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I jsut finished up this pic of Layer from MMX8, I know its not great, but its my first real attempt at a topless pic, I was hoping for honest critiqe from my fellow channers.
>> Anonymous
sucks, big time, you fail, go die
>> SixInchesArround
>>138489
Thanks alot, fuckwhit. I guess I have to go draw Bridget getting railed by Solid Snake to make you happy, dont I?
>> Anonymous
>>138492

gb2/ic/

although they'd tear you apart there too. it's not the content necessarily...you just need to work on the drawing itself.
>> SixInchesArround
>>138496
Well, I think that is the problem. It was drawn 100% in photoshop without any drawn lineart. I had a reference pic of Layer and the pose and was "drawing" it with the pen tool.
>> Anonymous
fucking horrible
>> Anonymous
aids shitty.
>> Anonymous
what the fuck is with this shitty homemade bullshit in my /e/ lately

Don't post your own art in /e/ unless you're a professional.
>> Anonymous
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>> Anonymous
>>138492
I just love it when people make something shitty, and then blame popular memes for the negative comments.
>> Anonymous
SixInches, you DO know that Bridget is a guy, right? >_>
>> Anonymous
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SAGE MORE LIKE FAIL
>> Anime Fan
>>138591
Lol, he speaks truth.
>> Anonymous
>>138591

I...think that's the point...

SixInches, if it's the first time you've done something like that, it's pretty good. Work on it, get a bit more shading, you should be good.
>> Anonymous
sage for bad artwork, double sage for shitty and unneccessary character in the X series
>> Anonymous
>>138601
bite my ass!
>> Anonymous
Needs moar eyes. And normal tits.
>> SixInchesArround
I was looking for people to tell me what was wrong with it, not people to tell me to go kill myslef.
>> Federicoxxx !KA5wYvysfQ
is not. bad. .but

make eyes on her.. and work more on that kind of...bra...
>> Anonymous
>>138709

Then you should've posted on /ic,/ man. Y'know, the board MADE FOR THAT.
>> Anonymous
-no eyes
-no neck
-mis-shapen breasts

You might wanna practice a bit moar before posting stuff on the intarbutts, also, like>>138721said, post it on a different board
>> Anonymous
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I agree that this shouldn't go here, but I want to inform the ignorant dipshits requesting 'eyes' on the character to fuck off. Layer's official art has always been pictured without eyes, similar to the OP's illustration. See pic attached.
>> Anonymous
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have another, fuckwads

4chan community assholes, only thing you're good for is relieveing stress with flaming at you fags.
>> Anonymous
>>138775

Dear Anonymous

Get the fuck off my 4chan

Sincerely, Anonymous
>> Anonymous
What's wrong with it at the core is that, quite simply, you need more practice in figure drawing. It's not bad for an early attempt, but she has no neck, and the body over all is just kind of jagged and misshapen. Photoshop's tools aren't the culprit, but your current level of skill.

The real thing here is learn to observe and practice, practice, practice. And you might get your friends to critique your work before you start posting on the Internet. You're just going to get ripped apart here, and if you react with hurt feelings, you'll look like your average DeviantArt denizen that expects their first attempt ever to be hailed as a work of genius.
>> PJ3050
suburban white kids crack me up.
>> Anonymous
>>138468
I like where you're head's at. Get a lot better, but try again. I'd go w/ DeviantART once you get good. That way your pics won't vanish in a day or 2 on 4chan.
>> Anonymous
>>138492
That would just be /y/. Wouldn't change the fact that you can't draw for shit and are clearly about 10 years too young to be on 4chan anyway.
>> Anonymous
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>>138468
attempt at a topless pic

THIS IS WHY YOU FAIL.
>> Domestic Detroit
>>138828
Theres nothing funny about suburban white kids.
>> Anonymous
I like the eyes.