, and pubes would help. (tips for cool nudes). Anyways, I would have shot from a ladder, looking down. I would try to have more lines pulling you into the image, so w/ body paint, you could have a cooler look 2k9 that would actually move, or curve on her body.
>> Anonymous
>>300971
you are a faggot

>>300979
agreed, make the 2009 more solid/visible.

don't put the hand on the ass though that's the best part.

Any more of her?
>> Anonymous
>>300982
I guess you're an ass guy then?
>> eku !8cibvLQ11s
>>300968
Why is she amputated?
>> Anonymous
That's awesome dude

Real cool
>> sage rage !3I4SJbCh8M
>>300968
outstanding. well done
>> Anonymous
>>300971
Holy faggotry
>> Anonymous
Only thing that throws me off about this photo is that her right arm is in the way of 2009.
>> Anonymous
>>300977
And maybe you can project the 2009 on her back? You'll have to recompose the image of course.
>> Anonymous
reshoot with the date down her back