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Hello out there, fellow /D/eviants. I couldn't recall ever seeing this posted here or elsewhere, so I thought it'd make everyone's lives just a bit better if I scanned it up, english'ed it up, and posted it.

It's a fun lil' number that has a lot to love: Futa, dick-growth, crazy cum enjoyment, eye rolling, etc. "These are a few of my favorite things..." as the song goes.
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>> Anonymous
The writing is the best part. Thanks for the translation.
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NOT the last page, still have a few more to scan and write up...if people want to see 'em.
>> Anonymous
VERY DO WANT
>> Anonymous
>>988880
Holy shit YES
>> Anonymous
>>988880
JESUS CHRIST FUCKING POST IT
>> Anonymous
Christ almighty!!

Thought it was Louise at first before reading (your excellent trans.) and now I can't possibly unsee it! IT CALLS TO ME WITH A BURNING SENSE OF MOAR!
>> Anonymous
bump for initiative
>> Anonymous
shitty rewrite is shitty.

Not only is the dialogue terrible, but it got turned into Harry Potter shit. Goddamn Hermione ruins everything.
>> Anonymous
>>988925

>>shitty troll is shitty and trying way to hard to be cool.

>>Not only is the dialogue awesome and shmexy, but he kept to the Harry Potter material it started as, which I would know if I spoke Japanese myself and read the title. Goddamn Hermione's fuck awesome.

fix'd.
>> Anonymous
>shmexy

Get the fuck out,no seriously

Get the fuck out
>> Anonymous
>>988936

What's the matter little Timmy? Too butthurt by your own faggotry to appreciate good material and generous donators here in the sea of reposts?

Seriously, even if you DON'T like what he did with it, real or not, I certainly don't fucking know or care, the others seem to like it, so why don't you just fuck off and GTFO sir. Good day.
>> Anonymous
Less bitching, more WHERE THE FUCK IS THE REST PLEASE HURRY.
>> Anonymous
Not like I don't want to see the rest also, but...Spacer didn't actually say he would post the rest tonight. Still, hope that he does.
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I liked this one more, personally.
>> Arisato Delicious !xhIcTko8pA
>>988932
It's a rewrite, you fucking failtrain.
>> C h a n
>shmexy
>failtrain
>rewrite

I don't think I've seen the original of this, so I'll go look for it. Thanks for the laughs!
>> Anonymous
if you ignore the part that it's hermoine, then it's pretty hot.
>> Anonymous
Who gives a fuck if it's a re-write or what, it's great
need moar
>> C h a n
>it's great

Debatable, that. It's a buzzkill when you notice that the rewrite author doesn't know the difference between the urethra and a foreskin.
>> Anonymous
Hard to tell. The fact that there's so much text it fills the bubbles to the fuckin' brim is proof that it's a rewrite to some extent, but it does look like it may have possibly been Harry Potter related in moonspeak too.

Regardless, I personally find the generic white-trash dirty talk mixed with butter beer and Granger to be a fuckin' boner-kill.

Would be interested in an untranslated version.
>> Anonymous
Bump for all three magic mushroom comics
>> Anonymous
/r/ing faithful translation of original
>> Anonymous
/r/ing the FUCKING REST OF IT. JESUS.
>> Anonymous
please, for the love of all that is deliciously hot . . . post moar.
>> Anonymous
please more, bump
>> Anonymous
Wow. bump.
>> Anonymous
How about someone post the original so we can actually see if it's a rewrite or not?
>> Anonymous
oh god post the rest
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Wow, some of you guys are just fucking douchebags. I'll never for the life of me understand why people badmouth and disuade /a/nons who actually try to contribute stuff from doing so. It's like if their natural survival instincts don't work, the kind of people who'd laugh and tell some dude with a gun in their face to fuck off.

OF COURSE it's a fucking re-write, in the OP's defense, he never actually said it was a "translation", just that he "english'ed it up". The truth is, most people think Japanese doujin writers are shit and like dirty talk like this shit better. Live with it and don't fucking troll.

In ANY fuicking case, here are the last few pages, UNtranslated.

