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H-Neko
Hey guys, just wondering you guys think of this drawing I did just now o=
oh before anyone tells me to go /ic/ they don't like anime artwork over there =/
>> Anonymous
actually, they do, but if you can't take the critique, then don't post.
>> H-Neko
I do take the critiques =/
but last few times I went I hardly got anything worth calling a critique
>> Anonymous
embarassed big boobs girl is embarassed
>> Anonymous
want to know how to get honest critique?

post here but don't mention it's your drawing. that'll be honesty for you.

actually, come back here same time tommorrow, it's never the same people on, and post it with a generic text. then see what people really say.
>> Anonymous
boobs are way too high

please learn anatomies
>> Anonymous
>>563139
Uh, oh man. I'm so going to stalk this board for the next week. It's something to do!
>> Anonymous
I would say the eyes seem a bit small, a bit beedy, and her whole face seems like it needs to be a little bit bigger, other than that its a decent attempt, bettter than I can do.
>> Anonymous
Hair is a bit big,small head,boobs need fixing.

You need moar reference art
>> H-Neko
>>563140
Well it's kinda pushed up by her arms
>> Anonymous
>>563150

that's true, but their origin is still too high, i.e. if pushed to that height there would be a visible "fold" above the orbs as well
>> Anonymous
i was able to fap to this pic alone. that is my critique. now draw her giving a titfuck.
>> Anonymous
>>563306
I lol'ed
>> Anonymous
'sup? just a couple of this need fixing before than picture is perfect;
1)the eyes need to be just that much bigger.
2) the breasts are fantastic, unlike SOME massive boobs you some girls have that are just wayyy to big, but they need to come down, just a bit.
3) last thing, her hair. I mean just the 2 things that come down past her breasts, they seem to get thinner and then all of a sudden thicker again.


Otherwise that a really good peice of art there, Buddy.
Keep it up
>> Anonymous
Love her. Can I get a full body shot here? :D
>> Anonymous
>>563328

Adding on to what he said, I think her neck could be a bit thinner, especially at the top.
This is me just being picky, but I think you could add some soft shadows to make it pop a bit more. For example: a faint shadow under her collar bone and her left (our right) forearm. Nothing too heavy, just something subtle. That's just my opinion though as a semi-artist.

Other than that I think you're doing great. Keep up the good work :D
>> Anonymous
Wtf is wrong with people who say she needs bigger eyes? Not all art styles are ridiculously moe. In my opinion, she hotter with normal sized eyes. That said, those bits of hair at the front are weird.
>> gundrake !3stw1O/bgU
OP: make clean line art
>> H-Neko
>>563139
Hrm, maybe, oh well, doesn't matter now, but what would you consider generic text in this sense? o.O (and sorry though but I am always honest as that's the way I prefer to be ^^;;)

>>563140
>>563144
>>563147
>>563152
>>563328
Yeah, I noticed after looking at it again that the breasts origin's too high
But yeah, I guess I should make the eyes bigger but I dunno, oh well I'll just do one with bigger eyes just to see
yeah I noticed I failed at the hair this time round =/ tried to make it too big and somehow didn't pay too much attention to her side band sorta thing.
But yeah, needs moar reference arts 'cause for this pic I could hardly find any

>>563306
>>563307
>>563337
I lol'ed too but yeah I plan on drawing both

>>563343
so basically add a bit more shadowing underneath her collar bone and arm? o=
But yeah I'll try to make the top part of her neck a little bit more thinner

thanks for all your comments and critique guys x3
>> H-Neko
>>563364
I agree I rather keep my eyes the way they are but it doesn't hurt to experiment either, but yeah I noticed what you mean about her hair u_u;

>>563367
Ya know, I've seen line art work like this a lot of times from many good and professional artists, one of them being the illustrator for all of the Summon Night games o.O
>> Anonymous
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LINE ART
>> Anonymous
honestly go to polykarbonbbs or something, the artwork is ok but not really worth posting here...probably a spur of the moment thing but after the "heat" dies down you'll begin to see the faults but keep going at it :D
>> H-Neko
>>563474
thanks for the site nonetheless