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Anonymous
critique....
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>> Anonymous
The hand is way too distracting as it is now. I would suggest trying to get a shot where the hand is further from the camera. Try and find a blance with the hand and the plane.

Cool idea though.
>> Grumpy Dragon !PkDo3c3GM2
I disagree with Anon. The hand is dominant. Therefore the statement is that the hand is important, and controlling. It'd actually be a good ad piece stating something about being on a string, or controlling things.
However... given a chance for a redo, I'd want the hand more defined. I'd like the whole hand, a bit better in focus, and better lit.
>> Anonymous
Hey, thanks for your comments. Can you tell me how I could get the hand more in focus next time. Should I use a higher fnumber?
>> ?00 !XBOXgikTFw
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The hand's size is okay, a smaller hand wouldn't really make the pic better but leave the photo without a real dominating object =/.

I'd focus on the hand. Or just try different settings and maybe emphasize the gripping/holding/controlling aspect!