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desert sunrise? sympathy.
lemme know what you think.

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>> Namefag
The face seems a little long because there isn't adequate detail in the nose to justify that much blank distance between the eyes and mouth. Nice background though.
>> Anonymous
i think the face is allright, its just about style, but the color in the face and hair is kinda bad, it looked even better with just doodles O.o
>> Anonymous
>>124073
I agree with this Anon, needs nose or else it looks strange.

Also, pose, the neck is too long and it's just awkward and uncomfortable. Shading, not even going to go into that. Hair is still and would never move solidly with the head. And finally the head itself, totally not in proportion and wronggggg.
>> Anonymous
>>124419
how is the head not in proportion? what could you possibly be comparing it to?
>> Anonymous
>>124506
The skull shape itself looks alright, it's just that all the facial features are wrong.
>> sympathy.
i'm the OP and just saying really how can you tell if the head is outta proportion? all it is really is a head and background. and admitably it isn't smooth because i originally intended to make it black and white, but couldn't decide on what to do with the background. and obviously since its mine i like it...
>> Anonymous
>>124894
Proportions regarding width and length compared to a normal human skull.
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
Here's a red line for you. This is what everyone is saying. Pose: Awkward. Fix'd. Nose placement: Fix'd. Eye placement: Fix'd. And over-all head shape: Fix'd.

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>> Anonymous
beatiful background ruined by animu face