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LTAFTP !zh0Xc1l5DE
LTAFTP, long time anon, first time poster.

Today, I have the courage of submitting some photos for /p/ to critique.

Here they are. Reason for black and white is because I've missed focus or there was shake/subject movement. So black and white hides it better than color.
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Oops forgot one thing.

Sorry for EXIF, I saved them from my gallery so it's not there anymore. :/
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
>>158616
A bit washed out. Could use more contrast. Quick levels adjustment should fix that.

>>158617
Sassy!

Would've been better if you'd tilted the camera down a smidgen so her face wasn't absolute dead center.

>>158620
Little bit too fuzzy and low-contrast. Also, the girl looks like a female impersonator.

>>158621
Like the expressions. Compositions would be better if you hadn't clipped the edge of the smaller girl's arm. If you're going to cut something off, always make sure you cut off enough that it looks on purpose. Blurriness is annoying, too, but I assume you already knew that.

>>158622
Aww. Tranny looks sad. :'(
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
sorry, but i find em all pretty pooptastic
>> LTAFTP !zh0Xc1l5DE
Almost forgot my code.

No more comments? All fail?
>> Anonymous
>>158617
sassy gangsta gurl!
>> Anonymous
>>158633

the photos are crap but ac will praise anything with something that looks like a woman in the image.
>> LTAFTP !zh0Xc1l5DE
How am I doing it wrong?
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
>>159050
QFT
>> heavyweather !4AIf7oXcbA
How do you know all these gorgeous prostitutes?

Heh... making something black and white to hide its flaws is a baaaad reason. But in any case, these are alright.
>>158621
This never should have made it past editing. Blur like that just isn't acceptable.
>>158620
She looks like a corpse the way her eyes are all dark, the vignette is hokey and lame.
>>158622
Again with the blur.
>>158617
This one is so close to being good... about 30 degrees to her right. If you have no light on their face, turn them until you do. There's not enough contrast here, and her overall tone is too dark and underexposed. The fix is in the lighting.
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Trying to salvage something out of it. :/

It's either leave it in color and it looks obviously wrong or make it black and white and most people will go "Hey, that's artsy!"

But this doesn't fool /p/ and I was honest in the first post anyway.
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Low fidelity instantart!
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Ghetto fabulous
>> Anonymous
it'd be nice if your model was comfortable with you.
>> LTAFTP !zh0Xc1l5DE
They were intimidated by the size of my cock.
>> Anonymous
sage
>> beethy !HJGkSBB3Ao
they are
all
so shit

i hope you paid them, and not the other way around
even TFCD would've been a waste of their time.
>> LTAFTP !zh0Xc1l5DE
>>159077
>>159081

Oh wow, I didn't realize I was so bad.
>> Anonymous
Sega