What to work on?
evryfin mate..
wow thats disgusting, put a shirt on please.
Your dirty jeans.
Just look at those hairy armpits
SQUATZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!111111111111
everything.
Yeah dude wash those fucking jeans, you may not be able to smell it but everyone that you get close to can surely smell your funk.
Pointy-nipple fag poked my eye. X_@