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mrdevon
the tension between the car seat and the side of her body is a little distracting.
but the lighting is good. the pseudo-direct flash style is def in right now.
composition is simple and somewhat too plain, especially in contrast to the 'junky' look you might've been going for (the boxes of stuff, old van, etc). but i'm bias to the rule of 3rds and an off-centered look, so i would've gone for that.
i like the girl. her position and expression is hot. her clothes/styling works well. the colors are a good choice and go well together.
some of the shit in the van is a little distracting as well, but it works.
i'd also recommend 'shopping out the forking wire(s) connecting the power line to the right of her head. and whatever that is the the upper-right corner could be easily removed.
all in all, i'd give it an 8. it'd work well as an advertisement/portrait/whatever, just not a photo/art mag.
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