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Anonymous
My first drawing ever on this board thingy. I haven't much experience but I love loli.

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>> Anonymous
Broke my back. Halp.
>> Anonymous
Yeah, I know, I suck. She's supposed to be leaning backwards, but as you can see it does look like she broke it.
>> Anonymous
It's all about practice. Just make sure to keep the body balanced. Too bent and she's broke, but if you can keep a curve which balances the body and limbs, things will work.

Try again, and I reccommend tucking that arm behind the back. Oh, and move that belly button over to the right a little.
>> Anonymous
>>51935
Thanks for the constructive criticism.
>> Anonymous
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For every 30 trolls (who are all the same person) there has to be at least one nice person.

This arm works better, but it's still off balance. I'd have to start from scratch to really fix it.

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>> Anonymous
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can't see why anybody whined about the pose. I thought it was hot.

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>> Anonymous
>>52123
I'll be damned, you pulled it off.
>> Anonymous
>>52123
damn, good job.
>> Anonymous
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fixed

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>> Anonymous
>>52208

Lol. You could have done a better job with the face. Instead of just being angry, now she looks a little ugly. I think it might be from using the red for the eyebrow and the lips are too wide.
But I think she's totally badass for deciding to hold the knife by the blade rather than the handle/hilt.
>> Anonymous
gross skirt/shirt colors... hello??