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Critique? Anonymous
http://images27.fotki.com/v982/file7b3f/45063/1/1165752/5322228/crestedon.jpg

^^ full 10mpx size. Thoughts?
>> Anonymous
A bit plain and boring but overall clean image
Focus point is wrong .. which leads me to believe you shoot in full auto.
>> Anonymous
I meant for her to be focused and the bridge distorted.
>> Anonymous
>>87637
i assume you're a noob photographer then

how long have you been doing it for? /p/ can forgive
>> Anonymous
3 days.
>> Anonymous
something about it seems too plain. it looks like it's trying to be interesting but can't do it.
>> elf_man !fBgo7jDjms
>>87628
One thing that bothers me is that her head stops right at the bridge. It feels awkward. I don't think she needs to be smaller in the frame, so maybe a little different angle to give her some head room would help.
>> Anonymous
Thanks for some positive thoughts guys!
>> Anonyfag of Borneo !bHymOqU5YY
The thing that bugs me about this picture is that even when the background is blurred, my brain kept switching back and forth between the foreground and the background.

Tl;dr: what should I be focusing at?
>> Anonymous
Well i like it if had been on a trip to whereever this is and had such a photo taken of me i would be very pleased. Also i think its genrally just a nice idea. Could use a slghtly different angle and maybe a bit less DOF but yeah i quite i like it keep it up!
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
In this situation, you might want to consider using your flash so you can equalize the light on the girl with the light of the sky, so you'll get a nice blue sky instead of a blown-out-to-0xFF sky.

(Key word there 'might')