Oh, and the Magic Mushroom series IS Harry Potter, and that IS Hermione, for those bitching.
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Anybody know where to get this series? /rs/ isn't showing anything on "Magic Mushroom" or even "mushroom"
>> Anonymous
I've never seen it scanned anywhere before now. They're not well-known doujins.
>> Anonymous
can someone please rapidshare the other magic mushrooms, I've only got no 3

http://rapidshare.com/files/104606296/_Hanjuku_Yudetamago__Magic_Mushroom_3.zip

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?llls0u2tkm2
>> Anonymous
Is this Hermione?
>> Anonymous
>>989491
>>989493
>>989495
>>989496
>>989498

translation for last pics please
>> Anonymous
>>989968
Just make it up yourself, that's what OP was doing.
>> C h a n
>>989491
>I'll never for the life of me understand why people badmouth and disuade /a/nons who actually try to contribute stuff from doing so. It's like if their natural survival instincts don't work, the kind of people who'd laugh and tell some dude with a gun in their face to fuck off.

tl;dr: drama factory

Anyway, I'm going to look for the first two. I'll post them here on /d/ if I find them.
>> Anonymous
>>Wow, some of you guys are just fucking
>>douchebags. I'll never for the life of me understand
>>why people badmouth and disuade /a/nons who
>>actually try to contribute stuff from doing so.
Maybe they wouldn't get badmouthed if their contributions didn't fucking suck.

...just sayin'.

This had the potential for hotness, but the badly-written text just cocked it all up for me. I mean, seriously? Reaching inside the foreskin because the penis won't come out? "sweety, come loose for me"? Did it really just say that?

It all boils down to some faggot's god-awful Harry Potter fanfiction pasted into the word bubbles. Kills the boner every time.
>> Anonymous
Actually I would like to see the rest of this with English'd text, even if it isn't a direct translation. I think the original content really adds a lot to what are by themselves mediocre futa drawings.
>> Anonymous
bump for more translations
>> Anonymous
look, if you don't like it, don't fucking look. hit the back button and move on to the rest of the board.
there's a little firefox add on as well that lets you hide the thread. utilize it, and let the rest of us have our fun for fuck's sake.

OP, please post the rest, my balls weep for more.
>> Anonymous
>>990440

How about your write your fucking own ending. It's just like what the OP is doing.
>> Anonymous
>>988938
Go back to Gaia. Shmexy? Are you seriously trying to fucking defend yourself after saying that? Thank god I only go to /d/ for the porn and not the users.
>> Anonymous
must have delicious rapidshit
>> Anonymous
>>990440
>look, if you don't like it, don't fucking look.
Except life doesn't work that way.
You can't just come into somebody else's shit, fuck it up, and expect recourse.
>>989491
>The truth is, most people think Japanese doujin writers are shit and like dirty talk like this shit better. Live with it and don't fucking troll
"most people (m?st p?'p?l)
pron.
Used to refer to oneself as speaker or writer."?
"/d/" has damn near "always" reacted negatively to rewrites (e.g. Cyber Porno, Sex Education).
This is because /d/ is an _image_board.
Thus, the only thing that needs to be unanimously erotic is the image.
While "some people" (people other than me) care about what is being said, "most people" are more focused on the girl with the raging hard-on.
There are many places that exist for "original" erotic-fan-fiction-text-walls, but /d/ has never been one of them.
>> Anonymous
You know, what was posted is good. The rapidshit someone gave of another part is even better and is saved to one of my best doujin collections.

I know enough japanese to tell that it IS Hermione, even.

But none of this changes the fact that the incredibly blatant and obvious rewrite from the OPs posts is sickening or laughable at best, on the level of erotic fanfiction written by someone who watches too much terrible porn and lives in their parent's basement.

There's nothing intrinsically wrong with rewrites, there have been good ones in the past, but I would honestly be less disgusted if someone had urinated on these pages before scanning them than I am at this pathetic attempt at writing porn talk.

I hope this wasn't your work, OP, but if it is, you should be fucking ashamed of yourself.
>> Anonymous
Waaaaa!
>> Anonymous
>>988932
ONLY A STUPID BLOND BITCH WOULD SAY "SHMEXY" AND SINCE YOUR NOT A GIRL YOU MUST BE THE WORST KIND OF FAGGOT


FAGGOTFAGGOTFAGGOT
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There's no place for rewriters this side of Hell...
>> Anonymous
spy sappin' mah doujins.
>> Anonymous
>>990405
Then just read some Harry Potter fanfics, faggot
>> Anonymous
>There's nothing intrinsically wrong with rewrites, there have been good ones in the past, but I would honestly be less disgusted if someone had urinated on these pages before scanning them than I am at this pathetic attempt at writing porn talk.
QFT
>> Alan Spacer
You guys hurt my feelings :<
>> Anonymous
Thread reported mainly to find out if the mods care, secondly because rewrites = shitty and all that jive that's been said before I could say it