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op !TK/UA49EzE
Looking for a bit of crit.
>> op !TK/UA49EzE
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I know I proably do too much photoshop for the tastes of /p/, though.
>> Anonymous
Anon approves so far.
>> Anonymous
>>191477
wrong
anon doesnt care so far.......
>> op !TK/UA49EzE
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>> Anonymous
>>191471
Lighting is too harsh here
Also find a better model
>> op !TK/UA49EzE
>>191490
Better model as in better looking, which is a matter of taste?
>> Anonymous
>>191490
failsage.
>> elf_man !!DdAnyoDMfCe
>>191498
This is 4chan, no model will be up to standards. Just ignore it unless it's actually relevant to the photo.
>> op !TK/UA49EzE
>>191502
thought so.
>> Anonymous
Your photos are nothing interesting.
Show us more perhaps?
>> op !TK/UA49EzE
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>>191511
more interesting?
>> Anonymous
too damn small, and where's the exif data?
>> op !TK/UA49EzE
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>>191514
better?

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>> elf_man !!DdAnyoDMfCe
>>191512
I like this, and I think you've lined things up so that the tilt is not distracting.
>>191471
Feels like it needs to be in closer, which may require the mannequin to be relocated. Right now it's conflicting, given that the focus is on the girl. And yeah, looks like the highlights are blown a bit, which I'm guessing is due to your contrast changes in photoshop. Although, for this, I like the washed-out colors on her skin.
>> op !TK/UA49EzE
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>>191521
I didn't notice the blown highlights so far, so thank you.

Have another one? This one seems a bit empty to me, so I'd appreciate input on how to make it look more balanced.

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>> elf_man !!DdAnyoDMfCe
>>191527
Uh, that vignette looks really artificial. Too rectangular, and it isn't even visible on the left side.
It's all the dead space towards the upper right. Maybe if you put her head all the way in the corner, and the ornament more in line with the upper left corner.
>> op !TK/UA49EzE
>>191534
sounds good, I'll try that.
>> Anonymous
OP, I know everyone bitches here about resizing (and rightly so) but your pics are a tad too miniscule.
>> op !TK/UA49EzE
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posting bigger versions...

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>> op !TK/UA49EzE
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>> Anonymous
>>191550
I'd like this one if it weren't so blown out. Here arm becomes part of the sky.
>> op !TK/UA49EzE
>>191551
I was kind of going for blown-out, but it wasn't well received.
>> Anonymous
You know these shots are fucking awesome because nobody on /p/ has said something along the lines of "Shitsux" or "God, learn something about fucking photography..." yet.

inb4 shitsux
>> Anonymous
>>191602
>nobody on /p/ has said something along the lines of "Shitsux
ausfag hour will start in 6 or so hours.
>> op !TK/UA49EzE
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>>191604
Looking forward to that. :)

Not sure about this one.

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