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Depressed Cheesecake !wFh1Fw9wBU
do your worst
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>> Anonymous
UNSHARP IS OVER NINE THOUSAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
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>> Anonymous
...i like it, good lighting, cool make-up color effect, its nice.
>> Anonymous
WHAT DID I TELL YOU ABOUT YOUR MODEL AND HER PIERCINGS

GET RID OF THAT SHIT

If she got rid of her piercings she'd look kinda pretty. Otherwise she just looks trashy.

Nice photoshopping though.
>> Depressed Cheesecake !wFh1Fw9wBU
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>>154882
Well, there's nothing I can do about them, I just photograph her, I'm not her father. Maybe you'll like this one more.

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>> Anonymous
How often does she wash her hair? In every picture you take your models always have greasy matty looking hair. wtfman
>> Anonymous
>>154884

Something seems really empty about that picture. Maybe try to shorten the height? I'm not sure I care for that angle on her face either...
>> Anonymous
I love the really varied focus on this picture, how did you get that? shoop, or really small focus range?
>> Depressed Cheesecake !wFh1Fw9wBU
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>>154888
f/1.2

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>> Anonymous
>>154891

Ah, my noobstick of a camera only goes down to f4.5 ):
>> Anonymous
Time for a new camera methinks.
I'm using the scene kid favorate, EOS-400D
>> Anonymous
O LAWD, the makeup.
>> Anonymous
>>154891

holy fuck....

stop posting, now
>> Anonymous
all three too flat. and lack emotion. boring.
>> Anonymous
>duurrrrr the model isn't purty? baaawwwww
>piercings baawwww
>ewwww hair baaawwwww"

wtf is up with these people complaining about the model?
>> Anonymous
Good lawd, what a waste of $10,000 worth of equipment.

Dude, and seriously, tell the chick in the OP to wipe away that horrendous makeup. Shit is making her look hella worse.
>> Anonymous
>>154938
its the same as complaining about whatever content is in the photo. its part of the photo. in this case, its this girl and her piercing. in other photos it might be a distracting branch that you might have moved.
>> Butterfly !xlgRMYva6s
SKIN IMPERFECTIONS

I MUST SEE THEM.
>> elf_man !!DdAnyoDMfCe
>>154941
Yes and no. Someone's judging her as trashy looking due to the piercings; that doesn't have anything to do with the effect of the photo except that they can't get their heads out their asses. Okay, she's trashy looking, stop judging the model as a person and judge the photo. They're clearly part of her personality, but the lighting and horrible gray background hurt these worse than anything else. OP needs to find a way to better capture her personality. That's why this>>154936is a good criticism.
>> Anonymous
im thinkin its a bad case of the cold sores
>> Depressed Cheesecake !wFh1Fw9wBU
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>>154940
Good lawd, go suck a fat dick. You offer no critique and fyi, the equipment was free to rent. So enjoy BAWWWWing over better models and better equipment your amateur ass will never be able to attain.

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>> Depressed Cheesecake !wFh1Fw9wBU
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>>154940
Here, have another to fap to.

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>> Anonymous
>>155003
They might not be so bleh if you don't use as much sharpen.

A little is fine, but you're kind of over-doing it. And yeah, I think green/yellow make up just looks people look sickly.
>> Anonymous
>>155003
i notice the photos youve posted are either them just boringly looking at the camera or swinging their hair around. try something different?
>> Depressed Cheesecake !wFh1Fw9wBU
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>>155004
Guess what, I didn't use sharpening! I reduced using Bilinear For Reduction, but the pictures are already razor sharp from the camera.

And now you're complaining about the makeup? I thought they were too boring. Now they're not boring enough?

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>> Depressed Cheesecake !wFh1Fw9wBU
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>>155005
Like WHAT. Tell me WHAT. If you're going to criticize my pictures, tell me what you would do different, tell me your technique as a photographer, because if you don't, it just makes you look like an uninformed dick hole.

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>> Anonymous
YOURE THE PHOTOGRAPHER FIGURE IT OUT. TRY SOME NEW STUFF. DONT DEPEND ON US TO GIVE YOU IDEAS ON WHAT TO DO. MAYBE TRY MORE THAN A SHOULDER UP PORTRAIT?
>> Anonymous
>>155008

You just described all of /p/ with three simple words. "Uninformed Dick Holes"
>> Anonymous
>>155004Here.
This was my first criticism of your work, haha.

But you mention this "Bilinear For Reduction." What the hell is it?
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
they
are
incredibly
boring

you're doing exactly the same shit you did last time, and the time before that
stop framing them the exact same way, you can do a lot of things with interesting shapes/poses with the body
for ..pure face shots, these aren't even that great.
i see no real emotion or anything, it's all too put on.

so yeah, loosen up a little.. (style wise). your style is stiffening up in a bad way.
>> Anonymous
>>155017
Following up on this. Well I mean. They're all wearing the same shirt.

Also, the photographer is just an asshole.
>> Anonymous
All you've done is tried to spice up your photos with some colored make-up? You've made no improvements. Yeah they are nice but you aren't going anywhere with them.

These shots are all terribly boring.

For fuck sakes man...
Do something different.

So basically. Just rehashing what everyone else has said. Go beethy.
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
>>155017
There you go again, mindlessly praising anything a tripfag posts. I can't be the only person to have noticed this.
>> Anonymous
>>155032

this faggot doesn't count because he's just a failure
>> Anonymous
also, keep sucking each other off, faggots
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
>>155073
So lemme get this straight:

You're saying that Beethy is a tool because he praises tripfags just because they're tripfags, except for the ones that you think are bad. I.e., you dislike Beethy because he has the same taste in photography as you do.
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
>>155032
>>155073
>>155075
>>155077
hahaha i love /p/ so much for this reason
>> Anonymous
go back to deviantart, you fucking faggot