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>>278167 Serious crit time: I'll ignore color and exposure because this monitor is not calibrated, and neither is far enough off to be noticed on it, not to mention you've got to suck to fuck up color on film.
I wish there were more contrast between her and the background, Especially if you want such a textured background with her hair like that.
Some fill light would have been really helpful, and maybe a hair light.
Her tights appear to have blocked up completely, black may not have been the best choice, or you could have lit them more, or, since you scanned it anyway, just bracketed and put tights in from another shot. A bit of lighting on the back leg would help differentiate between her legs.
I love the warm, fall colors you used, and that floor is awesome.
>>278204 painted muslin = photo backdrop. Remember school pictures? If you had her further from it and used DoF to make it blurry, or just manipulated it digitally, it wouldn't be so obvious.
<3 Provia. It's all I use when shooting daylight chrome.
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