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Anonymous
Yeah, lack of shading. Although you are drawing from a top downward slight angle, you did not emphasize on that stature. As her right shoulder does not correctly align with her body structure. You drew too much of her left arm making it triangle shaped from looking downwards at it. You seriously need to plan to draw the face, not just draw circle, stick on eyes and mouth near bottom. The hair lacks compiled form, and just feels like one clump rather then sectioned. The form of the dress as it's being whipped up into the air is terible, giving the impression that you can look directly behind her and see her panties. From the angle which you've tried to depict should show more clevage as it's down her shirt. Otherwise you need to change the perceptive feeling from the angle. Draw it straight next time. Because it's just terrible without proper muscle and bone structure.
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