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Alright, let's see... I'm not really in the mood to really put a lot of effort into this tonight, but I'll try to give you as much constructive criticism as I can. Looks like a lot of fun with a reflector, did you just start using one?
>>291539 Not bad, but a little too much headroom for my taste. Fairly standard.
>>291540 A lot of empty space and focus on the blown out, contrasty background. I prefer more attention on the subject.
>>291542 Again, I don't like the composition. Maybe it's just me. A little too much exposure on her face. You might be able to fix that by spot metering it (and quit fucking shooting in pattern mode, I tell you this all the time).
>>291543 Just personal taste, but I've never found the "shooting into the light to get that weird bleed kind of look" all that attractive. Doesn't mean it's not right, just me. It looks like this is an awkward angle for your model. You've gotta keep your eyes open for this kind of detail.
>>291545 Lol, whoops. Nothing more needed to say here. Gotta watch the direction of light from that reflector.
>>291548 You really blew her face out. Once again, try metering on her face (esp with a reflector).
>>291982 The composition actually works here. Know why? Because your model's looking into the center of the frame. It's a basic guideline of layout and composition, don't have your subject pointing off frame/page. It's a biggie, so keep it in mind. THIS is where you want to use your reflector. Some of the other poses, not so much (but I know you just wanted to play with it a bit).
>>291985 >>291993 >>291997 Meh. Esp don't like the first one where you really can't see the subject. Just... Meh.
>>292003 >>292004 First one's better since her face is clearer, but you shouldn't have cut off the camera. Second one's pose is interesting, so is the borkeh. That's about it.
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