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Anonymous
what does /e/ think about this?
>> Anonymous
Etc etc pooper.
>> Anonymous
the point is this is the job of a freind of mine....

http://www.maduin.com.ar/

i say taht if only he improves only a little more, maybe possible for him to sell his works on Dlsite.

what do you think /e/ ?
>> Anonymous
His coloring is great. He should spend more time on his line work, and the final result would be improved ten fold.

P.S. If an artist wants to make money doing art, it's damn easy to get involved itno various communities and do commissions. Most people will buy anything artists draw if it's a member of the community.
>> Anonymous
Needs to work on drawing humans a bit...taller? and more detailed?
>> Anonymous
>>510272
Head needs to be smaller, bigger ear, a bit longer body (that body lenght would look better with smaller breasts), a little bit more detail in the coloring (would look better if all of the shades didnt look like they were made with gradient tool. Sharp edges looks good in the places like under the shirt on tummy etc)
And I know that everyone has his/her own style, but those things would improve his drawings alot
>> Anonymous
er, the anatomy is fine if that's what he's going for. i assume he's not trying to get something hyper realistic so the proportions look good to me. just get some more detailed or slightly bolder linework, IMO, and it'd look great.