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Hey /p/, i'm pretty new to photography and wondered if you'd critique a few of my photos that I took yesterday. Any tips are greatly appreciated.
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>> Anonymous
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Last one.

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>> Anonymous
Is everyone asleep?
>> Anonymous
I like them. A lot are very line oriented though and a bit similar, so you may want to try expanded your horizons, so to speak.

Also, /p/ hates selective desaturation, so be prepared to be flamed for the last one. I, however, think it was done quite well and is probably my favorite of the set.
>> Vincent !!8LCSE0Zp1mL
First, probably resize your pics to about the same dimensions as the first post. They take FOREVER to load on 4chan.

Second, blurry B+W does not = insta art

Third, Keep it easy with the shadows / highlights tool, Or multi layer editing. They make your pics look strange, and give halo's to your points of interest.. (#3 = really bad for that)

Selective Desaturation, I would especially avoid on 4chan. However I think #10 is your best composed picture.

I can see the patterns / framing you are going for, but I don't think you are in a terribly interesting place to take those shots, Maybe wait for better / not overcast lighting and try again (preferably with some different subject matter aswell).

They just feel a tad boring to me, The composition isn't bad, but its nothing great either. So I'm going to say good effort, try again!
>> Anonymous
>>225547
Thanks for the advice.
>> Atomic_Garden !!5OkhraH7Oi3
Resize please.