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Anonymous
Critiques/comments please
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>> Anonymous
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fixe'd

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>> Anonymous
hmmi kinda like the carpet in the shot
>> Anonymous
Some technical issues: take care of the hot pixels, apply noise reduction, and resize the file. There's no need for this to be 2592x1944. You're showing on the web, not making a print.
>> Anonymous
put a big censoring bar on the girl
>> greenfaerie4
Give that chick a sammich!
>> ac !!VPzQAxYPAMA
>>63469
I agree re: file size.
I agree re: hot pixels.
I disagree re: noise. I think the noise works for this shot.

Also, I may steal this idea next time I take pictures of my girlfriend.
>> Anonymous
carpet is fine but i think theres just too much of it
>> Anonymous
I like where you're going with composition. I agree with less carpet, but keep most as I like how it leads the eye in. If you were to retatke the shot, I might recommend including a little higher, including a bit more of the breast while cutting off right before the nipples
>> Anonymous
>>63527
heck i'd recommend balancing the shot between carpet and space above the body -- even if it is slightly asymmetrical -- personally I wouldn't use the camera frame to crop such a shot. why cut off the nipples and legs like this shot has?
which makes me wonder - why has nobody mentioned the legs are chopped out of frame as well...
>> Anonymous
bump, where's the rest of this set?
>> Anonymous
Very nice idea, but the cropping could use some work. Allthough it would propably bring tha nippels to the view, the top portion of the image should get a bit more space from above so that the carpet line would be at the center of the image.
>> Anonymous
fapfapfap
>> pskaught
finally someone is shooting a person in a set-up environment. That doesn't mean I really like the picture at all, but its a start.