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Anonymous
fixed?

....right fist mutilated in a textile mill

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>> I-C-Yo
damn it....supposed to be in thread>>46027
>> Anonymous
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Fixt.

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>> Anonymous
Farthest arm perspective still seems botched. I'd try showing the bend at the elbow as right now the way you have the clothing folds only encourages the shortness.
>> Penis Moai
Missed my karate class...

Damn
>> I-C-Yo
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flat colors is flat...

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>> I-C-Yo
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made the arm longer....fixed?

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>> Anonymous !mL2ZRk1cK.
>>46131
No. Make that arm more rounded looking. It looks like a flat sheet right now.
>> I-C-Yo
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>>46027
fixed?

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>> Anonymous
>>46137
tell me (or ask yourself) where is the elbow on his right arm?
Besides, draing manga style, you just have to put it somewhere, since manga is all about balance and nothing about proportions. Which is fine BTW.
>> Anonymous
>>46138
and of course i meant his left arm since i'm retarded.
>> I-C-Yo
>>46138

idk, here's the ref though
>>46028
>> Anonymous
His left foot looks too short and unnatural.
>> Anonymous
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hay guys u liek my peicture?

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>> I-C-Yo
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>>46147
fixed? btw, he's a girl

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>> Anonymous
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I was bored.

On to better things now.

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>> I-C-Yo
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I'll call this a wrap (but I'll fix it a little more tomorrow)

I thank those who helped me out

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