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Anonymous
My newest work, tell me what you think.
>> Anonymous
looks very professional-like
>> Anonymous
>Forbidden_Lust_by_NatashaKineva.jpg
wait what
>> Anonymous
thanks, I am not pro at all though. But I think this one is by far the best photo I have taken.

PS constructive critisism is welcome
>> Anonymous
yeh? and? its me alright
>> Mr. Higgzbuffonton !!Xsltv1VWxZT
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needs higher DOF for back of head..
and where's your EXIF bro?

im gonna guess that this is a troll using a 'pro' pic asking for criticism then loling when people say its shit (whether its true or not) and saying ITS PRO SO ITS GOOD AND CANNOT BE CRITICIZED U GUYZ GOT OWNED.
>> Anonymous
its edited in PS, so thats why its missing.

I think i agree about DOF, I'll see how it looks with a bit higher DOF.

btw: i am not a bro, i am sis (note the watermark)
>> Mr. Higgzbuffonton !!Xsltv1VWxZT
>>248319
PS doesnt strip unless you save for web, and there
>> Mr. Higgzbuffonton !!Xsltv1VWxZT
>>248322
...'s no way im using sis, bro. doesnt work as well.
>> Anonymous
lol, well, dunno how but it saved it like that, dude... ^^
>> eku !8cibvLQ11s
Critisism as wanted. I don't like names like that. Lollipop could have been okay, because there's lollipop. Or banana, because it doesn't make any sense.
But name like Forbidden lust... I just don't like that kind of naming. Why is it forbidden? Who lust and what?

The photo itself... Well, somehow it's just way too soft. There just doesn't seem to be that extra sharp spot where one could focus. Needs more sharpening.

Oh yeah, and the background, it's too same looking red as teh scarf or whatever it is. They blend too well together.

Otherwise a better photo than most of the photos posted on /p/.
>> eku !8cibvLQ11s
>>248342

Oh yeah, I'm amazed how someone can take such a good potrait, and still don't know how to use Photoshop properly.
Makes one wonder...

Wait a minute. Why this photo is copied here from dA, and not directly from your computer?

I smell cheating!
>> Anonymous
>>248282
its a trap!
>> Anonymous
DOF would be more interesting if you had a different color in the bg, or just more bg, and it looks like you focused on the fabric around her face, not her face.
Otherwise, not my cup of tea, but good shot.
>> Anonymous
I personally like the shallow DoF, it really makes the facial features pop and the hood look helps facilitate this.

The lollipop has me a bit confused though. The style as far as the makeup and clothing goes in one direction and the lollipop just looks weird with it.
>> Anonymous
>>248282

Good trolling.