File :-(, x, )
Work in progress.....maybe I-C-Yo
still need to give her clothes, also color

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>> I-C-Yo
     File :-(, x)
reference
>> -__ Anonymous !mL2ZRk1cK.
Don't pull anatomy out of your ass.
The foreshortening ... is that even foreshortening? It looks like you put a 5 year old's arm on the possibly full grown figure.
Same deal with the other arm.
Also, her face is looking up, while your is flat on 3/4. Change that.

If you wanna draw nudes, use a nude reference. Don't make stuff up.
>> Penis Moai
Her arms are too short. Something with her hips too is wrong, but I suck at anatomy too much to pinpoint exactly what with words.

Whatever you do, keep the camel toe plz
>> I-C-Yo
     File :-(, x)
well at least she got clothes on...still fail on this new concept, "proportion"

fixed?

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>> I-C-Yo
>>46045
damn it...still not looking up
>> I-C-Yo
>>46046
....to disappointed to continue, I'll fix it tomorrow; now time to "study" some human