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aor
Hey /p/,
Here's two photos I took today. I used a Sony Cybershot DSC-W100, the girl is my ex.

Critiques would be appreciated.
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>> aor
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i spent more time on the last one that I did on this one.

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>> Anonymous
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loli HAET
>> Anonymous
Model is disgracious.
>> Anonymous
>>81917
Her posture is horrid.
>> try2bnumb
I like the positioning of the second photo with the guy. I also liked the flash with the second more than the first. His glasses where top notch as well.
>> Anonymous
not sure what that stain is on the guys crotch.
>> Anonymous
>>81993
The flash was just hard light from the point and shoot I was using, it's all basically post-processing. She obviously doesn't have bad posture I just snapped the picture as she was getting done putting her bag on the floor.

The guy in the second pic is me (tripod) and the stain on my crotch is ketchup.
>> Anonymous
>>82041
wtf
>> Anonymous
she looks like a jew
>> Anonymous
might want to make sure you have everything straight... and that you dont use downies as models
>> Anonymous
ewwww
>> else !L6xabslN96
>>82059
what sort of shooping did u do?

its a great backdrop for photoshoots. did u take any more? the girl's feet are cut-off and u should be a little more creative, like come up with some sort of concept for the photos.
>> aor
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>>82160
I desaturated the first layer and played with the the opacity of the top layer, plus a lot of dodging and burning, thats pretty much it.
I usually take pictures with the intent of shopping them until I save up to buy a good DSLR.

<<< This is the only other one I edited.

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>> Anonymous
you fail. hardcore.
learn how to pose your subjects and choose better pictures for your uploads. if you took any at least...
none of the poses are well done and look very much... posed. get a book on subject photography and figure out how to correctly/incorrectly pose people.
>> Anonymous
>>82227
Your ex is a boring model
>> aor
>>82261
I can assure you that I the furthest thing from my mind was posing my model, she did all the posing herself and I only uploaded the ones where she looked boring because I personally liked those the best.
I can see what you're saying though, if the photo was supposed to be editorial or on the cover of something I would have payed more attention.
>> Anonymous
Wow, has the girl ever learned how to stand?
>> Anonymous
>>82277
in that case the girl is retarded for thinking this is a good pose, and you may also have some problems for liking it the best.
>> aor
>>82280
I already told you, I picked the ones where she looked boring, this wasn't a "photoshoot", I took out my camera, told her to stand at the wall and took one photo after another, whether she was posing or not.

I have nothing to say about liking this the best though, maybe I DO have problems.
>> Anonymous
I'd hit it
>> nokin !ozOtJW9BFA
With a blunt object
>> Anonymous
>>82281
If you weren't trying to take halfway decent photos, why post them here? That's what MySpace is for! They'd love you as it's a cesspool of bad poses.