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Anonymous
C&C please.
>> Anonymous
Oh, since I forgot EXIF...
Canon 30D
EF 100mm Macro
ISO 800
f/7.1
1/250 sec
>> Anonymous
hmm, could use a better angle but very nice subject
>> eku !8cibvLQ11s
>>59812

Needs more contrast. Needs more something else. Macro just don't work here. Maybe something wider, so sky would fit in too!
>> heavyweather !4AIf7oXcbA
y helo thar weston

But yes, I second the previous suggestions: contrast, contrast, contrast. It needs to have a much darker dark. The light tones are pretty good though, but they'd benefit from being placed next to some darkness.
>> Anonymous
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I gave it another go based on the suggestions here (except for eku...what the fuck are you talking about?)
>> elf_man !fBgo7jDjms
Contrast makes it. I like the composition, looks nice.
>> lols anonymous
Agree with eku--the closeup doesn't really work here. It reminds me of the various junk I'd find on muddy construction sites as a kid--not in a nostalgic or otherwise good way, but just in mundaneness. The angle is kinda boring, too, as noted by Anonymous, and it looks like the bones have been carefully laid out for the shot. Dull.

The bones -themselves- are interesting, and the plus contrast is much the improvement. As far as the current composition goes, it's handy having the bones in a bit of a pit, given that the shadow therein frames the lighter bone.
>> Anonymous
>>60036
These were some vertebrae lying on the surface of a rock. NOT laid out carefully in any way, or even touched. I still don't get why you people would want a wider view...all you'd see would be more of the surrounding rock, and then you'd complain that there wasn't enough focus on the central subject.
>> Anonymous
>>59823
You're a goddamned idiot.
>> eku !8cibvLQ11s
>>60202

And I'm so offended right now! Maybe I'll go cut myself.
Why does the world hate me!

;________;
>> Anonymous
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>>59812

Your welcome.

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>> Anonymous
>>60400
Gay.
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
>>60400
Did that joke really warrant 2.73 MB, 3072x2304?
>> Anonymous
I have 3 words for you.

<b>RULE OF THIRDS.</b>
>> sno??uou? !cdR2GGlO2w
>>60437
- it's not a rule
- lol html
>> Anonymous
>>60437
Not everything has to (or should) follow the rule of thirds. It gets boring after a while.