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Hoodies Anonymous !wJoMC4BYEY!!Qr7
finishing this later

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>> Anonymous !slX55V4Dyc
>>53705
The guy on the rights upper arm looks too short to me, unless it's bent back. I could be wrong.
>> Anonymous !mL2ZRk1cK.
>>53710
if it is bent, that sleeve shouldn't be a straight line.
>> Anonymous
If the guy's elbow is supposed to be leaning on the androgynous being's shoulder, he looks too small in comparison and slightly misplaced. Also, I second the above comment about his arm.
>> Anonymous
How is it you can see the chicks eyebrow through her hair and not her eye
>> Anonymous
>>53721
The android only has one eye, that's why.
>> fixed? Anonymous !wJoMC4BYEY!!Qr7
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tried fixing the right arm

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>> Anonymous
I think I hated it less uncolored.
>> Anonymous !wJoMC4BYEY!!Qr7
>>53721
work in progress?
>> sahjared
>>53731

Yea, it seemed to have a nice simplistic look on your first version...it looked like they were hanging out in the dusk, but bright colors in your newer version throws that off. Also, erase the tip of that one guys elbow so it looks like he's behind the other person. Like Anoymous said, he looks smaller.
>> Hoodies II Anonymous !wJoMC4BYEY!!Qr7
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sahjared, !mL2ZRk1cK., !slX55V4Dyc, Anonymous

the right arm supposed to rest on the right guy's left shoulder, so I try to get the proportion right

......yeah, pic reminds me of those models you see in abercrombie and fitch...or hollister

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>> Anonymous !wJoMC4BYEY!!Qr7
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minor fix?

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>> Anonymous
>>53747
Oh... the thing with transparent hair is a guy? You fixed the size of the guy with dark hair, but his arm still looks strange.
>> Anonymous
>>53747
hated those brands
>> That's it.... Anonymous !wJoMC4BYEY!!Qr7
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the original pose seems awkward, it's about time I quit and made it simpler...

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>> sahjared
Ah, they fit together better now, but his arm still looks funky. At first I thought his upper arm was still abit short, but I'm guessing you mean to make it look as if it's going back. The only problem with that is there's no foreshortening on the forearm as well, and if the upper arm is pointing back then the elbow will be behind his bud there and his forarm wouldn't be able to face straight down. Well, that is, unless he's about half a foot in front of him, but even still, if you pull your arm back like that (or that high now that I think about it), you can't even get your hand close to the center of your stomach. Hope that makes sense

I'm no expert, and I dunno if you really want all these critiques (I'm kinda jumping on the bandwagon here), but I have alot of similar problems fitting people together in natural looking and realistic positions, and I find that standing in front of a mirror helps a little bit...or at least miming it out while I draw. If you can, try and get people around you to pose.


I still like the first better, but I'm a fan of minimalism.
>> sahjared
>>53761

that works.
>> Anonymous !wJoMC4BYEY!!Qr7
>>53765
I don't mind the critiques, if anyone finds something wrong then I'll gladly fix it as best as I can (and I really need to have a life study class) anyway thanks for the critiques

btw minimalism is k', saved my ass when I need to turn in a project
>> Anonymous
>>53761
the guy wearing the hood is a hottie, I like his expression