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Good: Good saturation. Good exposure, although a bit contrasty. Lots of visual/graphic motion.
Bad: The light sucks. The shadow areas look like you took this on the moon; things are either high midtone or black. It's pretty harsh, and it makes me feel like this is a snap, when it clearly was not intended to be. I also don't feel like I connect with the wood, visually. Where is the important part; where should my eye be drawn? Why is the dirt and shit at the bottom in frame? Is it important? To me, it feels like it's just distracting my eye from the nice sinuous saturated red wood in the top half/two thirds of the frame.
Winterlight can be amazing, but it can also be super harsh, depending about 60% on your subject and 40% on the time of day. It seems like you get longer magic hours in winter, partly because God often puts a softbox on the sun in the form of overcast, and because they actually happen when you might want to be awake, instead of killing the people that are making you be awake.
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