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>>235594
I like the idea, and the subject is well posed with a good eye catching stare (i dont know if that was the model's doing or your direction)
My one concern is how long it takes the eye to get to the reflection... I think its the blank space on the right, along with the lights up top just leading your off in the wrong way
>>235597
Yes, Yes, A thousand times yes!!!!
The focus, the noise (that looks beautiful like grain, well done), her hair, her expression... Everything from this shot looks like it was found in a old box of photos... Just a cracking shot!
Instantly reminded me of Zoltán Jókay, and if your admire him as much as I do, you should be proud!
>>235598
This one works, eye goes right to the upright subject, then to her friends, then photographers, then to the other subjects. The wall helps in the leading to the back.
Good shot, nothing spectacular though.
>>235599
I agree, she looks fantastic!
Absolutely love this one aswell, nice strong whites in the model, subjects to the left in dull gray, i like it. The chair in the background acts as a nice tie in so the model and the other subjects are not to separated.
Though personally id clone out the woman in the back ground, she just took my attention for no reason.
>>235600
Its a model getting ready... Just dosnt do it for me
>>235601
Like this one, but could i suggest a different crop?
I think it would look better with some of the left chopped off, give her space to look into, and should do a nice job of showing of the nice slanted shape there both making.
All in all, good job Beethy
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