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tizzou
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>>279471 Face is blurry, your upclose wideangle is showing, hair in her face. Good even lighting, though. >>279472 Watch out for blowing the highlights and dark deep shadows--try using a diffuser over her and opposite from you. Try a tighter crop too, seems like too much empty space above here. >>279473 Clothes of hers in background, same thing about shadow/highlight, something about the pose seems wierd, can't ut my finger on it. Shorter DoF would've helped.
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