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What do you guys think?
Source: http://www110.sakura.ne.jp/~kaimen/purplebonus/index.htm
>> What I think WTFtaru
umm... it's purple?
>> Temprus !Zim0DJ9qJ2
It needs a Sailor Soldier stuck to the end of it?
>> Anonymous
I think the artist needs to update more. :p
>> Anonymous
I think its dangerous to ask open ended questions in a place like this.
>> Anonymous
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>> Anonymous
Thanks for the source.
>> lilolme
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latter that evening :-P
>> Anonymous
>>175319
>>174997
I don't get it. Is Sailor Mars getting brainwashed/modified to be like the purple cat girl? If it is, then it's truly arousing.
>> Temprus !Zim0DJ9qJ2
A Nekonell Mars. Never would I thought to of ever seen such a thing. ^_^;;
>> Anonymous
>>175438
I think she was bitten or something and then turned into one herself. Becoming evil and sexy.
I love stuff like that.
>> Anonymous
>>175745
you do know theres like books of Fanfaction on this plot right?

Kitty mars nails the rest of the senshi shortly after. and it goes down hill from there.
>> Anonymous
>>175746
Where?
>> Anonymous
WARNING: there is a lot, a LOT of incredibly pretentious shit that goes pretty much nowhere in between the parts where catgirl hermaphrodites have sex with each other, and if you read all of it you will probably end up bashing your head into a wall.

http://greyarchive.greyarchive.info/SailorIo12.htm , it continues on past Sailor Moon into other things:
http://greyarchive.greyarchive.info/SailorIO13.html
http://greyarchive.greyarchive.info/SailorIo14.html
http://greyarchive.greyarchive.info/ChaosB1.htm
http://greyarchive.greyarchive.info/Chaos9.htm

and the group where they post chapters and "discuss" them is here: http://www.smartgroups.com/group/group.cfm?GID=3215250
note that discuss is in quotation marks because when I talked about how the parts-in-between-the-sex-scenes could be improved, trying as hard as possible to not offend, the authors reacted as if I raped their mothers and I fully expect that some stand-in for myself will be raped and killed in a future chapter as "revenge".
>> Anonymous
>>175910
ya,
is that a pack of emo writers or what?

read the first chapter and don't bother with the rest. Once the SI's show up it craps out big time.

Writers a real head case with more complexs then.. well 4chan. He has some kinda "last man alive" thing going.
>> Anonymous
>>175910
you forgot to mention gendercide. And guro.
>> True Sailor Io Anonymous
>>175910

You forgot to mention that all of your "suggestions were formatted as flames, that you began telling us how to write it, and a number of other offenses. That's the reason we finally banned you. The guy who posts some creative critism is still welcome on our board. As for the rest of everyones comments, I don't see any of you trying to do better. My co-author and I write the series for fun, we don't get paid, or reimbersed in any way for our time, yet people like you seem to think you can order us around like we're your sevants. Time and again it's been said, if you do not like the story, stop reading it. It's really as simple as that, I figure it's you who has the complexes since you keep going back to read more. So get a life, Orbital Jesus, since I know that's you posting there.
>> Anonymous
The very same!

The things that piss us off the most are not those that have no merit whatsoever, but the things that we ALMOST could have enjoyed. You could've had lightning in a bottle (a very SEXAY bottle) on your hands, but your refusal/incapability to accept criticism torpedo the whole goddamned thing. It doesn't matter how coy you want to be or how long you say the story is, after reading that many pages we should know who the protagonist and antagonist are! And if you don't care about any of that and just want to write sex scenes -- why bother with the whole super-pretentious story at all?