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Anonymous
Hello /p/.

I've yet to have any constructive criticism on some of my pictures, well, here area few of mine, also here is a link to my deviant art
http://shadowstructure.deviantart.com

Any tips, comments, anything - would be appreciated :)
>> Anonymous
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Here's another.

These two are my own person favourites..

Camera-Specific Properties:Equipment MakeOLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.Camera ModelSP500UZCamera SoftwareAdobe Photoshop CS3 WindowsMaximum Lens Aperturef/2.8Image-Specific Properties:Image OrientationTop, Left-HandHorizontal Resolution72 dpiVertical Resolution72 dpiImage Created2007:10:02 15:40:35Exposure Time1/6 secF-Numberf/2.8Exposure ProgramManualISO Speed Rating80Exposure Bias0 EVMetering ModeSpotLight SourceUnknownFlashNo Flash, CompulsoryFocal Length6.30 mmColor Space InformationsRGBImage Width800Image Height534RenderingNormalExposure ModeManualWhite BalanceManualScene Capture TypeStandardGain ControlNoneContrastNormalSaturationHighSharpnessNormal
>> Anonymous
>>81521
straighten the horizon and it would be better if it was a bit closer i think. the sky is pretty flat, and i think theres a bit too much black at the bottom. getting closer would get rid of a bit of both. also feels like the proportion between sky/land is kind of weird for some reason.

>>81522
colors are neat, but the photo is rather dark and boring.
>> Vincent
>>81522
This shot is sweet, looks like a closed airport.. Never seen that before...

First pic does nothing for me though, The girl is too small and far away.

Deviantart links usually get pretty criticized, for some reason, Well I know why but just a warning :)
>> Anonymous
>>81522

Where was this picture taken?
>> Anonymous
>>81521
nobody here owes you any constructive criticism and i'm not going to look at your myspace.
i hope you die