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>> Anonymous
You could have put in a little bit more thought regarding the composition but it's ok.
>> Anonymous
looks awesome!
>> Anonymous
i like it

ignore>>257869
>> Anonymous
>>257869here

I explain:
Right upper and lower corner has distracting dark stuff. It doesn't ruin the picture bit it takes away the possibility of a perfect picture.
Ok now I'm guessing: The angle seems like OP was walking down the hall and thought "Oh this could be a nice picture!" and just took it, standing there withouth thinking about to kneel down, move to the side, etc.

But I give him that this one or two seconds later the people would have moved and the way they are now is just fine.

That's why it's ok but yould have been better.
>> beethy !vW/UaE6zYU
very nice shot man
>> Kilz2latex !!3htj9hFDMA4
i like it alot.
would be better if that room was lit! but its really nice. you could even potentially clone tool that room out? unless your one of those "THEN ITS NOT PHOTOGRAPHY" people.

everything else is great.
well done!
>> Anonymous !SDPEsPMnww
>>257883
Oh, you mean the black room on the first floor? I could lighten it up a bit.

>>257880Right upper and lower corner has distracting dark stuff. It doesn't ruin the picture bit it takes away the possibility of a perfect picture.
Thanks. I'll keep these things in mind as I edit in the future.
>The angle seems like OP was walking down the hall and thought "Oh this could be a nice picture!" and just took it, standing there withouth thinking about to kneel down, move to the side, etc.
I was just trying to capture the person in the middle who was just standing there looking up for a second. After I popped off a shot at my initial reaction, she turned and walked off. I didn't have time to think about it and take a second shot, but I don't think my gut reaction was too bad.
>> Martin !!ve2Q1ETWmJH
>>257896
I like it
Although the dark is abit distracting.
Use the Dodge tool, size 300 or something. 10% Opacity. And just lighten the area up abit
>> else !L6xabslN96
>>257867
love it!

what process did u use to convert to b&w just for interest's sake?
>> Anonymous !SDPEsPMnww
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>>257899
Just Lightroom 2.0

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