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Anonymous
Sup /p/.

What do you think? How can I make this picture better? Should I lose the vignette?
>> Anonymous
wow, beautiful shot!
Where did you take it? Lens and camera?
>> Butterfly !xlgRMYva6s
>>89575
yes

EXIF OR GTFO
>> Anonymous
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Here's the original.

Took it near central park in NYC.

Camera-Specific Properties:Equipment MakeOLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.Camera ModelX550,D545Z,C480ZCamera SoftwareVersion 1.1Maximum Lens Aperturef/2.8Image-Specific Properties:Horizontal Resolution72 dpiVertical Resolution72 dpiImage Created2007:11:04 15:53:47RenderingNormalExposure ModeAutoWhite BalanceAutoScene Capture TypeStandardGain ControlNoneContrastNormalSaturationNormalSharpnessNormalExposure Time1/400 secF-Numberf/2.8Exposure ProgramCreativeISO Speed Rating50Exposure Bias0 EVMetering ModePatternLight SourceUnknownFlashNo Flash, CompulsoryFocal Length6.30 mmColor Space InformationsRGBImage Width1712Image Height2288Compression SettingSQMacro ModeNormal
>> Anonymous
more boring pictures in /p/
>> Anonymous
>>89687
Ok, so how can I make it better?
>> Anonymous
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>>89724
>> Anonymous
Excellent picture.

Don't listen to>>89729. I would put it in my portfolio.
>> DRM !Oq/9NMk1yg
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The original is close enough to monochrome that you might want to consider actually just going for B&W. What little color is there isn't contributing anything.

Also, the contrast could be tweaked a little.

Here's an example of a B&W version (hope you don't mind)