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Super Artfag
Some I took the other week... I could really use some opinions.

All that is edited is colors, saturation specifically, and contrast (curves)

No other manipulations.
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>> Super Artfag
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>> Jeremo !iKGMr61IHM
as far as processing i think it's clean, the highlights are a little clipped with the light in the centre... but you know to use curves, which is great... i don't have any idea... i have to mess with levels and sliders... i should read a tutorial.

But as far as focus is... what should i focus on? maybe crop the top? or even a close up of the red sign with the fence and door.
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>> angrylittleboy !wrJcGUHncE
Needs more people? Personal opinion, though.
>> Super Artfag
>>97172
I agree, however it was at 2:00 am at an empty, cold train station.
>> Anonymous
>>97079
Aah Jeremo, always providing good critique
>> iProd !8x7lXo9zIQ
I hate people in my shots.
>> Anonymous
The thumbnail of the first one made me go "Oh, wow!" when "zip.4chan.org/p/" loaded. It's downright great.

The others are good, too, but nowhere near as good as the first.

The second is too visually busy... it would've been better without being seen through the wires. Then it would've been a little plain, but oh well.

I would've centered the trash can on the third, to show more of the side wall. The little sliver of it is distracting.

The last one looks beautiful, but it doesn't seem to have much more too it.

Well processed, all of them.
>> Anonymous
>>97571
Or rather, not the wires as a whole, but that big diagonal thick thing holding them in the middle.
>> Jeremo !iKGMr61IHM
>>97535

... I read that as sarcasm... so... sorry... I'm not really articulate with criticisms most of the time.