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Oh wow this is nice. A few suggestions though:
- the skin looks kind of plastic. Note the reference pic has a lot of sudden jumps in color range, notably at the temples, lower eyelids and creases along the sides of the mouth. - by applying the above shadows/highlights, it will really bring out the shape of the forehead (highlights) and the jaw and corners of mouth (shadow) - the eyes are rather flat, notice also how the eyelid really accentuates the shape of the eye, and in the original his eyes almost look as if they'll pop out of their sockets. The eyelids could use some definition, especially in the corners closest to the nose. Note also the amount of creasing around the eyes. - Christian Bale has distinctively shaped eyebrows here in that they have a larger grouping of hair just before tapering off slightly at the ends closest to the nose. - As noted above the mouth could be bigger, and the jawline a little sharper. Note things such as how the top row of teeth are placed in a bow-like shape to our perspective. The texturing on the tongue is really quite good, however. - the advantage of his face being covered in blood is that we can see even more clearly than normal the curvature of his face, and drawing some of this on exactly might help a lot with perceiving and placing highlights. - The ears are a bit flat, but in the photo they can be easily broken up into three or four shapes. I hate drawing ears. ;_;
If you decide to edit this later I hope it helps, and if not I hope it helps with the next one.
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