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sahjared
Ah, they fit together better now, but his arm still looks funky. At first I thought his upper arm was still abit short, but I'm guessing you mean to make it look as if it's going back. The only problem with that is there's no foreshortening on the forearm as well, and if the upper arm is pointing back then the elbow will be behind his bud there and his forarm wouldn't be able to face straight down. Well, that is, unless he's about half a foot in front of him, but even still, if you pull your arm back like that (or that high now that I think about it), you can't even get your hand close to the center of your stomach. Hope that makes sense
I'm no expert, and I dunno if you really want all these critiques (I'm kinda jumping on the bandwagon here), but I have alot of similar problems fitting people together in natural looking and realistic positions, and I find that standing in front of a mirror helps a little bit...or at least miming it out while I draw. If you can, try and get people around you to pose.
I still like the first better, but I'm a fan of minimalism.
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