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Anonymous
It's been a while since I made you guys suffer from these.

Rate it, grade it, troll it, whatever. I just need some feed back.

Both shots are taken in same restaurant. If the title doesn't give it away, I was trying to make a joke.
>> Anonymous
neither of these pictures look like they would be good alone, putting them together doesnt make them any better.
>> Anonymous
>>207986
didn't you know? that's the definition of diptych.
at least on flickr.
>> Anonymous
>>207986
What makes them bad? I need to know.
>> Anonymous
>>207996
left one is boring as hell.should have tried the other side of the window and not cutting out so much
2nd one is also pretty boring, DOF could be tighter on the two guys and their table.
they arent arranged nicely a diptych doesnt seem to allow for a nice arrangement, atleast not to me

these two pictures dont look like they belong together to me.
looks like a diner and a Macdonald
>> Anonymous
>>207999
>they arent arranged nicely a diptych doesnt seem to allow for a nice arrangement, atleast not to me

So you mean that the composition of these two don't go well together?
Just so you know mcdonalds' are diners.
>> Anonymous
>>208004
they arent very good compositionally (seperate)
but they also dont make a good composition when put together.
i wouldnt really call them diners, id call them restraunts, but i guess you COULD call them a diner if you wanted to.
>> Anonymous
>>207983
You know, in most of the diptychs I've seen online, both of the pictures get the same amount of visual area in the picture. The way you're putting them, it's "just a picture and a bit of the previous one." It's not working for me. As for the pictures, no, I don't see the connection either, other than "it's raining outside, so people go inside".
>> Jeremo !iKGMr61IHM
never done a diptych... don't really 'see' them
>> Anonymous
VIGNETTE MORE, UNSHARP MASK, RESIZE, CROP.
>> Blackadder !!bSWRwu/NqzQ
>>208039

I have seen one or two good ones. I think it's probably harder to get a genuinely good set that matches than just one good image on its own, despite what some folk assume.
>> Anonymous
>>208062
And this one does not succeed.
>> xkikimariex3
I actually like it, I wish there was brighter colors though, that'd be neat
>> OP
I'm not sure what you guys are saying.

The diptych fails because the composition is weak right?

>>208029
I think the connection you found is supposed to be the correct one.

I was thinking you would see cars in the left frame and food in the right = fast food. But I guess you can't make these types of jokes well with pictures.

>>207999
So you mean shoot INTO the diner? (Uh oh. CPL bullshit) Maybe I'll try to find another image to graft to this one later on.

Thanks for all the general advice. I guess I still have a weak eye for composition.

>>208196
Feel free to saturate/vibrance and post it. This is an unprocessed shot.
>> Anonymous
>>208294
>>207983

Frosted butts.