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Anonymous
What>>147698did is what's called a critique. And it was helpful. Soooo, if the OP feels offended by this and gets scared away by one critique, they should just stop practicing art altogether. I swear, you people act like all he said was "SHIT SUCKS FAG".
There's other issues, though, that>>147698missed. You have the rib cage start curving INWARD up around the shoulder area, it doesn't do that. Her right arm is too long, and her left arm is the same. You also messed up on the perspective so now it appears that her upper arm is incredibly short on her left arm. Her ass is drooping down on her leg, and is actually in more than the small of her back.
Pretty much, just start drawing realism and studying anatomy so that you have good anatomy in your drawings. Your anatomy needs to be tip-top if you're going to draw good hentai/ecchi, because there's nothing that you can use to hide your anatomical flaws.
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