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All feedback? Well, okay: 1. "I" should be capitalized, both intrinsically and because it starts your sentence. 2. "Isn't" has an apostrophe in it. 3. "I'm" has an apostrophe in it. 4. "Mum's" is posessive, so also needs an apostrophe. 5. "Thought" is not spelled "thot". 6. Punctuation is your friend. Run-on sentences are not.
> I know it isn't up to your standards and such, since I'm not a pro photographer. I just took it on my mum's digi cam and wanted to see what you guys thought. All feedback is welcome. :) Fix'd.
(As for the photo, I'm too impatient to load a 1.97MB file. Scale that down to a much lower resolution before posting, please)
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