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>> Anonymous
no.
>> Anonymous
Long neck is loooong.. Very unflattering perspective.
>> Anonymous
>>227207
/thread
>> Depressed Cheesecake !wFh1Fw9wBU
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>> Anonymous
holy photochop OP
>> Depressed Cheesecake !wFh1Fw9wBU
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>> Anonymous
>>227213

this one is sweet.. shop out that flare though.. it draws attention to her fat thighs.
>> heavyweather !4AIf7oXcbA
>>227213
Chopped off right arm bothers me. You had room to include it and still keep it tight.
>>227206
Nice exposure, nice lighting, but WTF @ that fuckugly dress. Good lord that thing is awful. Probably not your fault, dude, but it just doesn't match the tone of the photo at all.
>>227211
Also nice, great background. Sorry, finding more things to dislike about your model... the yellow eyeshadow: what the fuck. Nothing going on with her hair, it could probably use some catchlight or something. She's also got kind of an emotionless robot thing goin' on, expression-wise. It's not bad and doesn't really detract from the photo, per say, but it doesn't add anything either.
>> heavyweather !4AIf7oXcbA
>>227213
Clothes... so... weird...

Did you have a stylist, or is this her doing?
>> Anonymous
The government needs to step in and require people to get a license before they're allowed to use photoshop. It would be similar to a driving test, which would make sure that the user knows how to use PS, but at the same time knows when to hold back.
>> Anonymous
shit photos still suck
>> Anonymous
>>227206
last time you posted i said i liked your stuff.
this time im sorry, but not today.

get yourself some more off camera flash and try not to overdo it.

where do you get your subjects from, because i dont think this is helping you very much.
perhaps its your people skills?
when im doing portraiture im in there talking, jumping, posing, demonstrating, basically trying to make it as easy for them as possible to look happy. do you know any jokes??

TL;DR : almost good, change flash, INTERACT BETTER
>> Rad !!IpQSryGvPPO
These are great. Impressive use of lighting.

Her outfits are kind of weird but the photos are still nice.

Your troll fan club is getting annoying though.

Heavyweather you're nitpicking and she doesn't have an emotionless robot expression, she's modeling...
>> Anonymous
/p/ you are a bunch of fucking retards. DP have some fucking nice pictures here with great lightning and everything. This is 10000 better than 99% of you guys could ever produce, and all you come up with is fucing useless spam comments like "shit sux" or something like that. You guys are so fucking pathetic I want to puke. Give the guy some critque instead of this shit, or GET THE FUCK OUT in before samefag.

Over to your images. I realy like the,. Very nice light and mood on all of them. Great flash use on the first one, but I think the hair could need some light. Also the head is placed right in front of the horizon line and that kinda bothers me. Unlike heavyweather i dont mind the dress.

Same thing goes for the 2 actually, nice exposure but could need some light on the hair because it realy melts into the background.

Third one is great too, but ffs remove the ugly flare. If it was larger and a real part of the image it might work, but that little shit is just ugly.
>> Anonymous
First one is very nice
>> heavyweather !4AIf7oXcbA
>>227252
Of course I'm nitpicking. If he wanted blue ribbons and gold stars, he could go to the A++++ WONDERFUL PHOTOZ group on flickr. This is a critique.
>> Depressed Cheesecake !wFh1Fw9wBU
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tl;dr those three were over-processed, I am going to redo them.

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>> Anonymous
>>227389
shit still sux
>> Depressed Cheesecake !wFh1Fw9wBU
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>>227267
Hate to say it, but he's right. As much as nice comments are nice, I come to /p/ mostly to get put down and have my mistakes pointed out.

