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Help me for Kago's sake Anonymous K
Ok /d/, could you help me with the translation of this Shintaro Motherfucking Kago brick-shitting manga? I'm not talking about the japanese->english translation.(well if you want to check that too then no problem)
Since I'm italian i don't know english all that well, so could you please help me improve the wording, correct any errors etc.?
ill start

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-Maze in Front of the Station-
>> Anonymous K
that was the last page. So... any errors? If everything's ok, i'll start editing the scans tomorrow :)
>> Anonymous
16combo! wtf /d/ who's sleeping?!!
>> Sagefag
I don't talk moonspeak so I can't vouch for the actual translation, but the translation itself is good and understandable, plus it actually fits in with what's going on in the manga.

>>720872
This isn't /b/, we don't combobreak here. Besides, even if we do, we don't care.
>> Anonymous
Oh fuck, that's like some Junji Ito manga
>> Anonymous K
>>720886
no, it's more like shintaro kagos other mangas actually :P
>> Anonymous K
bump
>> Anonymous
Bump for win.