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beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
Oh hi /p/

honest critique, thx
this is my 2nd shoot with that blonde girl, had a lot of fun

on another note, i'm trying to arrange a shoot with Gas Mask Chan.
wish me luck


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>> Anonymous !SDPEsPMnww
cute gask mask chan is cuuuuuute

Hurry up already
>> Anonymous
Needs to be more emo. Definitely not emo enough.
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
this just in.

this weekend i'll do a shoot with gas mask chan
she's going ahead with it

i'll keep her info and shit totally anonymous so dont ask me anything
>> eku !8cibvLQ11s
Things I don't like. Direct, on camera flash.
>> Anonymous
>>127059
>>127059
>>127059
>>127059
>>127059
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
>>127072
It was the first time I used the 580EX
i was such a noob like beginner with it

but i'm very interested in getting 2 flashes.. 1 slave.
kinda like what you do
>> Jeremo !iKGMr61IHM
ahh scene chicks. So many daddy issues, so easy to pull a root.
>> Anonymous
Your post-processing is just too much. I don't like the borders except for the first pic.
Blown highlights suck.
Other than that, this is pretty nice. I'd like to see the originals.
>> Anonymous
OP pic is nice, the rest looks like overshooped garbage trying to save an already shitty pic. 2 even looks like a fukkin' myspace pic taken in a mirror.
>> Anonymous
>>127088
agree
>> Anonymous
I have to agree with the other posters here. The first one looks just fucking amazing. The others look like shit. Post the unedited ones.
>> blank
1st and maybe last are the best
>> Anonymous
every single one of these pictures screams deviant art
>> Anonymous
Your model has half of her face covered up in some of the shots and the shots that show her face, you some how fucked them up by overexposing or over processing the image.
>> sage
>>127060
so you raped her after that pic?
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
>>127118
not poasting unedited ones since these actually are better

things learned:
- dont do straight on flash


since the 1st is natural light, rest are not

i wont use flash with gasmask girl i guess
>> Anonymous
shit sucks, go back to da
>> FAP FAP
im just fapping to the model dont mind me


btw i cant find more of gas mask chan


anyone knows where to see more photography of this gas mask chan? I mean good photography, not cam photo.
>> Anonymous
>>127071
What's so great about her? Wow, she showed up to a Failraid wearing a cheap gas mask.

Woo-hoo.
>> Anonymous
>>127153
That's YOUR opinion. That doesn't mean the shooped ones actually ARE better. So post, or next time quit overshooping stuff if you really want to get into photography.
>> Anonymous
omgah gasmask chan wore a gas mask

girl of my dreamz

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 XD xD
>> Anonymous
Gas mask girl does not = a chan. Newfags calling her a chan when she never even posted tits.
>> Anonymous
Way too much Photoshopping. The "scary / emo / dark / gothic female shoop" thing is extremely cliche.

First pic you posted is good though. Try shooting a GREAT photo straight out of the camera, without any shooping (minor shooping is ok though). That's photography.
>> Anonymous
>>127207

Oh, and keep the EXIF. Always.
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
>>127207

minor shooping
>>127059
>>127064
>>127062
>>127063


I don't see why people hate post processing so much, I'm 100% positive it makes my photos much better.
I have a feeling the people that are against it are fags that only know how to use MS paint.
>> Anonymous
I dunno, what do you cal "minor" shooping?

Things like resizing, sharpening, changing the level / curves a bit, adding borders is minor shooping to me.

But making a pic blue, or drastically changing the hue / saturation etc goes beyond "minor" shooping imo.

And no, this isn't coming from an MS Painter. I'm a designfag.
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>>127215
It's not post, it's the way you do it.

This photograph is actually heavily post-processed but it doesn't scream OMG PHOTOSHUP! (It's also not a particuarly standout one, but it's just the first one I have convenient that shows the point, and his hair is much lighter than it looks like it should be on him because he dyed it a hot magenta.)
>> Anonymous
beethy, just stop posting, please.
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
>>127059
I like it.

>>127060
I hate the lighting, composition, and the fact that your ultrawide has made her forehead and eyes XBOXHUEG. But I like that she's not wearing a shirt. More shirtless hot blonde, please, kthx.

>>127061
Kinda neat in an /x/ sort of way.

>>127062
Not a big fan. She looks kinda shabby. Which I assume you were going for, so I guess good job.

>>127063
You have made your hot blonde look ugly in this picture.

>>127064
Again with the wideangle-caused giant bobble head. But cute kitten is cuuuute.
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
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>>127228
most people out there, and especially models LOVE the heavily post processed shit.
they all like the ULTRA PROCESSED TRUE HDR stuff. that's why some wanna shoot with me "hey i wanna go for the look in this photo"
so I guess I go along with it
..if i don't post process a lot at all, i won't get better at it.
so rather than saying "DONT DO IT" or "AT LEAST MAKE IT LOOK LIKE IT'S NOT PHOTOSHOPPED" ..should say which parts of it do not work so I can improve on it..

actually, i'll post an original.
you post process it better and i'll take whatever criticism

this applies to anyone
have fun with the originals!

remember, i WANT to improve.. that's why i post my shit here

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Have fun

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>> Anonymous
>>127258
>>127260
These two are way better then the shooped pics.
>>127261
Is almost unsalvageable, I'd drop it.
>> Anonymous
and kids this is why you cant make bad photos good using photoshop.
>> Anonymous
>>127261

Front on flash makes me want to KILL IT WITH FIRE.

