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Anonymous
yeah the neck and head is weird, I know.

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>> Anonymous
Why don't you fix something that you know is broken?
>> Anonymous
Kina?
Sage no for Kina, but for.. not-so-good-as-usual-Kina.
>> Anonymous
>>129258
because I didn't realize it til after I was half done coloring.
>> Anonymous
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ok, a better answer is that I don't know how to fix it.

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>> Anonymous
shoulders are too wide and the pose itself is quite unnatural
>> Anonymous
>>129258
Why don't you go back to /ic/ and stay there?
>> Anonymous
>>129273
see, I've never taken an anatomy class or anything so I don't know how to fix it. If any wants to redline it, that'd be awesome
>> Anonymous
I really don't think it is as bad as you beleive. Perhaps she is lost and is heaving her shoulders in desperation. A annoyed sigh if you will. There can be many interpretations, don't just assume the negative one. The one with the shorter neck does look a bit better though. I don't think there's really anything wrong with it other than that though.
>> Anonymous
>>129276
uh well for starters the left (her left) arm shouldn't be facing that direction. makes no sense unless she's like charging up her power level or doing yoga or something.

right shoulder should probably slope more unless you want her to look stiff and apprehensive, which judging by her facial expression you don't. her left shoulder is too big though that definitely needs to be fixed.

either the torso or the arms are too long I'm not sure what you did there. maybe it's just a side effect of the shoulders not being sloped enough.

I can't think of anything else to bitch about. you mostly just fucked up her left side.
>> Anonymous
I'm glad to finally see a drawing of a woman with realistically sized breasts.
>> Anonymous
>>129280
just to add I wouldn't bother going back and fixing it. just keep in mind what you did wrong for the next time you draw something similar.
>> I'M HELPING CCCP
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A+++

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>> Anonymous
>>129286
well there IS some redlines in it, so I'll accept.
>>129280
yeah, I used a reference for her but I still fucked it up. I know what you're saying though