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Anonymous
Hey /p/

First time posting a photo here. Criticize away. I'm just starting out and looking to learn.
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>> Honest So You Dont Have To Be !9UISPtwBPo
>>241557

You made a good start!

Technically this picture is sound, I would have liked a tighter crop, but for a newcomer, you get bonus points for using manual!
>> Anonymous
Oh man I love that sky, and I don't know shit about photography.
>> Anonymous
i find the background to be very distracting. would have be awesome if this guy didnt move at all so you could do a longer shutter speed to just get blur instead of blur with recognizable people in it.
the guy seems a bit too underexposed.
still, its a pretty good shot.
>> Anonymous
its nice, but its too bad the yellow is so bright, its distracting me from the real subject, that man

maybe try toning it down, reducing the bright colours
>> Anonymous
What scares me is that people like him are putting together the rides hundreds of kids safety depend on.
>> Anonymous
>>241617
just because hes dirty and creepy doesnt mean his incompetent
>> Anonymous
>>241621

no, but it means hes using the money he stole from your mommas purse to pay for his Carny ride grease.
>> Anonymous
>>241632
as long as the rides greased.....
>> Anonymous
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>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
I wish the carny were a liiiiittle sharper, but I still love this shot.
>> Anonymous
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Thanks for the crit, all.

>>241586
>>241585
Tried to tone down the yellow a bit and lighten our friend up a bit. I think it looks a bit washed out now, but it's always good to wait a bit and look at it later. Thoughts?

>>241640
LLers? Ony my /p/?

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>> Anonymous
Actually pretty well done, nice work
>> Anonymous
i like it