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Anonymous
Hehe, I was in Shinjuku 2 weeks ago ;)
Interesting pic, I like the composition and the dark mood. It feels like the zombies are coming or something. Very nice. I like the top of the building just touching the frame. It makes it more oppressing.
So, advice for making it better :
- There is motion blur because of the 1/8s exposure. Use a tripod. Pick a small and light tripod, not something heavy that you won't carry ! Velbon makes 1 kilogram tripods which can manage a Canon reflex (use mirror lockup).
However the grainy 800ISO suits the mood of your shot, so it's not a problem...
- Your lens is very crappy. This is normal, since it is the kit lens. Get a Tamron 17-50 f2.8 instead, cheap, good.
However the vignetting from your crap lens adds to the mood of this shot.
As for getting the most out of this shot, I'd say enhance the mood, add a bit of vignetting, enhance the pink cast on the left building, add a touch more contrast, but don't overdo it.
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