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>>78621 Needs to be in black and white, with just a smidge more contrast.
>>78622 Okay. Needs to be tighter: you should've shifted a bit around and either used a longer lens or moved in closer. Would benefit from being in black and white. Good opportunity, but it didn't really work out for you.
>>78623 Unlike AC, I think the people "in the way" add to it. Without them, it'd just be a photographic quip; as it is, the image has this air of anxiety and menace to it. Nice use of color. Overall, great work.
>>78624 Cool-looking but insubstantial.
>>78625 Great contrast between subjects, but the composition didn't pan out. Again, missed chance, and again, would benefit from being in black and white. If you had a view camera or a lens baby to pull off selective focus, and just had the guy and the Porsche logo sharp and everything else slightly out of focus, that would've been great, but hey, I doubt anyone on these boards owns a view camera and most (including myself) probably don't own a lens baby.
>>78627 I don't like it, but I can't put my finger on why.
>>78644 AC's right. Meh.
>>78645 Great use of depth of field, and the subtle color's really nice. Good work.
>>78677 Shots like this are fun to make, but really don't do much.
>>78680 Very great, good color, although something seems a little off. I want to say the closest guy seems a little out of focus, but looking at it, I don't really see that. I see something else off.
>>78688 Again, cool-looking but insubstantial.
>>>>78693 Nice concept and so on, but it didn't work out. Something about this photograph just throws it all off, and I can't pin down what.
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