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sage
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okay, I'll give you a serious critique.
The composition isn't very good, the top of your subjects head is missing, and their hand is cut in half. The smoke lacks any real definition and doesn't add anything to the picture imo, I think it would look better with no smoke so that their face and cigarette were clearly visible. It still wouldn't be very good, though, there's too much else working against it. If youre dead set on using smoke, something like this is so much nicer to look at.
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