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>>410025 But the casings don't look right. Everything else seems fine and interesting, but it is almost as if the casings were added as an after thought, and no real time was put into thinking about how they should look or move. The rest of the image is dark, and shaded with both highlights and shadows. The case look flat because they have no shading, but because of the contrast between the high saturation of the shells and the brighter color they pop to the front and it is even more noticeable that they are lacking definition. They have become a focal point because of the contrast between them and the rest of the picture, but really look like no effort was put into making them look correct or interesting. The movement of the casings also seems very jittery, and as mentioned earlier, because of the casings, the animation is not seemless, which is something that makes animated gifs that are as short as that one is that much better. With two or three more frames the animation could be made seamless by simply having all of the casings fall off screen, and immediately this image would be that much better. I still feel that the casings need some definition, if for nothing else than to show that they aren't flat, and aren't all on the same plane, since we currently have no visual clues to tell us which casings are closer to us. The shells should be a darker shade the farther away from us they are, because a high contrast pulls forward, and you have used predominantly dark colors for everything else.
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