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Anonymous
not done but oekaki started messing up ;-;

Oekaki post(Time: 2 h 1 min, Painter: Shi-Painter Normal, Animation:View)
>> nemmy
lol I fucked up, name shouldn't have been in e-mail field.
>> sahjared
vury nice...although I can't figure out why she has two left hands. Also, the left arm.hand could use some foreshortening. Otherwise I like it, and her Roxas hair.
>> nemmy
>>59643
SHIT! I knew I did something wrong with the hands! >_<!

couldn't figure out the foreshortening; never done the pose before. redlines appreciated actually :3
>> sahjared
err, I aint good enough to redline...just norice what's wrong, lulz. From what I hear /ic/ used to help ppl, but I wouldn't suggest it right now.

I think you need to raise and enlarge the left hand (try to get it to cover up a bit of the arm). Plus it kinda looks like the arm is going straight down if you cover up the hand. Maybe raise where the shoulder muscle connects into the bicep area and add elbow details somewhere on there...oh, and don't narrow the arm as it goes towards the hand too much since it's coming towards us (most of the forearm should be obscured by the hand anyways). I hope that makes alil sense.
>> nemmy
>>59652
it does.
I had the wonderful wonderful opportunity to do a lot of life studies over the summer, but because a lot of the people in the class had zero experience, we didn't get a chance to do anything with the model & foreshortening. So I'm hideously weak in that area, as well as hands.

Thanks tho, very helpful!
>> sahjared
no prob. I got to do live models once...1st an obese woman, and then a old, but ripped dude. In that class we got to put on music and I shit you not when I say, while we were drawing the male, someone put on an AC/DC mix where one of the 1st songs was "Hard as a Rock").
>> Anonymous
>>59656

I had a class once with a model who just started modeling that day... He was so nervous he had an erection the first half of class. He turned out to be awesome once he got comfortable though, like, he could do handstands for us and shit. Still pretty weird though.
>> Nemmy
>>59656lol.
>>59660i had an old guy who did that... >_<
The really weird thing about that class was that our models were either very old men (not sexy) or very young college age girls. And that was awkward mostly because I had classes with them.
>> Anonymous
Head does'nt twist like that, lower part of left arm larger if it reaches "out", right elbow bends into other other direction, she has 2x left hands, etx

probably the most noticeable things.
>> Nemmy
>>59735
Thanks. Got anything else? :3
>> Anonymous
wut?
>> Anonymous
You draw animu like russians do. And that's not a good thing.
>> Nemmy
>>60384
how the fuck do russians draw anime? ?_?
>> Anonymous
>>60463
Like you!
>> Anonymous
Nice drawing, I like the blond girl very much
>> sahjared
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>>60463

like this!