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(futanari oneshot manga) [TWILIGHT/Studio Vanguard] Kousoku - BUD Anonymous
Repost, because the thread died. I'm not the original poster.

Direct Download:
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>> Anonymous
Aww crap, not this shit again. Take this Femnazi shit and GTFO
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Synopsis:
During treatment for a so-called hormonal disorder, 17-year-old Takano Manami discovers the terrible secret of Yamame Women's Hospital.

Alternate Online Viewing:
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/60693/b77ef88f32/
http://www.hentaitraders.com/hentai/.../1638#file9989
>> Anonymous
I came. In buckets.
>> Anonymous
Because of this, I've lost my hardon
>> Anonymous
I wanted to fap, but instead I just lol'd hard at the THIS IS WHAT FEMINISTS ACTUALLY BELIEVE parts.
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>>1136959
I would hope they don't actually believe this shit, but chances are they do. >_>
>> Anonymous
the only real feminnazi was the doctor, the nurse and the dumb girl was just too stupid and got brain washed way too easily by simple words and and being fucked when they're hormones went into overdrive when they grew a dick.
>> Anonymous
The mind control was hot
>> Anonymous
>>1136969
Yeah, but the nurse and the girl both became feminazis in the end.
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>>1136969
Maybe it's the fact that their hormones are in overdrive that makes them more pliable to the doctor's suggestions. Obviously, having a cock already wires them to be attracted to girls.
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>>1137038
Rationalizing this doesn't make it less fucked up
>> Anonymous
9 months to "give birth" to a cock?
>> Anonymous
The doctor and nurse are controlling her and using her for their own pleasure more than her boyfriend ever did.
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>>1137160
The irony is thick. >.>
>> romanji
Still looking for the raw so that this might get a REAL translation rather than the feminazi rewrite.
>> Anonymous
>>1137346
Rewrite my ass, this is an Accurate translation. Hell, I think the title translates to 'we don't need men' or something along those lines
>> romanji
>>1137483
well it's within the realm of possibility that it's accurate. however, i seriously doubt it given what this very same group did to "sex education". that one started off more or less accurate, until a few pages in misandrist text was inserted that had no presence in the original japanese. then the last few pages were a total rewrite. i have a strong suspicion that similar was done here. mistakes were pointed out in a previous thread on the body writing, though you're right, the japanese near the beginning seems to say "we don't need men." that by itself is hardly a validation of the entire translation though.
>> Anonymous
"You're really a lesbian. So here! Have a penis!"
>> Anonymous
>>1137632
Still, the language looks pretty decent.
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>>1137632
I missed the previous thread. Which mistakes are you referring to?
>> Anonymous
Copypasta of the translation of the body writing:


I'm not 1136053, but I'll give it a try. Question marks besides the ones I'm not sure about.

Left Breast:
"Meat toilet"
"Manhater"

Right Breast:
"Lez" (?)
futanari mark

Stomach:
"For Women Only"
"Men Not Allowed"
"Big Cock Girl"

Right Leg:
"Pet"
"Sei" (a counter used to mark off how many times somebody has done something. in h-manga, it often refers to how many times a girl's been fucked)

Left Leg:
"Serial Rapist"
>> Anonymous
That's not even the whole thing. The whole thing is like, almost a hundred pages of roughly 30 page stories and some nice single pics
>> Anonymous
Reading this doujin makes me realize that even though I think of myself as a fairly calm, peaceful guy, there are people in this world who I would mercilessly beat up without remorse. The doctor is one of them.
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>>1138085
Yeah, that's obvious from the info on the source on the last page. Your point?
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>>1138089
Like all anime characters, they talk way too much and are way too pretentious.

It's like the writer wanted people to glaze over whatever he/she was writing.
>> Anonymous
What whimsical biology. Bad science! BAD!
>> Anonymous
>>1138116
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Upregulation
Kind of interesting. So, basically, what the "serum" does is locally increase the number of male hormone bindsites in the clit? Would it actually work like this?
>> Anonymous
>>1138125
If such a serum existed, it would lead to a much larger clitoris, but not a cock.
>> Anonymous
Is there any more like this?
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>>1137160
It's okay when they do it, but not okay when a man does. Hypocrites.
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>>1138198
How about you just ignore the text?
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Additional direct download:
http://w14.easy-share.com/1702282510.html
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>>1138268
That's hard to do.
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Additional direct download:
http://www.mediafire.com/?zmykna4zz01
>> Anonymous
y so srs /d/?!

This has as much to do with feminism as traditional porn is has to do with plumbing or cable guys. It's a silly lead in. No need to get upset.
>> Anonymous
>>1138198
I suspect this was made by a guy

>>1137632
>misandrist text was inserted
But if it was misogynist text you wouldn't mind it, would you?
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>>1137483
>>1137632
First pic ITT is page 60 of the 'Kousoku' tankoubun, second pic is page 79. Each from a completely different, unrelated story.
Now, do you want to keep talking about "Accurate translation"? Or can we go ahead and Kill It With Fire?
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Here, I'll even give you these original (albeit LQ) pages. Check them against the rewrite, and try not to burst in laughs...
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>>1138484
I stopped reading the rewrite when it started talking about health insurance. Big walls of text should have been the first signs of trouble.
>> Anonymous
It's not that bad ...
>> Anonymous
>>1138626
The first sign of trouble should have been that you tried to read a porn comic.
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>>1138744
There are bad rewrites, and there are BAD rewrites, and there are worse rewrites. Fuck, there's even people talking on some mythical creature called "a good rewrite", only no one's ever seen its footprints.

But for me ALL OF THEM have something in common... See attached pic.
>> romanji
People keep mentioning the Kousoku tankoban. Could some please post a link to it?

>>1138466
I don't like any rewrite, especially when it's designed to push an agenda. But you're right, it probably wouldn't have bothered me as much if it was misogynist rather than misandrist.

But an accurate translation is more important (for me anyway) than whatever the underlying message of the hmanga is. So if it was actually some misandrist plot by the original author, I'd rather that than a rewrite that tries to make it something else. But again, given the previous "translation" by Black-Heaven, I'm heavily suspecting this is largely a rewrite.
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>>1138749
Oh, a good rewrite does exist.