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Ug. Model has potential, but you've seriously failed here. 1. Double chin. Work on your camera angle. Not sure how bad she is--even thin girls get a double chin if you have 'em pull back like this girl--but you may have to go all the way to a MySpacey fat girl angle shot. 2. Yellow teeth. Needs postprocessing or a few months of whitening toothpaste, your preference. 3. Dark circles under her eyes. Have her get more sleep, get a reflector to throw some more light up there, and 'shop away what's left. 4. Don't post the full 5 megapixel version. When I zoom in, I see mustache. I don't want to see any mustache other than my own, thanks. 5. My instinct is to follow her eyes. When I do, I see... nothing. You need a better setting. 6. I'm guessing from the filename (liz_smilecloseup) and the way you've chosen to namefag yourself (Elizabeth Treadway) that you're the model. So: 6a. Don't take the photo at arms length. Myspace is not something you want to emulate. Get a tripod and set your self-timer. 6b. Tits or GTFO.
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