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Alk
Done quickly in photoshop.

Also over at http://alkhara.deviantart.com/art/Unleashed-Force-100594760

If you happen to be a communityfag and want to post shit there instead.

Just wanting input; what is done badly, what looks gay about it, and why did I bother doing it in the first place?
>> Anonymous
You want honesty and constructive criticism?

I don't like it. It could be because I never was a fan of wallpapers (or any image for that matter) using numerous transparent elements. It just makes it hard to look at and confusing. Minimalism is your friend.
>> Alk
Would something like this, done say, less brightly be more to your tastes?

I didn't really intend it as a wallpaper; just a image...ended up using my monitor's res because it was the default photoshop setting at the time.
>> Anonymous
>>451104

Not really, but here's an idea. Define what you want to be the centerpiece of your image. What you want the viewer to focus on. Let's assume that in this case, this would be the logo, the Apprentice and the ship. From there, expand the picture using the other elements but using less transparency and a dark background. Think of the films' posters to get an idea of what I am talking about.

Also, try to come up with a colour scheme for your picture. You don't want to use too many conflicting colours. Go for warm or cold. Dark or light. Colourful or not. Never do both. If you can't find other pictures that fit (or if you really have to use specific ones), try to alter some of their attributes so that they will fit better.
>> Alk
>>451110
Alright. Amature mistakes, now that I think on it. Its been so long..

Thanks for the advice and keeping the criticism constructive.