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Day Dreamer
well, I have to admit that you guys are right, I should never stick on the same boring style I usually do cuz the fact that I'm really too scared about criticism, maybe from now on I should try to explore this hobby of mine and just try my best at it

so to thank you have some Onii-chan love


....its not much cleaned up well and all roughly draw but its best one than before
>> Some tl;dr for you Mac
While there are crits to be made on this pic, I'll leave them aside for now in place of the positives.

I think this is definately a step in the right direction for you, DD. Although there's nothing spectacular about the pic, there is life, emotion, and movement captured here that's been sorely lacking in a lot of your other, more static stuff. Good jerb.
>> Anonymous
i like this one, i would like it more if it was in color
>> Anonymous
Good to see you experimenting with more dynamic composition and posing.
>> Anonymous
I didn't know it was you at first.
>> Anonymous
( ? ??) AWESOME!


onee-chan! ecchi! ecchi!
>> Serenity
Step in the right direction fo sho. Much more dynamic pose. Now, work on that line quality!
>> Anonymous
>>36958

This is much, much better than your usual work. The guy who kept saying "NEEDS TO BE DOING SOMETHING" was totally right, and it looks like you finally took him up on it.

Keep going in this direction, and you'll be one of my favourite artists. I'm not an artist myself so I can't get on my TECHNIQUE SOAPBOX, but seeing this picture makes me think that you have the potential to be a genuinely enjoyable and accessable artist; and better, one who takes requests on 4chan. If you'd be so kind.

IN CONCLUSION, DRAW SOME ASS SHOTS!
>> Anonymous
YES.

This is what we've been trying to make you do Day-Dreamer, and your stuff has INSTA IMPROVED. Your art is full of so much life now!
>> PornTime !VujYWXEPhc
Where are my pancakes! ;_;

Good job on them improvements btw~
>> Mr Needs-to-be-doing-something
this...pleases me

i can totally see them running after eachother in the next frame

and making out in the third
>> Mission Control
Lovely.
And by the by: 9 minutes?
>> Anonymous
>>36958
WTF?
Her shoulder?! o_O
>> Anonymous
>>37016
What about it?
>> Anonymous
Vastly superior to your "just standing there" pics. I like how your fear of criticism was leading you to do the thing that incurred the most criticism.
>> Serenity
I guess she has doll joints under there, in which case it should be easy to re-attach it and OH GOD *FAPFAPFAP*
>> hidetolove
best yet. love it <3
>> 190
God damn about time...
>> Mac
I think all this goes to prove that there is love in /i/. CHRISTMAS IS SAVED!