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ruka !IyFSGDdFgw
sup /p/,

I'd like to ask for a bit of concrit on those. I'm pretty newbish, so any help is appreciated.
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>> ruka !IyFSGDdFgw
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>> ruka !IyFSGDdFgw
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>> ruka !IyFSGDdFgw
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kinda spent.

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>> else !L6xabslN96
the first two photos need more space to balance out the composition. its uncomfortable to look at such a zoomed up shot of someones face(unless its macro), without some more space.

would be nice if the first photo showed more hair, and didnt cut off the girl's forehead.

>>83167
fapfapfapfapfapfapfap...
>> ruka !IyFSGDdFgw
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>>83183
Here's the original, we found her forehead a bit too large.

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>> Anonymous
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>> ruka !IyFSGDdFgw
>>83190
yeah, right.
>> else !L6xabslN96
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>>83189
true, big forehead is biiiiig...cropping it a little more helps in this case - gives the impression the photo is wider than it actually is and shifting the focal weight(her face) from being clustered in the corner.

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>> Anonymous
>>83193
looks better indeed, thank you. I'll keep that in mind.