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Anonymous
please give me criticism on composition etc etc.
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>> Anonymous
nothing really. i just walk around a local trail and take pictures. i guess i should start trying to find someting to center the pic on. the ice did catch my eye though so i guess you could say thats my message
>> Anonymous
I suppose one criticism / constructive comment I have is that you're essentially standing upright taking a picture in a downwards direction (it appears). I would try to get either some sky or some orientation cues in your photos so the viewer can figure out what they're looking at. I'd also recommend framing something in the image as your point of interest - be it a stump, a tree, the center of the ice, etc. But focus on making sure the viewer knows what you're trying to show them.
>> Anonymous
>>105205
thank you! i was trying to figure out why my picture seemed decent but missing something and you showed me what!
>> elf_man !!DdAnyoDMfCe
I agree with>>105205
The other option is to get in closer, cut out all the ground, and just try to emphasize the patterns of the ice, water, and light, and yeah, pick a point of interest. Depends on what you like, but either go for a wider context, or get closer.
>> Anonymous
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>>105211
thank you too. i now realize that i'm just not standing in the right place lol

another one, somewhat better :/

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