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>>204720 I like what you tried here. It's unfortunate that the DOF was too tight, since it looks like your focal area fell just in front of where you wanted it to be. I also agree with folks about the yellow line, though there probably isn't much you could have done about that other than moving the snail. Next time I'd suggest shooting it from a slight angle with the snail facing diagonally towards the bottom right so you could catch more of the spiral in the shell and make the image slightly more dynamic.
>>204724 Again, DOF is too tight. I really wish I could see the interior of the flower in focus. The spiral of the semi-closed flower is interesting, but being able to see the inner doohickies of the flower would have made this at least 24.719% more awesome.
>>204738 This is pretty good actually. I'd suggest taking it into Lightroom, Aperture, or Photoshop and fiddling with the levels/saturation a bit to make it more vivid, but it's nice. If you wanted to go back and reshoot I'd try giving the flower a little more room to breathe. My only complaint (other than that it needs some PP) is that I wish the flower wasn't being cropped like that on the left.
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