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Anonymous
/p/, as a beginner, I am wondering what your opinion of this shot is.
>> Anonymous
i like it
>> Anonymous
>>266900

I should explain. That's my best friend and my van. Someone shot up my window with a gun. She felt she needed to model for the occasion.

Thanks :3
>> Anonymous
i dont believe you have a van, enjoy your bike

apart from that pretty nice shot, face could have used more light and borders are stupid, dont add them
>> Anonymous
>>266917

...but I have both.
>> Anonymous
Black and white photos are not instantly art.

Tits, however...
>> Anonymous
>>266977
So fukken true, many people who try B&W have images that turn dull since the picture becomes flat with an overwhelming amount of grays and minimal blacks & whites.
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
Could use more contrast. Not enough real blacks in there.

Also, compositionally messy. I find the chunk of roof in the background and the cut-off arm at the bottom of the frame distracting.

Also also... I dunno. There's just something not quite right with the subject. There's too much not-girl for it to be a good portrait, and too much girl for it to be a good non-portrait.
>> Anonymous
... or GTFO
>> Anonymous
rule of thirds on the tits, huge success
>> Anonymous
Try some more interesting angles, this looks really boring
>> Anonymous
Shes to dark. You should have overexposed about a stop or two. But then you would have blown out your highlights so you would need to get closer...
>> Anonymous
>>267025
at best asian...

left hand looks broken