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Anonymous
It looks pretty slick, fuck that other dood.
Criticisms : Head/neck looks a bit thick, mostly the part where they connect. Maybe add a slightly visible ear to break it up a bit, or slim it down. (I'm guessing this is all done in vectors)
Highlight in forearm is a bit harsh. Don't use 3-tone shading for the sake of using 3-tone shading. Since you're already in /e/, take a glance at other pieces with simple shading. The highlights should shape the forewarm better. I think the same issue's in the hands.
The shaded couch lines look kinda meh... I'm not sure the effect works well.
The cloth on her legs is great, and most of the pose is fine, but going back to that right arm... Okay, everyone who does vectoring of pencil sketches hates this advice, but here it goes : you might need to redraw her. Personally, I think that right side looks a bit contrived, to make the rest of the pose work, as if that part came last, because her right arm against the sofa back looks seriously forced. As such, maybe you want to wrap that arm around the back of the sofa, and arch her back more to compensate. It would look more natural (right now the pose looks uncomfortable at the least) and sexier as well. (once again, you DID post in /e/)
Just some advice, take it as you will.
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