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Oba Deda Boka
Friend of mine commented on how my original doesn't seem to have a neck. What I guess I didn't realize would be so unapparent, due to my lack of an attempt to shade, is that she's sort of bowing her head, an affect of her drunken stupor. I admit I missed details of her intoxication such as that, as well as her highly flushed face and how she's flinging her shirt about, from Mrro's rendition... though, due to it's quality, how can I complain?
Another friend noted that her breasts connect, like, at her shoulders. I often fail to notice mistakes like those, even in my hand-drawn artwork, though I have a better chance to re-examine and correct them later on. Maybe eventually I'll get one of those on here with my shitty scanner just to prove I'm not so bad when not operating on a mouse.
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