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Anonymous
My 1st vector shit

Suggestions?
>> Anonymous
not bad
>> Anonymous
Holy Shit... MOAR
>> Anonymous
needs moar epic boobs sir
>> Anonymous
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>>281972
LOL, it's better than MY first vector...
>> Anonymous
>>281972
Fellow amateur here. Not bad for your first one. A few suggestions:

1. Never use stroke for line art. EVER. When vectoring lines, always vector them as a shape, to preserve the crispness of the lines, to keep the line flow constant, and for precision. I made this mistake on my first few vectors, too.
2. Adjust your layering a bit. The right eye (from our perspective) looks kinda funky.
3. Clean up your coloring. It's kinda sloppy.
4. Not a criticism, but you might consider having each piece (skin, hair, eyes, etc.) in its own layer set, with its own line art. I've found that it helps me if I need to make some kind of adjustment later.
>> Anonymous
>>281972

simple suggestion. dont use the line tool to do the outlines, it looks cheap. draw the lines with the paintbrush in illustrator or flash
>> Anonymous
>>282385
Seconded.

Also, save it as a transparent png next time. jpg is shit for vectors.
>> Anonymous
/ic/ is that way --->