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Could use more contrast. Not enough real blacks in there.
Also, compositionally messy. I find the chunk of roof in the background and the cut-off arm at the bottom of the frame distracting.
Also also... I dunno. There's just something not quite right with the subject. There's too much not-girl for it to be a good portrait, and too much girl for it to be a good non-portrait.
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