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hey /p/ Anonymous
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>> heavyweather !4AIf7oXcbA
Supercool! I wish you could've done a little bit more shopping to make it less apparent that you simply mirrored one of your layers. Make the environment look symmetrical, but not identical.

Also, the foreground bottom right and left are a tad distracting. I think I would've preferred a composition with just the two strong upper lines sweeping downwards, rather than the diamond-y thing that's happening right now.
>> Anonmyass
Looks like you are about to fall on the left side. vury noice
>> Anonymous
>>131587

I like the concept with the light-drawn wings.

However, the mirrored images don't blend terribly well and it breaks the illusion that we are looking down a single hallway.
>> heavyweather !4AIf7oXcbA
>>131608
Precisely.
>> Anonymous
thanks for your comments so far they are very interesting.

im interested in what you think i was trying to talk about with this photo.
>> heavyweather !4AIf7oXcbA
>>131643
A technical critique I can give you briefly... an artistic critique could go on for pages and pages. ;) I'm gonna stick with the short one, heh.
>> Anonymous
>>131646

darn :P