File :-(, x, )
Any win here? Fu
Snagged this with good timing. Aside from bland color, any crits?
EXIF data available. Clickhereto show/hide.
Abort trap (core dumped)
>> Jeremo !iKGMr61IHM
hahahha abort trap??? ahahhaha

hmmm okay

Before the hordes descend...

I think i see what you're trying to capture, the gull with it's beak open.

The DoF is fine as you're trying to emphasise the subject but the composition and the surrounding natural frame leaves a little to be desired. The bottom gull is a painful distraction as are the other gulls too... unless of course they're meant to be disemboweled.

honestly, aside from the timing i can think of anything else that works with this. Next time, try walking around and getting different angles

But of course i ain't no authority, and keep on snapping.
>> Fu
yeah. abort trap? I was hoping someone could educate my newfaggery on what is up with that. The original as it was is better I guess. This is quite cropped. Of all things, I am terrible at comp. As soon as someone points out the bad bits, I always wonder what I was thinking.
>> Jeremo !iKGMr61IHM
check your exif.

It's just completely cluttered... The focus point is there once you look for it, but before you get a chance to absorb it the rest of the shot yanks you out.

The lighting ain't flattering either. The top third with the curb and grass is also unnecessary
>> Fu
     File :-(, x)
Yeah....sorry about all that. I was a little intoxicated and posted that at 2am. Does this redeem?
>> Anonymous
>>103099

the city lights are too bright. imo, either kill them or injure them with photoshop. other than that, a cool long exposure. i think there is a sea monster in the pond :]
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
>>103172
I really like the glow of the light pollution, personally.
>> Anonymous
>>103196
Seconded, it looks cool =)
>> Anonymous
>>103196

yeah the glow is cool, but the actual source of the glow is in i've-been-overexposed-like-hell white mode. It's a badass photo right now, and through a little work with the burn tool, it would be badasser.
>> Anonymous
i absolutely loathe the glow of light pollution, yeah it makes for an interesting scene for a picture, but in real life, its fucking annoying.
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
needs saturation

Abort trap (core dumped)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>>102902
there's a photo in the first one you posted, if you play with it some

didn't have much file to work with though : /

Abort trap (core dumped)