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Critique session Invidia !O/QKRId24k
tear me apart
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>> Anonymous
the fat old lady in the background is distracting, and crop is too tight.

it'd be nice if the spinning was less blurred out though
>> Invidia !O/QKRId24k
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too tight in which direction, I actually cropped a little of the right side before I posted it.

whats wrong with the blurry loom?

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>> Anonymous
the blurry loom makes since to me. conveys motion well
>> Anonymous
>>240364

I'd like if if the woman in the background either wasn't there, or you had less DOF.
>> Invidia !O/QKRId24k
>>240375

I thought I lightened that before I posted.
>> Mr. Higgzbuffonton !!Xsltv1VWxZT
good stuff.
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
>>240364
What I don't like:
1. The background woman's head is cut off. If the cut hadn't been right at the neck, it would've been better
2. The woman in the background's leg is blended in with the spinning wheel
3. The focus is on the woman's face. I think it would have been better to focus on her hands, since that's where the action is. And really, it's not even on her face--looks more like her shoulder.

But it's a great scene with a lot of potential. You just didn't do much with that potential. ;)

>>240375
This one has the opposite problem. Perfectly adequate photo of a scene that's not really that interesting. Probably looked cool in real life, but boring flattened to 2D at 1000x667.
>> Anonymous
>>240364

looks liek she's pulling string out of the other lady's crotch.. lern2compose
>> Invidia !O/QKRId24k
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Ok, more. Judging by the comments about the first picture regarding the distracting hag in the background, I made a crop.

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>> Anonymous
>>240371
>crop is too tight
So is her clothes
>> Mr. Higgzbuffonton !!Xsltv1VWxZT
>>240719
can't be unseen.

>>240714
>think it would have been better to focus on her hands
this.