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H-Neko
Hey guys, I'm back, though haven't been able to draw much, here's a new pic
>> H-Neko
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first one I posted in /e/
>> Anonymous
uh... don't quit your day job yet
>> Anonymous !Sg.BEARZY.
>>566866
I lol'd

I'll go ahead and be an evil critic, but keep in mind they are my opinions, blah shit~
>>566861
Boobs don't overlap like that, they squish together. At least some, not a complete overlap like that though. The arms, hand, and hair look okay. I noticed it faintly in your first pic and it stands more noticable in your latest, the defined jawline is a masculine trait in anime~esque art.

Looking forward to your next piece, Sg.BEARZY.
>> H-Neko
>>566867
yeah the boobs were bothering me a bit too, but my gf wasn't around for me too look and neither my sister had anything to say about it, but thanks
hrm, yeah I made her jaws a little too defined =/

thanks for the insight
>> H-Neko
>>566866
lol, unfortunately I don't even have a job yet
>> Anonymous
not bad really..work on the boobs...ya might want to ink this before you color...This place is famous for tearing newbies a new ass.. Most of us couldnt draw our way out of a paper bag for crap sake.
>> Anonymous
>>566873
Me either. Unless you wana flip burgers you need years of experence, and you cant get any if EVERYONE wants it to get a job.
>> Anonymous
>>566861
The chin's the largest problem here. It looks like a guy with tits.
>> Anonymous
I'd agree with the other guys. Work on chins and noses next. And breasts of course, lovely breasts.
>> Mii
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>>566966
I'd say work on the whole head shape, placement of the eyes, neck, breasts and stuff. But I must say that the hand looks pretty good, and thats usually the thing people learn to draw last.

Ok, I'm bad at explaining, so I redlined it, even tho this isnt /ic/.
And dunno if I've just looked at too many animu pictures (and 0 pictures of people drawn with other styles), but the head looks a bit too small to me and the body a bit too masculine. But I tried to redline it the way it still looks the same style
>> Anonymous
It's a man, baby.
>> Anonymous !Sg.BEARZY.
Bump for /e/
>> H-Neko
>>566882
well it's not that bad, and surprisingly last time which was also the first time I posted something like this I didn't get much of a bad reception o.O but it all depends on who's on at the time anyways

>>566900
Aye, I noticed after Sg.BEARZY mentioned it

>>567043
/ic/ or not it doesn't matter, thanks for the redline~, but yeah, the head's in more of a realistic proportion as that's the style I try to draw in
>> Anonymous
the chins.. they are so damn angular and pointy.
>> H-Neko
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wonder if it's alright now
>> Anonymous
>>566861

There are boards specifically for this stuff. /e/ isn't one of them.
/i/. /ic/ that way etc.
>> H-Neko
>>567335
if /ic/ wasn't so useless that'd be fine and technically it ain't an oekaki
>> Anonymous
>>567337
Then why don't you make an /r/ thread here while you're at it and get banned? Seeing as people think that's SO useless too.
>> H-Neko
>>567418
yeah I thought about that, since I said it in such a manner, oh well
>> Anonymous
>>567332
Better, definitely better. The jaw is still a bit too wide imo though.
>> Anonymous
first thing i noticed was that she (op pic) looked... manly
>> Anonymous !Sg.BEARZY.
Oh hush. He quite clearly didn't request anything, and like he said, this isn't oekaki. If the pics were to be posted anywhere, it would either be here or in /c/, but that would be blurring a whole lot of lines. Anon's supplying feedback to his sketches in respect of his bravery to post it on 4chan, buahahahaha.

Anyways, op, if I could get in contact with you that would be cool...
>> Anonymous Overlord
OP needs to learn to endure trolls in /ic/