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You might want to find some models other than Ray, Garrett, Tom, Josh, and Cliff - mainly because these fellas don't quite seem to grasp their motivation.
Some issues: >>237517 Posing is too stiff. It's obvious you told Garrett to stand like this, and he's not doing what he would normally do. I smoke, and I don't stand like that. Also, as an active duty USMC SSgt., I'd appreciate it if you ditch that cover.
>>237518 If the focal point here was Garrett's junk, good job. I'm not sure what exactly you were attempting to do here, but you've blown up on the pad. Also, lose the cover.
>>237519 Could be better if you cropped the top edge at his ankles. It will throw the balance off a little, but I think it might work slightly better that way.
>>237523 No, no, and no. You're posing people and you've clearly got no clue how to go about doing that. I'd recommend just shooting them for a bit, then _THINK_ about how they naturally move before trying to dictate their positioning.
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