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>>230709 >>230713
I agree, I think if the lighting was better, it would work better- I like the composition and selective focus, but she just doesn't draw your eye because of where the sunlight is hitting.
>>230712
Okay, better lighting here. It's a little boring, but it's better than the first one. The scratches on the photo are distracting, though. It would be better to clean them up in photoshop before presenting it.
>>230716
The light again is a miss here... it's just kind of harsh on that one area on her arm... and she looks really uncomfortable. A good portrait is supposed to let you in on a person's personality, but it looks like she's heavily guarded against letting anybody see that.
>>230718
OK, fair texture and lighting. Nothing too remarkable, but it's not bad.
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