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sean!!.
oh hey guys.

fancy giving me some constructive crit? :)

medium format and cropped lots.
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>> Anonymous
meh face needs less meh

cool bookcase bro
>> Anonymous
Don't take pictures of faggots
>> Anonymous
Terrible crop. Boring scene and pose. Unimpressive level of detail considering it's MF. Unbalanced feel and distracting glowing white overexposed books on the right half.
>> Anonymous
Don't just take random shot of your friends looking bored at the school library.
>> Anonymous
Needs to have the subject more in frame so that I feel he's the subject, rather than accidentally in shot.
>> Anonymous
it looks like you shot this 5 minutes before it was due with one of your friends in the library.
>> Anonymous
This needs some serious dodging and burning to even be technically decent. Poor use of composition, try to get the lines in the scene to lead the eye to the subject. Focus on the eyes, not the hair. It's much better to crop when you shoot so you have more information to work with. Super cropped MF is no better than 35mm, and can be worse.

I don't think the image is worth the time to fix though. It's a boring shot.
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
Needs a bit more DoF. I think you've got the eyes in focus, but given how poorly-lit they are, I can't actually tell. So my eyes slide to the rest of the face and that's all out of focus.

Subject isn't too exciting unless you're friends with Sean. And even then, it might not be. I don't know. I don't know Sean.
>> Anonymous
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