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Anonymous
>>660499 In the first picture he needs to work on the face a bit more. Second one is the best one out of his work. Third one also needs something with the face. In the fourth one the breasts look slightly saggy and the coloration of the bathing suit is unappealing sexually. The work isn't bad, but you should study up established erotica of this kind for outfit and color scheme advice. However, keep in mind this is not a board where people will give constructive criticism. This is a place where people try to find fap material, so they are going to be very judgmental of your work if something is wrong.
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