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Holy Jesus, that's noisier than a colicky baby on an airplane. Goddamn. What did you do to this poor, unsuspecting image? Did you shoot ISO 100 film at ISO1600 or something? Small sensor compact at its max ISO two stops underexposed and then pushed in post?
Suggestions for improvement: LESS FUCKING NOISE. Expose it properly with a reasonable ISO. You uploaded as GIF so we have no EXIF so we have no real idea what you did here that we could use to help you out, so I can't give specific advice. Also--and this is probably a symptom of the overall exposure/ISO problem--your blacks are too gray and your whites are too gray. A little levels/curves work could probably help a lot, but it won't help with that noise.
Also, crop or pose her so you don't get that little fold of skin there. Lord knows I'm okay with some curves on a woman, but that ruins the nice line of the hip you've set up there. Other than that, compositionally, it's fine.
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