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Kebinu !GhiZeo/aQQ
Sorry I've been neglecting you /d/, I've spent the past few weeks doing vector traces for /e/ and haven't put much effort into "improving" women. Plus it took me a long, long time to find the proper reference pose to make this.
>> Anonymous
Wait so you're the one who has been cocking up(no pun intended) all those pictures? There's no excuse for doing that. GG fag.
>> Anonymous
>>928641
How's that a problem?
>> Iris !tFj8DP0Frs
>>928641
You must be new here.
>> Anonymous
Great work. Would love to see more.
>> Kebinu !GhiZeo/aQQ
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>>928721

I've got a rapidshare of my work up through March (I've only done a couple since then) but it might just get reported and deleted by some jerk.
>> Snesso
I'd like to see more too
>> Anonymous
god dammit, I love the tits but hate the dick. I am beginning to ask myself why i come to d if i don't like futa
>> Snesso
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>>928895
>> ??Anonymous??
>>928895
good question
>> Anonymous
>>928895
Because there are other things here that make it worthwhile. Pretty much the story of any /d/eviant's life. There will always be something in /d/ which is posted regularly and royally pisses you off. The key is to realize that the reason you come to /d/ is probably the reason somebody else is slamming their head against their desk right now.

>>928907
Thanks!
>> Anonymous
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This?

http://rapidshare.com/files/100390424/futa_shops_by_Kebinu_3-17-08.zip
>> Anonymous
>>929381
i don't hurt myself over who posts what porn on a messageboard, you pathetic fuck. if i don't like it, i just plain don't click on it, and scroll on by
>> sage
>>929548
sage for taking "slamming their head against their desk" literally and calling someone who was being nice a "pathetic fuck".
>> Anonymous
Wow guys, way to derail the thread.
>> Anonymous
I love futa, but i really don't like the idea of someone going around and changing someone else's work. Also, it usually ends up not looking very natural. This is why i don't like 'uncensoring' or making previously clothed girls nude. It often looks very obviously shopped and sort of ruins what the artist was doing with the picture.
I will say very nice work on the OP though.
>> Kebinu !GhiZeo/aQQ
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>>929575

This isn't something I take lightly. I've maybe done 60 to 70 shops that I've released and posted, and at least that many that I've either decided not to post or abandoned partway because I thought they either didn't look natural or flat out sucked. I've seen some people do crappy ten minute things they drew in MSPaint or cut out the dick from another picture and just pasted it in and wonder how the hell they get the balls to post something like that for everyone to see. My aspiration is to be as good at this as Chinkora (see attached) is because before I learned to recognize his style he was making me do double takes thinking they were originally drawn that way.
>> anon177
Very nice work, hope to see a lot more of it!
>> Anonymous
Honestly Kebinu, you're no Chinkora. Keep practising. Like a lot more.
>> Anonymous
>>929824

Well, Chinkora aside, you are pretty good at this, and can only get better. Some of the pictures you've tried your hand at simply didn't lend well to adding a penis (a few of the art styles, etc.). But that's the hardest part of what you're doing, I'd imagine; adapting another person's style of drawing.

I may only be speaking for myself, but I'm looking forward to seeing more of your edits, since I cannot hope to add cocks to women myself.
>> Anonymous
I do have a slight, but hopefully helpful criticism. The cock in>>928629looks fine, but checking through some of the shoops in the rapidshare collection reveals that most of them exhibit awfully tiny penises. And I don't mean just the length, as some of them look surprisingly thin too.

Sure, they may be more realistic, but, you shouldn’t be going for that, if you are. Hentai is generally all about exaggerations of the norm. Hell, real porn is too. They rarely hire a man with a small penis for pornos, after all. And because of how small they are, compared to the girl themselves; it just makes them surprisingly noticeable, and obviously a poorly done edit as a result.

Average sizes, and I mean length, are fine most of the time. But please don’t give your futa edits hot dog-thin cocks.
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>>930068

And here are a few examples of what I mean:

Could be better...
>> Anonymous
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>>930070

Okay, no.
>> Anonymous
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>>930071

And lastly, the only one from that entire rapidshare I'm not deleting (just deleted the two I uploaded before this):

This one is surprisingly good compared to the rest of the collection.
>> Anonymous
>>929548
Then why are you here, you fucktarded newfag attention whore? GTFO, hypocrite.
>> Anonymous
>>929824

I make some copy/pasta futashop, but only for me.

Why? Because I don't want to post something I hadn't draw myself at 100%.

And I find op pic awesome Kebinu, since I make some shop I can see you worked on it during a long time.
>> Anonymous
The only productive thing I can say, personally, is "study Chinkora's work more" since I particularly love the way he does it.
>> Anonymous
Still a long way to go before you're the new Chinkora, keep at it, you're certainly better than most shoppers out there.
>> Anonymous
4OP - keep trying, you're quite good. A little bit of self-criticism and a lot of effort - and you're better than Chinkora, why not.
Offtopic, but could anybody upload a pack of Chinkora's art? (4 educational purposes only, of course)
>> Kebinu !GhiZeo/aQQ
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>>930068

Line size and consistency is the thing I'm having the most trouble with--a lot of the stuff you're seeing and citing as problematic is stuff from very early on. Starting this I thought coloring would be the most difficult part of this but it's actually getting easier with practice--the OP picture I basically started with lineart and added in the color and shading myself. The hard part is making the outlines match the proper color, thickness and consistency of the other lines in the picture--and it's especially difficult to do this when it's a non cel-shaded picture or a picture with obvious JPEG compression. Remember these shops have been done over a period of months where I was learning as I went along, and trial and error was all I had because I've never taken a class to learn how to use Photoshop properly. I was just applying what I'd learned from vector tracing, and I've developed from that--I've learned the value of shape layers vs. paths, gradient filling and so on. Some of the stuff you're citing as an example was done last November and December when I was still cutting my teeth on this. Looking back on it I can see the errors and that some of them were ill-advised but at that point I was just trying to put work out and get feedback.
>> Kebinu !GhiZeo/aQQ
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Regarding the size thing, that's my preference. I can't get it up or off to Doug Winger-size cocks. Big ones are nice but girls with small, cute ones are nice too. Also be aware that a lot of my early work is direct copies of Chinkora's lineart, and he has an equal propensity to draw small penises--in fact on some of his pictures they're downright tiny (see attached).
>> Kebinu !GhiZeo/aQQ
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Where I wanted to make my mark is in varying the poses I use as source material. If you look at Chinkora's shops you can see that the vast majority have the girls facing directly towards the camera or turned slightly to the side, with the occasional profile picture. You don't see any shops of pictures of girls from above or beneath or behind--admittedly they're harder to draw from those angles. That's why I've attempted some pictures, like>>930071, where I was trying to switch the pose up and see if I could still pull it off. Obviously that time I didn't, but it's what I'm aiming for.

My guide for size is for the cock to reach up about to the girl's navel or slightly short of it.
>> Anonymous
adding penis is SERIOUS BUSINESS :)
>> Anonymous
>>931283
DICKS

SRSBSNS
>> Anonymous
>>930351
Fun hobby! Wish you'd do someone without ballsacks though.
Why I agree that many of the penises are a little on the thin side, it's also good that you vary them so much, as in that picture.
>> Anonymous
>>931870
>drawing dicks on women is a fun hobby

I got news for you...
>> Kebinu !GhiZeo/aQQ
>>931870

That one's not mine. See the red signature in the corner? That's Chinkora, the Japanese shopper I was referring to in some of my posts.
>> C h a n
>>928712
I got sum moar news: nobody believes you're a female either.

p.s.
>>931871
Wise beyond his years.