File :-(, x, )
Play Ball!!! Heist !Ea/loMuinM
There's grass on the field

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>> Anonymous
>>72964
most ridiculous pubes ever

whatever happened to the ticket shave?
>> Anonymous
DRAW MORE OF YOUR BROTHER
>> Anonymous
Hey "Heist!"
Very nice except for a few anatomy problems (she doesn't have a womanly figure) but the color's good. As for the shadows -- maybe not that blackish purple color but a darker brown or orange? The blackish color doesn't go well.
>> Strike 1 Heist !Ea/loMuinM
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>>72975

fixed?

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>> Anonymous !mL2ZRk1cK.
>>73022
She needs 4 or 5 more vertebrae in her spine.
>> Strike 2 Heist !Ea/loMuinM
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>>73024

fixed?

....my computer is being a bitch, I'll just let her cool off

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>> Anonymous !mL2ZRk1cK.
>>73036
I'd attempt to redline but my firefucker is not working well tonight with Java.
>> Anonymous !mL2ZRk1cK.
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yep.. java is quite messed up.

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>> Heist !Ea/loMuinM
>>73040
Did you recently downloaded the latest version of java?
>> Heist !Ea/loMuinM
>>73040
or upgraded it....?
>> Heist !Ea/loMuinM
java sucks in general...just stick to the one you have (as of now)/ I shouldn't of upgraded mine..it's like traffic when I draw or if I want to see animations...
>> Anonymous
So, you changed your name and now draw porn?
Wth ICI?
>> gundrake !3stw1O/bgU
i think you should stick to only drawing guys
>> Anonymous
I think you should stick to being an hero.
>> Heist !Ea/loMuinM
>>73081
What?

>>73099
Why?
>> Anonymous !mL2ZRk1cK.
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Blagh, fine if Java's going to be stubborn..

1.The belly button is way too south. Usually it's around the middle between the bottom of the boobs and the bottom of the crotch when standing up straight. It could also be seen as the midpoint between the elbows and the wrists when the arms are hanging next to the torso.

2. What up with the huge roman nose?

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>> Strike 3 Heist !Ea/loMuinM
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Took me longer...also fixed?

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>> Anonymous !mL2ZRk1cK.
>>73117
no
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
SDxICY

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>> Anonymous
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>>73117
Here's a little help from me, using a stock photo of a woman in a similar position.
>> Anonymous
>>73137
Your art creeps me out.
>> sirjared
>>73137

This is amazing.
>> Anonymous
>>73137
I am inlove with you.
>> Anonymous
>>73137
...(no comment)
>> Ball One Heist !Ea/loMuinM
     File :-(, x)
>>73140

fixed?

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>> Anonymous
>>73170
Back arm is too short and plump. Head seems too small for the body.
>> Anonymous !mL2ZRk1cK.
>>73170
no.
if one shoulder is closer to the view than the other, which shoulder do you think should look longer?
Think about where that head is. It feels like she's straining to get her head as far back as possible.
>> Ball 2 Heist !Ea/loMuinM
     File :-(, x)
>>73175

I think the head is okay (maybe)...adjusted the hand though....also fixed?

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>> Ball 3 Heist !Ea/loMuinM
     File :-(, x)
Am I even close? (and thanks for your patience)

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>> gundrake !3stw1O/bgU
     File :-(, x)
>>73137
>> Anonymous !mL2ZRk1cK.
>>73192
try drawing the upper part of the right arm twice as long as the bottom half. (forshortened lower half of arm)
>> Anonymous
>>73192
The elbow of the 'back' arm should be pointed behind her, like the front arm is. in effect, you really shouldn't be able to see much of the upper arm at all. Just the shoulder, some of her forearm and hand.
>> Anonymous
>>73192
You're getting closer, very good! (waaaaay better torso and hips now!) Still a bit of a problem with the hands/arms, though, so listen to>>73198and>>73220.
>> Ball4 Heist !Ea/loMuinM
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almost?

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>> Anonymous
>>73137
fucking disturbing, but lol
>> Anonymous
Ahem...
THIS IS NOT /ic/!!
>> Anonymous
>>73418
Ahem...
Go blow it out your ass.

You're not clever, either.
>> Penis Moai
>>73418

Criticizing I-C-Yo is a meme.
>> Anonymous
>>73437
Criticizing I-C-Yo places you in the right hand of God.
>> Heist !Ea/loMuinM
>>73418
literal pun is literal
>> Anonymous
>>73456
Fuck you.
You put a damn kike nose on everything and you need 50 strangers to tell you how to draw.
You can't hide.
>> Penis Moai
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Can I-C-Yo really put a kike nose on anything?

Can he put a kike nose... on a kike nose?

Let's find out!

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>> Anonymous
>>73426
I dare say not sir, blow it out thine ass.