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>>209548 The lighting's fine in my opinion. What isn't is her eye makeup. The glitter stands out too much, otherwise fine. Touch-up issues: clean up the loose strands of hair, those bumps to the left of her right eye, and shave her mustache. Skin on her nose needs smoothed too.
>>209550 The background in the upper-right corner needs to be true black, otherwise it's too distracting. Maybe clean up her peach fuzz on her shoulder, but otherwise leave the sharp texture of her skin because I love the contrast between that and the snake's scales.
>>209557 Again, shitty makeup. What's really making these for me is the atmosphere. The subdued lighting, etc. Don't let her ruin it with her glittery shit. Again, clean up the loose strands of hair, mustache, hole in her earlobe from earrings, some of her blemishes, and the neck wrinkles. Depending on how personal you want it to be, you might want to leave the scar on her lip or let it go. If she paid you, just let it go or ask. If this is you just playing around, take it off. It's too faint to really add to the work.
Overall, lighting and atmosphere's really great. Keep up the good work giving us Anon's here in /p/ a better name.
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