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what the hell gaaaaaaaaaah
WHAT AM I DOING WRONG?

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>> Anonymous
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Veeeeery very basic thing I did with the mouse here.
Tips:
- First off, you're drawing a loli style face with a non-loli body, face should be at least a LITTLE more defined if she's got boobs.
- Neck isn't that far back/chin isn't that far out.
- Eye needs to be further back, and don't forget the view is sideways when drawing in the iris/pupil.
- People have foreheads and craniums. Remember this.

BIGGEST TIP. YOU CANNOT DRAW CARTOONS BEFORE STUDYING ANATOMY PROPERLY.
TRUST ME. IT HELPS.
Animu is unfortunately - bodywise at least - pretty anatomically correct, except often with longer legs. But the basics of the style are based on real people.
If you study a little anatomy, and practice quite a bit with drawing real people, animu comes VERY easily. All you need to do is add HUEG eyes, tiny/no nose, mouth that can go from HUEG to tiny, and the like. Basically, really expressive and "cute" facial features. In typical cartoon style.

ALL WANNABE ANIMU ARTISTS, PLEASE TAKE THIS INTO ACCOUNT.

I hope I can be of help.

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>> mamushi gaaaaaaaaaah
yeh i was trying to make her looking up a little 2 tho.
>> Anonymous
>>72867
im not gonna read all that
>> Anonymous
>>72873
Sorry, TL;DR:

>If you study a little anatomy, and practice quite a bit with drawing real people, animu comes VERY easily. All you need to do is add HUEG eyes, tiny/no nose, mouth that can go from HUEG to tiny, and the like. Basically, really expressive and "cute" facial features. In typical cartoon style
>> Anonymous
>>72867
Redline only works if the redliner can actually draw.
Your efforts are in vain. Die in a fire.
>> Anonymous
>>72872
Then first figure out what she'd look like without looking up, then tilt her head back a little.
>> Anonymous
>>72867
Your "fix" looks even worse than the original.
>> Anonymous
>>72875
I said I did it with the mouse, and the actual thing took me about two minutes. The time is from fucking around with the layers.
I SPECIFICALLY SAID.
>Veeeeery very basic thing I did with the mouse here.
Very, VERY basic scribbled crap to make som points I was making easier to point out.
>> Anonymous
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Please forgive me for the crappy quality of this and the other fix.
As I stated before, I am using only my mouse.
I also don't have much experience with drawing on a computer.
And I find it a little difficult to "fix" things a redline.
The only reason I did it before, was simply to help illustrate some of the things I was pointing out.

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>> Anonymous
lol
>> Anonymous
>>72878
Basic or not, it's just flat out wrong. The OP's problem is not the placement of the neck, but rather the ear. Raise it a bit higher and the drawing looks fine proportionally-wise, for an anime drawing anyway. Maybe the chin could be slightly shorter too, but that's not so serious.
>> Anonymous
>>72882
Yeah, I missed the ear before.
Sorry about this pretty crappy help, I've got a million other things going on.
But, actually, the chin does go waaay to far out from the neck.
>> Anonymous
>>72883
too*
Christ.. I'm too tired for all this.
>> Anonymous
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well it's better than those other redlines at least lol

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>> Anonymous
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>>72882
aand this would be my fix.

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>> Anonymous
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>> Anonymous
>>72909
I love you.
>> Anonymous
>>72909
okay that's just plain wrong, you guys aren't even trying anymore
>> Anonymous
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>> Anonymous
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(:

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>> Anonymous
>>72878
It's called TL;DR, faggot.

If you can't redline properly, don't do it at all. No excuses.
>> ??
>>72909
winrar
>> Anonymous
>>72867
your usage of capital letters to place emphasis on the written language makes me believe you much as your fine redline
>> Anonymous
>>72986
Yeah. Caps = cruise control for cool.
Same as animu = cruise control for art.
I know, I know.
Look, it was late, I was tired, and the chin just doesn't look right like that, however>>72888>>72909much thanks to you.
Now everyone just image one of these pictures with the tips I gave.. only better tips and moar tl;dr summarisation.
If not, then just ignore the fact I said/did anything.
TL;DR - Urgh. Whatever. I need to get drunk.
>> Anonymous
OH FUCK,
>doesn't look right like that>>72889

Fix'd.

Just fuck everything.
Fucketty fucking fuck fuck.
>> Anonymous
>>72867
Epic failure!

>>72888
Is okay.

>>72909
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>> Anonymous
dude...take this shit to /ic/ for advice that's what it's there for
>> Anonymous
>>73116
/ic/ is mega fail...why? It's a breeding ground for trolls plus it's freaking hard to get a good critique anyway
>> sirjared
>>73096
seconded

>>73119
Not quite...well yea, it's full of trolls, but I got a good critique on the only thing I submitted there...just check your ego at the door and they're usually alright.
>> Anonymous
>>73084
lol listen you're not going to salvage any of your pride from this thread so just give up, move on, and be glad you posted as Anonymous.
>> Anonymous
>>73138
I already did.
OH SHI-
>> Anonymous
>>73146
You think that's a good comeback. Wow.
You silly fag.
>> Anonymous
>>73152
Well, it should be expected by now, don't you think?
>> Anonymous
Uh, for a start, I apologise, I forget to sage that last.. every time I posted.
I know I shouldn't get sucked in, but, what the hell. After all, I posted as Anonymous and I seem to be on a roll now.
Someone even trolled my post in another thread.
Who knows what awaits me.

>>73152
It wasn't a comeback. It was a comment. Just a comment, that's all.
>>73157
Actually, just for the record here, I'm female.
I don't even know why everyone's giving me all this attention.
Aren't you just feeding my stupidity?
Seriously, at this point, I'm gonna keep answering everything because I have shit-all else to do.
So, I suppose, tl;dr = as long as you faggots keep answering me back, I'm gonna keep doing the same back t' you.
>> Anonymous
>>73352
Feeding your stupidity?
I don't know what the fuck you were trying to say by that - but eat up, fatty.
>> Anonymous
>>73436
You keep commenting, I keep replying with stupid answers.
Thus, you're feeding me things to keep me acting stupid.
Feeding my stupidity.