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sahjared
err, I aint good enough to redline...just norice what's wrong, lulz. From what I hear /ic/ used to help ppl, but I wouldn't suggest it right now.
I think you need to raise and enlarge the left hand (try to get it to cover up a bit of the arm). Plus it kinda looks like the arm is going straight down if you cover up the hand. Maybe raise where the shoulder muscle connects into the bicep area and add elbow details somewhere on there...oh, and don't narrow the arm as it goes towards the hand too much since it's coming towards us (most of the forearm should be obscured by the hand anyways). I hope that makes alil sense.
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