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Opines?
Nikon N80 + Nikkor 50m 1.8D + Provia 100f
>> Anonymous !dMYYvF5Blo
The face is bland... Get closer.
I think even making it darker would be better.

Elaborate on the Provia 100f
I know its a film... but not much else.
>> Anonymous
bad lighting is bad

too much space above the head and below torso (need tighter shot)

what the hell are those distracting dark areas along the top borders?

subject matter has positive characteristics though. i would shoot him again.
>> Anonymous
>>106154

I disagree with this guy; I think the composition if fantastic.

If I had to say anything, I would say 'make it darker', but I happen to do that excessively to all of my images.
>> Anonymous
>>106155
Good lighting is good

Nice, smooth shadow and appropriate contrast

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provia is the neutral, balanced, precise professional fujichrome reversal film. It has average saturation, average contrast, good grain and good white balance.
>> Anonymous
>>106154
I agree, get closer
But also,
fix your white balance
and consider making it black and white; I think it would bring out more details.
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>>106155
Ever heard of fucking slides?
Jesus, people.

Also, other shot.
>> Anonymous
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If I wanted B/W, I would have shot B/W.
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Looks better in B/W.
I also agree the borders look bad, so I got rid of em.

Learn to take criticism or gtfo

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That DOES look pretty snazzy in black and white. Maybe some more contrast too? Maybe I added too much I dunno.

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i know that was a joke but if OP did shoot with b/w film, the lighting was better, and used this framing the pic would be 9000 times more interesting ....
>> Anonymous
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also needs a filter depending on what effect he wanted
>> Anonymous
>>106243

thats some art right there.
>> Anonymous
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I love that my random crop is more artsy than all of my other photos I've actually taken with thought in mind... Oy.
>> pskaught
needs a little sparkle in his eye. and some croppage.

but god damn, that's a nice lens
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I lol'd
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im lolling on line
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Damn... Is that Ryan Stiles OP? I know "whos line" was old, but damn.
>> Anonymous
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I'm surprised no one pointed that out sooner
>> Anonymous
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Looks like Hugh Hefner to me.
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
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Theory: Hugh Heffner sired Ryan Stiles in a drunken orgy back in the 50s.
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HOLY SHIT