The last two seemed okay, but it looked liked the model could have had some better make-up or diff. lighting.
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>> lrf !XIxc6BpKnU
>>127059
I like this a lot, proper good.

>>127260
Better without shooping.

>>127336
I like this, I'd like to see it without the tint though.
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
>>127336
not too bad, but i like mine a little more.. i like an unrealistic feel sometimes
i'm super subjective of course, but yea.. not a bad shoop
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>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
>>127365
That I do like more

I'd just get rid of certain blemishes like I did (bags under eyes, pulling skin on boob on right)

But yea, nice work
I'll be more careful with color tones and contrast
You darkened certain areas very nicely
>> Sans titre-1 copfie.jpg
>>127372
30 HOURS IN PAINT MAN
>> Anonymous
Was it all done wide angle? I wonder how ones like the second one would look with something more like a 58mm. I like the wide angle on the shots that show more of her body, but on the portrait shots that feature more her head and shoulders, the distortion is a little distracting. It works very well with the one where she's with the kitty and the first ones outside in the field.
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
>>127419
Yea they're all at 10mm
I took some photos at 100mm (different lens) but they failed kinda, one okay shot

her stock nudes i zoomed at 22mm so the flash filled the entire shot (easy magic lasso for manip guys)
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and of course you can just use a stupid ass filter if you like cheap PS tricks

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>> Cameron
OMFG piercings?! Why you do this? >.<
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OH HI, LUK AT ME, I CAN DO SELECTIVE DESATURATION FTW, AND I HAS DA AND SHIT, AND I CAN MAKE BURNS IN THE EDGES LIKE I OWN A FUCKING HOLGA OR OTHER ARTSY SHIT, CUZ I'M COOL AND ARTSY LIKE DAT, ALSO POSTING FROM A MAC.

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>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
>>127456
lol
>> Anonymous
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>>127279
Salvaged.......

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>> Ausonymous !.PKzdt0e5c
>>127478
whats with the squid?
>> Anonymous
>>127478
...
squiiid?
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>>127490
>> Anonymous
Honest critique:

Tits could be a little bigger, could be a little more curvy overall in fact, but the face is nice, the hair is sexy, and defintely got some nice DSL-type lips. Bottom line, tap that shit.
>> Anonymous
>>127495
....
thanks.
I knew what a squid was.
I was also questioning it being there.
facepalm.jpg
>> Anonymous
>>127490
The fucking squid laying on the neon green grass
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
>>127478
haha i lol'd so much i almost i got looks at work

you're the guy that put that squid in the thread where everyone was editing that shitty photo right?
hahahah
my new wallpaper
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>>127456
hahahaha, you missed the joke...here's one from your OS

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>> Anonymous
>>127508
OMG HOW DID U DO ??? ITS A PAINTING????????
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
no real beethy bashing in this thread even though most of this shit was clearly sub par

thanks /p/
>> Ausonymous !.PKzdt0e5c
>>127584
Ausfag?
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
>>127585
ausfag but born in holland
>> Anonymous
>>127508
>>127562
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>>127260
I require more hours in ms paint...

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>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
>>127607
blargh
>> iProd !8x7lXo9zIQ
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>>128165
4 BILLION YEARS IN MS PAINT

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>> Anonymous
oh lawd op's model is hot
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
>>128203
yea, too bad /p/ is sfw.
i have some boob shots
>> Vincent !!8LCSE0Zp1mL
>>128248
Link us to the pics in /s/ then
thats what Liska and a lot of other photogs have done in the past. the people of /s/ never mind either (unless she is ugly which she isn't)
>> Anonymous
>>128248

if they're of this broad,>>128177,

fucking keep them to yourself.
>> Anonymous
>>128264
I usually hate this sort of model-oriented photography (no offense to people who do it, it's just not what I'm into) but I'm tempted to find some fat old homeless woman with skin diseases who hasn't showered in years and give her fifty bucks to do a model shoot like this and post the results to /p/ to show people what genuinely physically ugly women look like.

I don't think the model's a knockout, but she's certainly not ugly. I don't think I've ever seen an ugly model on /p/.
>> I||ICIT !!mknjFN/v/49
>>128264
if they're of this broad,>>128177,

fucking post them.
>> elf_man !!DdAnyoDMfCe
>>128275
Remember pskaught's whores? Yeah, we've seen it. :D
>> Anonymous
I posted it and i have moar, but ffs.. Just get over yourselfs and pay good ol' dA a visit.

http://courtneyrose666.deviantart.com

Thats her. Includes both tits and ass.

Also, beethy: Did you tap it? I mean.. Shes right there with her top off.. How did you handle it without acting weird?
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
>>129357
yea i dunno, we just both felt pretty comfortable without any sexual tension or whatever.
to me it just felt like taking any other photo.
>> Anonymous
>>129366

So you never ever faped to that chick in any way?
>> Anonymous
>>127497
What are dsl lips?
>> Anonymous
>>129374

"dick-sucking lips".