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Looking for Constructive Criticisms on some recent photos...
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>> Anonymous
>>212370

Okay, I'll bite. It's okay, but I'd prefer more of it in the frame. I know it was probably more of a "graphical" thing rather than "oops I missed it" but I think there's too much black space.

>>212371

I like the way the light shines through the petals, but it could be sharper. Also if the slight blue tint of the background was simply all white I think it would look better.

>>212372

I think a larger f/stop would be better here. You focused on the eye which is okay but I think seeing more details of the hairs on the face of the dog would be more interesting. The composition isn't that captivating and there's little to keep me interested in the photo with a nondescript BG and a mostly unfocused subject. The harsh glare of the right side of the face is also really distracting.

>>212374

I really don't like this. It's really boring, colors are boring, nothing seems in focus, nothing interests me here.

>>212376

Also really crappy, no focus, dull lighting, stupid face on the guy, nondescript clothes.
>> Anonymous
>>212370

i just set this one as my desktop


good work
>> Anonymous
>>212379

And by larger f/stop I probably should have said smaller (f/8 or f/11 maybe)
>> Vincent !!8LCSE0Zp1mL
>>212370
Waay too much black space, firework isn't that great either.

>>212371
Pretty nice, DOF could have been a bit better, and more local contrast in the flower would have been nice.

>>212372
Lots of potential, however I think the crop is too tight. Otherwise this is my favorite.

>>212374
Too boring for normal shot, too busy for minimalistic, Try to keep it simple and a bit of texture in the empty space doesn't hurt either. The halo's from the street lights is the worst part too.

>>212376
Worst, Framing is bad, no contrast, fuzzy, bad expression.
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Final for tonight
>> Anonymous
>>212391
Uninteresting Subject

>>212400
Nothing seems in focus, seems too processed.
>> Anonymous
Mostly uninteresting.
I like the greyhound one. Flower shots can be awesome, same with streetlights but branch out a bit.