Ugh, I really hate posting unfinished work, but I left for a few hours, leaving the applet open, and when I got back my tablet stopped working.I am immensely bothered by this.Hopefully all the layers will stay intact and I can finish it up when I get my tablet working.Oekaki post(Time: 11 h 34 min, Painter: Shi-Painter Normal, Animation:View)
Fuck it, I'll finish it tomorrow. I'm too tired tonight.
Chii - cute =>>114045
>>114066are you saying this isn't cute?
Face and body proportions are bit off - the angle of the head doesn't match the head, most notably.Otherwise your colors are very nice and your linework is fucking awesome.
IT'S YOU
Seconding fuckawesome colors and linework, but as far as the character itself goes, this looks like shit.Your style doesn't lend well to characters that are supposed to be aesthetically pleasing.Draw men instead.
Oh my god huge head is huge
Manfaced Chii, now that's nice.
>>114143Something is off about the hips too... sorry to say it but yeah, it's a lost cause. coloring is fucking impressive though.
You have it all, except for the anatomy, which ruins the whole thing, so that it's nothing. :awesome:
Uhm, alright, I won't finish it.I did, however, think I was getting better at faces. I guess not. I also didn't realize the anatomy was so bad.Oh well, better luck next time, I suppose.
i don't think you should just scrap it. if you redo the face it will probably look alot better
>>114351No, I don't think I'll retouch or finish it. Like someone said, it's a lost cause. At least I tried, not hard enough it seems, but I did try.
I look at face... something is wrongnow at hand OMG this is 60 years old male
Yes, I get it, it's shit.Please stop bumping it, let it die already.
>>114360Lost cause or not, it's practice. If you want, you can re-draw it and try again. If you get tired of it, move to something else. Just keep drawing. It's easy to say what is wrong with an image and hard to make it look formal in the first place. You've drawn way more of the body than most people when they start getting color down. At least you can color. Plenty of manga artists can't color worth crap, yet they make a ton of money off their books.
>>114366But it isn't shit. I actually think it's quite nice.The only real problem I see is that her head/upper body is big in comparison to her legs/hips. Make one smaller or the other bigger, and it should look fine.
I think it shows a lot of improvement.
had so much potential, but the face goddamn it, THE FACE!!!!
the funny things is besides scale i can't really pick out why the face looks so strange. i really can't figure it out
>>114480We're so used to seeing animu eyes too low on the face - however, here, we have a 'realistic' face with animu eyes that are ~too high~. If they weren't as tall, it'd be much better.
Aside from the insults and rude comments, I appreciate the critiques.I'll work harder next time.