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Anonymous
Taken with a Yashica FR. Critiques are kindly welcomed- thank you
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>> Honest So You Dont Have To Be !9UISPtwBPo
>Critiques are kindly welcomed- thank you

You must be new here

As for the shot, i like it, would have been better if it was level with the bridge
>> Anonymous
Haha, no, I'm actually not new, but thanks for the comment. This is actually a cropped version, I cut out some bridge at the top.
>> Anonymous
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Here is the original, no crop. Any suggestions on cropping this one or is it alright the way it is?

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>> Anonymous
rotate so bridge is even then crop
>> Honest So You Dont Have To Be !9UISPtwBPo
>rotate so bridge is even then crop

Listen to this anon.

the crop you had was nice, nothing wrong with that, it just need to be level.
>> Anonymous
Thanks for the suggestions. Here is rotated and cropped version.
>> Anonymous
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Thanks for the suggestions. Here is rotated and cropped version.

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>> Anonymous
Nice. The contrast between the illuminated girl and the complete silhouette of the boy catches the eye nicely. Reminds me of an impressionist painting somehow.
>> Anonymous
Why does /p/ always want to rotate everything? Haven't you guys heard of diagonals?
>> Mr. Higgzbuffonton !!Xsltv1VWxZT
>>246850
would you really say the 1st picture has better composition has than the 2nd?
>> Mr. Higgzbuffonton !!Xsltv1VWxZT
>>246852
minus the second has..
>> Anonymous
Straight lines usually make the picture look more thought out but I actually prefer how the OPs picture was composed. Sometimes imperfection in a picture is cool. The ceiling looks like its bowing too so straitening it out doesn't really have a pronounced effect.
>> Anonymous
To tell you the truth, I prefer the non-rotated one. I think you cropped a bit too much of the top out, I lost the sense that it was taken under a bridge.
>> Anonymous
I'd say the uncropped version looks better, the underside of the bridge gives the photo a proper setting.