I took this of one of my friends and was wondering what people thought
I think you underexposed the subject.
That iPod headphone wire looks a little too wide.
i wanted a backlit shot but be able to have something like the chain shine
He should take up more of the frame..and I feel like the perspective is either too low or too high... feels uncomfortable where it is right now.And center him so the background curves equally on both sides and feels like it leads towards him.
Some fill flash couldn't hurt. Even the on-board camera flash -1.5 EV or so would be an improvement.Your perspective is unique, but seeing the subject would make this much better.
Shitty shit is shitalso no exif, only faggots wear faggotchains, and nigras are never good subjects.Parking lot shit is overdone, though, I think you should have done something with the arrows on the pavement
It's kinda pretentious and bland... I agree with Higgz about the subject needing to fill up more of the frame.And I think that a tiny bit of fill flash would be good also. Not too much because then you would lose the whole mysterious thing or whatever.
I don't think you have any friends. Enjoy your self portrait.More seriously: You can't really make out what the subject is. We know it's "your friend" because you told us, but otherwise it could just as easily be some sort of parking barrier or something. It is shapeless and lumpy and looks like you shopped the person black rather than exposing it as a silhouette.
>>239054*rubs eyes*...ac?
>>239056Yeah, I'm back now. For a while at least. It's this whole big thing.
>>239054cannot unsee that the person is now a parking barrier
>It's kinda pretentious and bland...>beethy !vW/UaE6zYULOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL