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>>233374 Great choice to go with B&W here. Something about the back wall there looks weird though. It's like I should be able to see more of the ceiling or something. I can't put my finger on it, but it bothers me.
>>233375 Great capture of the repetition and simplicity the lower half of the photo looks too empty to me, though.
>>233377 The lights above the subject's head are neat, but there's really nothing else in this photo that stands out to me. As soulr said, I think a different approach would've been better, I just don't like the composition. Also, might've been better in color.
>>233379 Holy fucking lines, that's an awesome shot. Congratulations, you made an art.
>>233380 Again, another "strong through simplicity" photo. A little pet peeve I have sometimes is when somebody tries to have their subject in a third, or far off from the center to have a cool composition, but then they fill it with just boring or it's cluttered and becomes a distraction. This is definitely the right balance.
>>233381 Again, you're filling all the space around what seems to be your main subject with something so interesting and strong that it becomes the subject itself. Or is that too artfag for you?
Great fucking work, man. Stay here, hang around awhile and help improve the name of Anon.
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