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gonna finish this in photoshop most likely

Oekaki post(Time: 1 h 33 min, Painter: Shi-Painter Normal, Animation:View)
>> Anonymous
>>72062
Can i marry you?
>> Anonymous
um this sucks lol
>> Lain
This looks nice. Except the thigh in the background is waaaaaaaaaaaay skinnier than the one in the foreground. I'd suggest fixing that before coloring.
>> Anonymous
>>72069
...her arms blocking out some of that thigh.
>> Hanyo
can't wait to see what it looks like after photoshop post it here when your done plox.
>> Upon !./wO9B/UkQ
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finished inking this
>> Anonymous
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You were missing something.

Oekaki post(Time: 2 min, Painter: Shi-Painter Normal, Source:>>72113)
>> Anonymous
>>72113
What'd you line it with?
>> Upon !./wO9B/UkQ
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>>72116
thanks, fixed

>>72117
mostly a 1 pixel custom brush in photoshop
>> Anonymous
>>72119
>mostly a 1 pixel custom brush in photoshop
with pen tool or by hand? Cause if its by hand, then you have one amazing hand.
>> Anonymous
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Hand hurts. Got bored.
Must have spent half an hour on that one breast - and it still looks flat.

Yay me.

Oekaki post(Time: 1 h 12 min, Painter: Shi-Painter Normal, Source:>>72116)
>> Upon !./wO9B/UkQ
>>72129
i don't use the pen tool, i occassionally use the line tool but sparingly.
>> Anonymous
>>72132
goddamn, you must have a cybernetic hand and grand amount of patience
>> Anonymous
>>72133
It's called the undo button, you monkey.
>> Anonymous
>>72137
lol
>> Anonymous
>>72137
lol, yes the undo button makes it so fucking easy, I can fap and draw at the same time.

No, even with an undo button, you still need to carefully draw the lines out, and depending on your technique and skill, it can take from slow to very slow to complete a good looking lineart.
>> Anonymous
>>72130
woah.
>> Anonymous
>>72215
Is that a good "woah" or a bad "woah"?
If it's good, then maybe I'll try again.
>> Anonymous
B-B-B-BLLLEEENNNDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!
>> Anonymous
>>72142
truth. if only there was a way to making drawing lines with a tablet as easy as drawing on actual paper
>> Upon !./wO9B/UkQ
>>72142
when i ink stuff in photoshop i typically keep my left hand on ctrl-shift-z. i try to hit the lines as closely and quickly as possible, it's generally alot of trial and error but after a bit of practicing i've found i'm much more accurate and faster now.
>> Upon !./wO9B/UkQ
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finished the flats
>> maggot !Vayawkon9g
>>72315
looks great :D
>> Anonymous
Her face sucks.
>> Anonymous
>>72315
the face needs to be fixed. eyes are too low.
also, your color choices are poor.. play around with them before you start filling in shadows and light
>> Anonymous
>>72321
lol her face is hot
>> Anonymous
>>72326

I think the colors will work. I think that they are supposed to be sort of gloomy? It fits well with how rundown the building is. Besides, they're just flats. A lot could change.
>> Upon !./wO9B/UkQ
>>72326
i'll mess around w/ her face some more, thanks.

these aren't the final color choices, they're masks i temporairly colored to keep them separate.
>> Anonymous
>>72331
I don't wanna be rude... but can you post a full color finished work of yours?
>> Upon !./wO9B/UkQ
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>>72332
sure, this one was a collab between me and a friend, i handled the inking and coloring. i'll post cuz it's been on /ic/ before.
>> Anonymous
>>72334
jesus that is both hot and pro like

got a website or dA? i wanna drool over your stuff NAO
>> Upon !./wO9B/UkQ
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some more color crap. some of this has been on /ic/ before but unfortunately i don't work much in color these days. newer stuff is at the top, older at the bottom.

>>72338
i'm uponthoufaircat on DA and HentaiFoundry
>> Anonymous
>>72339
thank you!

anyway, i'll be keepin an eye on this topic and hopefully give valuable c&c
>> Anonymous
This shit is pretty good, especially the body. The face needs some drastic corrections: the nose is too centered and the eyes are plainly wrong. The mouth is okay I guess.

Try to fix those and it's a great drawing.
>> Anonymous
Her upper left arm is missing. But aside from that, I like it alot.
>> Upon !./wO9B/UkQ
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line art update. made some changes to the face and added her left shoulder / bit of her arm. also made her right ankle thicker and changed her right arm a bit to reflect it's position. hopefully it's improved, i dunno.

i'll post an update on the colors soon.
>> Anonymous
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Redlined that last pic a bit, hope you don't mind. Some things just didn't feel right to me and I pointed them out in the pic. May just be personal preference and whatnot.

Oekaki post(Time: 11 min, Painter: Shi-Painter Pro, Source:>>73063)
>> Anonymous
her face is fucking retarded. Cut the weeaboo crap.
>> Upon !./wO9B/UkQ
>>73076
thanks for the redline, makes sense