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Anonymous
I'll probably get lol'd at by /i/ but I'll ask anyway, constructive criticism please.

Oekaki post(Time: 1 h 34 min, Painter: Shi-Painter Normal, Animation:View)
>> Anonymous
It looks a little muddy. But I'm not an art expert, so I've no idea how you could fix that. Other than that it's good. I'd like to see more ^___^
>> Anonymous
Where's the light source?

Other than that, I like it.
>> -(:)
I shat bricks, this is pretty cool. Colors ARE muddy (in before kina?)
>> Anonymous
>>119054
I'd guess it's the big sun in the background.
>> Anonymous
>>119054
>>119059

Haha, I hope I'm not that bad, and thanks anon.
>> Anonymous
>>119057
not me
>> Anonymous
>>119059

It looks like it's coming from several other directions than the sun.
>> Anonymous
You might want to redo the hair, it's shaped kinda oddly and could be done better, I feel.

Other than that I can't find anything to criticize.
>> Anonymous
I love it. I think the "muddy" colors are fine, they set a mood. I think the hair could use a few loose strands or something, though, because atm it's kind of a hairblob.
>> Anonymous
Yeah, muddy colours are fine, but it's more of a problem with contrast.

Everything is working at the same level. So not only does that make it less eye catching, but it fucks perspective up. Since, as I'm sure you're aware, there's that Art 1 rule that things get duller as the go into the distance. Most of the girl shares the same tones as the cityscape waaaayyyy in the distance.

Regardless, the idea is pretty cool. And I love love love the way you used complementary colours, and then used red to direct attention at the girl. It's a very nice instance of colour study put to good use.

Keep working on contrast, and it would be interesting to see you go into greater detail, since this has a speedpaint-esque feel to it.
>> Anonymous
why would you get lol'd at? this isn't /ic/
>> Anonymous
>>119042
lol
>> Anonymous
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Oekaki post(Time: 47 min, Painter: Shi-Painter Normal, Source:>>119042, Animation:View)
>> Anonymous
oh thankyou so much <:3c
>> Anonymous
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Oekaki post(Time: 40 min, Painter: Shi-Painter Normal, Source:>>119302, Animation:View)
>> Anonymous
i like the "mud" better, gives it a very serene and quiet mood which is good with this pic. i think most ppl are just too use to the technicolor of anime.
>> captain !v/rTh0HxaQ
awesome
>> Anonymous !mL2ZRk1cK.
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I feel that... you're not truly painting but just drawing. There's some colors and there some understand of light and dark in the colors, but there's really no effective use of color in an interesting or unexpected manner.

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>> Anonymous !mL2ZRk1cK.
>>119637
>unexpected manner
I mean, unintuitive manner.
>> -(:)
>>119637
Oh boy, this is less muddy, more soft~
age

>>119331
This is also very interesting.