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Anonymous
All need captions. Overall good work, but I'd edit tighter.
>>172568 >>172569 Too loose framing. I usually like loose framing, but it doesn't work here.
>>172565 Well-composed, but the front cop is just a little bit too much out of focus for where he is in the scene. It's distracting. Best idea would've been to focus somewhere between the two cops, so neither robs attention off the other and/or stop down a bit more.
>>172563 The second-best one. Well-composed. The two people in the foreground and then the bitchy-apathetic hot girl pull it together.
>>172564 Best one. Proof positive images are not to be judged by thumbnails; I was about to write "Too snapshotty" for this, but I figured I should look at it first. It's awesome.
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I have no clue why you decided to focus on the bench and not the people in the background. It kills the shot totally.
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