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Anonymous
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ITT people who think artistic portraiture is about the same stuff as commerical, fashion, or glamor portraiture. Flattering ? good.
And besides, noses like that are sublime.
I also have no clue what you're talking about with the eyes; the eyes are one of the best things about this photograph. To the OP:
Good work. Three things I would have done differently:
1. Taken a step or so backwards and re-framed to include more of the top-right corner of her hair. Or, if this is a crop, a crop to include more of the top-right corner of her hair. It looks somewhat strane cut off like that.
2. Used a teensy bit less flash on the highlighted side of her face. The shadows on the far side of her face are just right, but the flash was a bit too strong.
You might try using Photoshop to fix this after-the-fact. The burn tool might help, but I'm a novice at it and couldn't tell you exactly what settings to use to get the right result.
3. Had her put her face at a bit less of an angle. I get the look you were going for, but the model bowed her head a bit too much. This one is pure nitpicking, though.
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