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(con't) >>205655 Ah, new model. Great pose and lighting, but why are her toes suddenly dark? As you improve, you need to be mindful of your environment. Also, her left leg tells me she's stretching out, but her right makes it look like she's spreading open. Would've helped to get her other foot out from behind her. Also, a little space to include her fingers, and crop out that building to the right. Put the post she's leaning against right up to the frame.
>>205657 The complexion of these models make it tough to photograph them together. One's gonna get over or under exposed. I really feel that you should be closer than this, thirds isn't working for you here. If you wanted to include more of the background, then maybe try to include less of the buildings and other people on the left. Also, your sensor or lens is dirty.
>>205661 Great composition, the repetition's working for you, even in the little pock marks in the sand leading up to her. Just wish she had some feet. Also, lighting on the stomach's at a great angle, but her legs are a little overexposed. Cute face, probably should've lost the rings though. They distract me for some reason.
>>205666 AWESOME angle for the lighting on her stomach, face, tits, and bikini bottom. AWFUL lighting on her legs. Their pose looks too good to be hidden. And if you really wanna do some glamor photo retouching, clean up the little bit of fat on her upper arm. (inb4 that punkass who complains about retouching being too superficial.)
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