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Anonymous
What's wrong with it at the core is that, quite simply, you need more practice in figure drawing. It's not bad for an early attempt, but she has no neck, and the body over all is just kind of jagged and misshapen. Photoshop's tools aren't the culprit, but your current level of skill.
The real thing here is learn to observe and practice, practice, practice. And you might get your friends to critique your work before you start posting on the Internet. You're just going to get ripped apart here, and if you react with hurt feelings, you'll look like your average DeviantArt denizen that expects their first attempt ever to be hailed as a work of genius.
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