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>> Gandara
EYES GO CLOSER TOGETHER, NEEDS MOAR PERSPECTIVE

Jesus, it's like /i/'s become a haven for Down syndrome, especially this weeaboo shit.
>> Anonymous
>>43865

Just cause everyone makes fun of your "comic" fred-chan
>> ryokenohki
>>43865

Hey, don't hate it too much, it's just a style.

However, even in the style...

You should possibly place the eyes closer together, unless you want that alien look to it. There are some things where they draw the eyes intentionally separate in order to make it look slightly odd.
One other thing: the back of the head is much too flat, it makes the picture look out of perspective.
Try doing some life drawing, it'll make all your figure drawings much better :3
>> Gandara
>>43867

Who the fuck is "fred-chan"? Obviously you're new here... or else I lurk a bit too much for my own good. Gandara's the name.

>>43868

That ain't style, it's just bad. The eyes are almost exactly the same size, there's no sense of one eye being more distant or further from the point of view than the other eye. The character's head is obviously turned to the side, yet the eyes are... just fucked.

Take this emo weeaboo shit elsewhere.
>> ryokenohki
>>43869

It's not an elitist board :p
People can put stuff up if they want, just gotta make sure that they're ready for the criticism.

And there are problems with this picture, yeah, you're right, and you addressed them. Still, it is a style. OP just has to work on it, 's all.

But I guess i'm a weaboo, or whatever, so I'm prolly biased.
>> Gandara
>>43871

You seem alright. What I don't like is seeing this same eyes 1000000 miles apart shit over and over. They don't even make eyes this far apart in the most animu of animus. I'd know... I'm a fucking animu nerd too.

And I'm aware it's not an elitist board. I simply enjoy yelling at things I don't like... like shitty weeaboo art... and walls...
>> Anonymous
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now it's good for /b/

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>> ryokenohki
>>43872
Heh, well I guess that's fine.
Tell them walls what they got comin' to them, all blocking our ways and making us go through doors ><
>> Anonymous
>>43869
>>43867

lawl MegaTokyo Lurk etc etc bur /cough repeat
>> Pantsuru Man
>>43872

Epic internet tough guy.

You're now my hero.
>> CHARGIN MAH LAZER Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
Even more suitable for /b/.

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