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Liska
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personally, i think the first one is "composed" better than the second one, because the main area of focus is more of the flower/butterfly. In the 2nd one, it seems too busy and my eye wanders around a lot. The focus on the first one is also better.
As far as what can be improved on both of them.. it looks like you're shooting standing up, so all the angles you're capturing things from is up and above the object. If you go back out into the garden and see another butterfly, try kneeling/sitting down to catch it from more of a head-on or even from below angle, those tend to make things more interesting.
in response to the first one- for nature, landscape, etc nope.. unless you're above and beyond everyone else theres really no way to make a career out of it.
i.e.- go outside and practice a lot :)
Also: what type of camera do you have? You aren't showing any EXIF data on either shot
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