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>>46836
okay, this has got to be my favorite out of all of them. I'm not sure exactly why, But I am loving the composition and color of the photograph. You're def headed in the right direction-- also, not including any of the sky, which as far as I can tell, from the photo above, was a good idea. It's lighted properly, etc, so good to go.
>>46838 >>46837
I also like these two; you didn't center the subject, but kept it interesting. There's a flow for the eye to the pictures and you were able to properly pick up on the color that was already there. Well done.
>>46835 is my least favorite; there's just really nothing of interest there to hold my eye. If the sky is washed out like that, you probably don't want to include that in your picture because it washes out the photo. The water looks dull, too, and it detracts from the otherwise (pretty?) blue that you were trying to capture in...whatever that is.. on the playground.
>>46834Seems a little bit too busy to me; too much going on and too many places for my eye to go. If you could have focused just on the swings, without getting the monkey bars-- or even leaving the bars and curring off the dolphins and the picnic tables in the back, you would've ended up with a better shot.
Good work, though, keep it up.
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