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More Tira for /d/ 34-San
It's been a while since I did some foot-related shit. Colors tomorrow.

Oekaki post(Time: 2 h 39 min, Painter: Shi-Painter Normal)
>> Anonymous
yeeeesh. You're not terrible, but your composition and poses are really bad. Erotic it ain't.

legs are whacked though. Right now they look like they're on the same plane.In fact the farthest leg might even be larger then the nearest.

also boobs-- they don't look like that. Even fake boobs. Bags of fat. They act like bags of fat.

whelp. good luck with that.
>> Anonymous
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You seriously need to learn what makes
a drawing appealing to look at.
Even anal sex can look sexy and appealing!

I suggest you start to copy the pics of famous hentai artists as long as you catch the drift and understand how to do it right!
>> Anonymous
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Copy famous hentai artist to the point where you understand what makes a picture appealing and sexy!
Please
>> Anonymous
>>52994
Do you like Zone? Go tell Zone that because 34-San placed third in his most recent contest.
>> Anonymous
Oh 34-san... you got potential but you seriously need to learn how to draw sexy stuff.
It's like you can draw the details but put always put them together in such an order that they look so very unsexy
>> Wesker !JYbrm0g7fs
You do realise that breasts are actually connected to the side of the chest and don't just magically stop, right?

ACTUALLY LOOK AT A NAKED WOMAN BEFORE YOU ATTEMPT TO DRAW ONE PLZ
>> 34-San
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>>53039

Unoriginal troll is unoriginal.

I edited this a little. Any better?

Oekaki post(Time: 42 min, Painter: Shi-Painter Normal, Source:>>52989)
>> Anonymous
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breasts sag, know it.

Oekaki post(Time: 2 min, Painter: Shi-Painter Normal, Source:>>52989)
>> Anonymous
>>53006

umm what? How does that circumvent the fact that the legs, breasts, and pose are off?

and who the fuck is zone?
>> Anonymous
Perfect photorealism of human external physiology. If you can't match it with your oekaki drawing then you are a shitty artist.

wait what
>> Anonymous
>>53069

photorealism is one thing. A clunky image is another, how do you not know the difference?
>> Anonymous
>>53006
cuz zone is an ingnorant fucker
>> ZONE !vroT8j4/dM
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>> Wesker !JYbrm0g7fs
>>53048
"Unoriginal troll?"

Really?

You've still yet to look at an actual naked woman, I see.

If anything, you disconnected the breast even more.
>> MB
Your stuff looks damn good to me, 34-San. The boobs do seem a bit too perky, but it's nothing that damages the picture.
>> Anonymous
>>53089
Cuz you've no skilled eye for art... sorry it's the truth
>> Anonymous
>>53003
Requesting sauce/rapidshare.
>> Anonymous
you guys are faggots.

The fans and the trolls, I was just giving some honest advice and you think that's the chance to make with the e-drama.

get a fucking life-- all of you.
>> 34-San
>>53079

Oh God, not this shit...

You're absolutely right, I must have never seen a naked woman before because I wasn't able to flawlessly depict the female anatomy.

Just go back to /v/ and don't flame/troll me, kk? I don't have any problems with you, so I don't see why you have any problems with me. I'm the same nerdy fucker as you or anyone else who goes here. The only thing I do differently is post some amateur oekaki shit from time to time. So excuse the hell out of me for not being on the same skill level as you'd like.

>>53060

Actually, I kind of did them the way they are so they'd have some perk to them. I'm aware that some breasts tend to sag, but Tira is a young, petite girl with low body fat, so based on these physical traits, I thought smaller, perky boobs would be appropriate. They don't need to sag that much at all if they're supposed to be perky. Now, I know they still look off, but I still intend to fix it up before the final version.

>>53072

"Clunky." Isn't that a little vague?
>> Anonymous
Hi! I'm Anonymous! I'll troll your oekaki expecting it to be the Mona motherfucking lisa while I contribute absolutely nothing to the oekaki community at large. Maybe I need to go Lurk Moar around /b/ instead of thinking I can make intelligent observations. clearly, I cannot!
>> Namefag
>>53108
Hello, I is namefag, I stick out from the crowd because I either have potential to draw or I can draw pretty damn good, that's why I have a fucking name...and as for you anonymous please stop trolling /i/ and go back to /b/ or stfu and draw something spectacular
>> Anonymous
>>53107

composition + anatomy, consider it and Get your head out of your ass.

Anatomy doesn't have to be perfect, but it does have to look natural, as if it should exist not if it can exist.

your not drawing this from a reference so you have to consider why images are attractive.

don't make excuses when things look wrong and or not appealing.
>> Anonymous
GIVE ME ACTION AND DRAMA!
http://www.4chan.org/flash/drama2.html
>> MB
>>53102
Well, I suppose my life is over now... Yeah. Somebody on 4chan insulted me. D= Now I'll have to become goth and shit bats and stuff... And make comments to people about things I don't know about on 4chan. Oh I'm sorry, I must have thought I was you for a second.

>>53107
I meant no offense. I was just saying my honest opinion. I generally look forward to your posts.
>> Anonymous
>>53109
I see youse talking but I don't see youse drawing
>> 34-San
>>53114

Holy fuck, did all the pretentious motherfuckers flee from /ic/ to /i/ because of the sudden influx of mods on /ic/ that actually do their fucking jobs?

How the hell is explaining my reasoning for drawing a character's tits a certain way an excuse? Why don't you get your head out of your ass first, because it seems like you're reading my posts with some sort of cynical mentality like I'm some jackass artist who can't acknowledge his own mistakes. Obivously I'm aware of the mistakes, and I'm not denying them. Boobs and legs are off a little bit. That's about it. That's pretty much all that needed to be said, but it's been dragged out through the entire thread.

I KNOW my drawing is flawed, but I also know that my drawing isn't bad enough to justify all the fucking drama. Even if it is that bad, then get the fuck over it.
>> Anonymous
>>53133
wrong, anatomy and boobs are the least of your problems. Did you even read any of the posts in this thread?

not quit crying like a little bitch.
>> 34-San
>>53134

Okay, enlighten me. What are my problems beyond that? Don't puss out and give me some vauge adjective, give me details or gtfo.
>> Anonymous
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I didn't see any redlines for all the bitching, so I hope this is not unwelcome. i hope this helps you.

Oekaki post(Time: 6 min, Painter: Shi-Painter Normal, Source:>>52989)
>> Anonymous
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because op said she is skinny

Oekaki post(Time: 10 min, Painter: Shi-Painter Normal, Source:>>53138)
>> Anonymous
>>53073
I like the way you think
>> Anonymous
Uh, what happened to the colors?
>> Anonymous
>>53518

"I'll color it later" is just something 34-san says, not something he ever does.
>> 34-san
>>53541
>>53518

My RAM is corrupted, so I haven't had a chance to color anything on my computer. I'm swapping it out tonight, so I'll get some coloring done.

As many people are bitching about this one, I'm surprised they still want it colored...
>> falos Master
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Oekaki post(Time: 17 min, Painter: Shi-Painter Pro, Source:>>52989)