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>>276984
Badly composed and out of focus.
There is so much colour in this scene, yet its dull and wasted.
Missed opportunity
>>276985
Very awkward composition, for instance there is not enough room at the top of the water fall, just kind of ends, then almost instantly is cut off.
The two rocks either side are distracting, not enough in the fame to be foreground interest, but enough to be annoying.
Poor placement of subjects, and a bad angle on the waterfall, the flowing water is cut up into random lines and isnt so nice to look at.
>>276986
Again, you would expect rich colours and earthy tones from this, but they are wasted on you. almost the exact same composition as the first shot, which sucks.
You need to find a nice angle (eye level, or couching a tiny bit is not enough), then compose them well (stop cutting there feet off!!!), and after this,THEN take the photograph.
>>276988
Ugly shadow, burnt out clouds, bad angle, poorly composed.
>>276989
Am i missing something here? ist a woman whacking a post into the ground, unless thats a woman you know, this photo means nothing, you have to try harder to get story into your shots
>>276993
Same problems as all the other people shots, bad colour, poorly composed...
>>276998
Yet again...
>>277002
Wouldent be out on place on a 16 year olds DA account with a title like "sleeping beauty" or "forgotten man" or some shit like that.
This IS a fantastic opportunity, there was so many options for truly spectacular photos here. but again, wasted
>>277022
Good moment, ruined....
Same problems as all the other human shots, but the poor composure is even more apparent.
..cont..
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