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>> Anonymous
>>227391
her neck looks weird in this
>> Anonymous
try something other than HUMAN MODELS. something is missing, there is no emotion in the pictures.
>> Anonymous
>>227389
man, ive shitcanned your stuff before, but i really like this one. now all you have to do is get PAID for it.
>> Haddock !!xREx2m9lgBs
Jesus these are overprocessed.
DC, try this: Turn your history log on, host the pics off site, and let us see what you did in PS.
You know, or just lay off it.
>> Anonymous
>>227423
Good like idea, I would like to see the originals of these.
>> Anonymous
>>227206
While I was scrolling down, I was like, WTF fire erupting from the back of her head.
>> Anonymous
Good to see that there at least some sensible people over here. /p/ hasn't died yet.

quick offtopic question. History Log?
Elaborate please. Sounds interesting as fuck.
>> Anonymous
>>227389
She must be an angel, because there's a huge bright halo around her head!
>> Anonymous
say to Sage week old shit

shit pics are still shit; even after aging one week
>> Depressed Cheesecake !wFh1Fw9wBU
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Here's a more or less unprocessed pic

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>> Anonymous
You keep blowing out their skin tones. I don't know if you raped the curves, contrast, or what but it's really awful. White balance doesn't ever seem quite right either. Maybe you need to try an expodisc or use gels on your strobe to match the natural light.

>>227213
Sequins or whatever on her bottom are disctracting as fuck.
>> beethy !vW/UaE6zYU
>>227389
this one is my favorite by far.. excellent colors and i just like the feel of the picture overall. the lighting is good and flattering also.
i don't really feel anything for the others... either the model looks too clumsy or oafy in the bikini (nothing wrong with her body, just some of the poses) .. that and the photos just come off as a little meaningless and not thought through.
if you keep going like this you'd probably be a fine commercial photographer in 2 years.. but there won't be a lot of creativity happening.

also, get off the beach.. get a different kind of model and take her to the streets or something.
it's starting to feel a bit samey
>> Anonymous
>>228110
>>227389

Like those two, looks like you had awesome light, and you did a good job with the lighting too. Very nice, man.
>> Anonymous
>>228145
PS I love the color
>> ilkore
you should use your assistant to add some fill light, with a large reflector! that would have helped greatly! check out F.J. Westcott, Photoflex, and Calumet.

she looks like her face was a little greasy... having a good aspiring makeup artist, can help tremendously, but i'm sure you already know this. try using a curves adjustment with masking, to help manage the amount of contrast of her head

.>>227389
and i agree about this one... i still think it could use a small amount of fill... it's definitely one of your best photos, ive seen from you, since i came here.
>> Anonymous
decent photos, but boring. face is blown out on a few too. perhaps a strobe behind the model to create distinction between the hair and horizon.
>> Anonymous
>>228137
>You keep blowing out their skin tones. I don't know if you raped the curves, contrast, or what but it's really awful.
>You keep blowing out their skin tones. I don't know if you raped the curves, contrast, or what but it's really awful.
>You keep blowing out their skin tones. I don't know if you raped the curves, contrast, or what but it's really awful.
>You keep blowing out their skin tones. I don't know if you raped the curves, contrast, or what but it's really awful.
>You keep blowing out their skin tones. I don't know if you raped the curves, contrast, or what but it's really awful.

OH GOD THIS.
A MILLION TIMES, THIS!!!
>> Anonymous
>>228110

lol @ using your fat girlfriend as an assistant instead of a model

good choice
>> Depressed Cheesecake !wFh1Fw9wBU
>>228178
lol @ that not being my girlfriend or my assistant, but the model's friend that tagged along. faggot.
>> beethy !vW/UaE6zYU
>>228178
why do these fags not get banned?
they contribute nothing at all
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this picture is great! im sorta new to photography but i hope to someday be able to capture a photograph like this.

how do you get such detail and color? my photos have never been any more clear or easy-on-the eyes than this one. and its still just a basic photo. i dont know how to achieve the dark background with a good lit object. any advice?

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>> Anonymous
i'd pump that hottie rotten
>> Anonymous
>>228185
>why do these fags not get banned?
they contribute nothing at all

Jesus Christ, GET THE FUCK OUT, BEETHY.
We all still hate you and want to suck your GF's 12" long nipples.

It cracks me up how you shitty tripfags bitch and bawww and throw hissy fits and say you're leaving forever but then come back within a month.
>> beethy !vW/UaE6zYU
>>228201
cool story bro
>> beethy !vW/UaE6zYU
>>228222
>>228235
i lol'd so much