How many people do you think actually use those fucking 'How to Draw Manga' books to learn to draw?How many of those people post the result in /ic/?Pic semi-related.Oekaki post(Time: 2 min, Painter: Shi-Painter Normal, Animation:View)
judging from your pic, you're obviously not one of them.
I can't do oekaki, kill me now. T__TI don't expect you to believe me, tho. This is 4-chan, after all, and I am Anonymous.
I got one of those, critiqued the shit out of it, never looked at it again.