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Anonymous
The proportions are pretty good, save for the right thigh which looks too wide and the left arm too skinny. The random thicker line weights (such as around the jaw) throw off the outline in places.
The lightsource and highlight/shading *placement* look pretty accurate, but the shading all seems to be the same brush width, and possibly done with the dodge/burn or airbrush could be better. I'd practice that, but it looks like you're getting a feel for it.
The clouds and palm trees are a bit basic, not really doing it for me.
Hope that all helps! (I'd redline but it ain't /ic/)
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