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Anonymous
so, what say /p/
>> Anonymous
nice answers
>> Liska !!LIVFOETqL8j
/p/ isn't /b/
>> ac
>>43746
I thought the photo was good but now I want to write a scathing critique because you're so impatient. /p/ != /b/. We don't have eighty billion people on here all the time. Wait a little bit and you might get responses. Complain that you're not getting responses and you'll just piss people off.

(Also: No responses generally means the picture is pretty good. People here are more apt to respond if they want to tell you how much you suck, I've found, than if they want to tell you you're good)
>> Anonymous
It's a good motive, but there are some problems. One is that it is slightly blurry in the higher res, but that's acceptable. But you should try and make the tone of her skin a bit warmer. Right now it looks slightly greyish, probably because of the sunlight. More yellow and red would do it. Keep it up
>> Anonymous
I like this, except for the lighting. It's a little too harsh (guessing this is from the sun being high in the sky at the time). If you took it near dawn/dusk the shadows would be softer and less harsh.

Her chest is really light and her face looks almost dead. If dead is what you were going for, then take out the grass. I'm not sure how much better fill flash would be, but you might want to try it. I think shadow would be good, just not as extreme as it is now. Keep at it