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Anonymous
Hey /p/eople,

Just thought I'd post some of my shots to see what I can do better. The shots are off my deviant art (I know, its full of drama fags) and so the watermark is on them. I'll repost without the watermark later when i find my flash drive if anyone cares.

Well, let me have it. Tell me what sucks.
>> Anonymous
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Fix'd. No water marks.

This print came out shitty.
>> Anonymous
>Tell me what sucks
Your photography.
>> Anonymous
>>56040
yep, quite bland.
>> street-pirate
>>56040

Ouch.

Both shots could probably use less exposure and more contrast. The first one has some potential, however there is something missing to make it really interesting. The second one is kind of hopeless.
>> Liska !!LIVFOETqL8j
OP, #1- never shoot into the light. really. It washes out your photo and does bad things. If you can, you need to filter your photographs, will give you better tone and color/b/w areas and so on. Are you printing your own stuff?
>> Anonymous
>>56040
Meh, Im here for crit, and by saying this your actually helping. Im sure your fist shots sucked balls too.

>>56046
Yep. Printing my own stuff. Just got into the hobby. I have a pack of assorted enlarger filters coming in soon on loan from a friend. I'll fiddle around with them. Im also going to try to get out and take shots with more enteresting subject matter.
>> Liska !!LIVFOETqL8j
>>56049

try to find interesting things, yeah. keep in mind also that you're shooting black and white. What colors in color doesn't always work b/w, just fool around a lot