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Oeeeeekaki! Anonymous Bosch
Could use some help making this catboy look less like a catgirl.

Cannot post to IC, so don't whine at me about asking for suggestions. >_>
>> Wesker !JYbrm0g7fs
Broader jaw, shoulders, and hands.

While I see that with the hands, you're trying to make them slender and more paw-like (I assume?) don't make them so slender that they look feminine. There's a delicate balance, really.
>> Anonymous
Make the eyes/brow manlier
>> Grammar!Nazi !WokonZwxw2
He has very feminine eyes. Just make them a bit less.. eyeliner-ey. Broader shoulders, thinner waist.. like they said.
>> Anonymous
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Just a few things I noticed:

-Like>>59046and>>59049, less eyeliner/eyeshadow. You might be going for the "feminine" guy look, but... come on! He's caking it on like a dragqueen. PROTIP: DO NOT DEFINE INDIVIDUAL EYELASHES.

-His lips are also way feminine. This is because in most comic art (like Western) women's lips are more defined than the mens. You can still make his lips plump and Mick Jaggery all you want, but lose the coloration and most of the definition.

-His cheekbones were defined to the point of him being Chinese or a Holocaust jew. You might wanna give him a fuller face.

-Weak jawline. I straightened that out for you.

-Don't forget about his other ear, seriously. If they stick up that far, you'd see it!
>> Anonymous
i thought people only had problems with making women have manfaces

lrn2suck
>> Anonymous
>>59054
Skilled correcting-girly-catboy-anonymous is skiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiilled.
>> Better? Anonymous Bosch
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>>59054
Duly noted on the eyes and chin areas, cheekbones, shoulders/waist etc.
The nose, well, he's supposed to be Romanian.

The ears, though, they lay near flush to the sides of his head, angled almost directly backwards instead of sticking out like anime elf ears (or airplane wings or whatnot), so they're ok the way they are.

You're using a traditional manga style approach to edit him, which looks nice, but I'm just not a manga style artist :)
>> Grammar!Nazi !WokonZwxw2
>>59092
Yes! That did help. But I would still make the shoulders broader.
>> Moot !Ep8pui8Vw2
>>59092
Fukken. Saved.
That is the hotness. Seriously.
And I can now see what you were going for with the Romanian nose.
<3
>> Anonymous
Lulz, btw.
>> A cleaner version Anonymous Bosch
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Shoulders broadened a bit, rough lines smoothed out, more shading added, etc. I like it now.
>> NYAN MOTHRERFUCKER Anonymous
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NOW YOU CATBOY

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>> Anonymous Bosch
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Where you pointing that finger?

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>>59132
ur doing it wrong, men doesnt have twats

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>> Anonymous Bosch
>>59133
Men has scrotums. And legs that attach at the outside of the hipbone.
>> Anonymous
>>59135
men have stronger legs,

>>59132
that's a female ass with a telescopic twat
>> Anonymous
>>59133
Clench them man! Clench with all your might!