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Anonymous
how's she look so far?
>> Anonymous
Melikes, although the elbow seems to have disappeared and her neck may be broken.
The head should be forward a little more I think.
>> Anonymous
fantastic
>> Anonymous
bigger tits!
>> Anonymous
>>435638

maybe it's the shoulder's fault the head's off?
i did leave it pretty low
>> Anonymous
needs balls
>> Anonymous
>>435647
Agreed. How else will she knock-up her girlfriends?
>> Anonymous
>>435646
I'm not sure. To me it just looks like her head and (stage)left shoulder need to be more to the right
>> Anonymous
Very nice.

And ignore the people wanting balls. A ball-less futa is fine too(I prefer it!)
>> Anonymous
I like it, do you have a website or forum you post your work on (something more permanent than 4chan)
>> Anonymous
>>435635
Good enough to take up the ass.
>> Anonymous
Another vote for no balls.
>> Anonymous
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>>435764

i've got nothing adult up
drawing /d/ is rare for me
>> Anonymous
o_O Agrias?

Wow, I never expected to find /d/ of her. Altima, sure, but Agrias....
>> Ehhh..... !N2Rn3IpqO2
>>435801
You should spend some time browsing this site: http://www.interq.or.jp/ford/murasaki/yasabata/urabata-main.htm

OP: I like it, good work. As other people have said, the arms could use a little work, but otherwise it's well done.
>> Anonymous
I like everything except perhaps above her left eye she's looking a little bald~
>> Anonymous
zomg, agrias? is there a non futa of this?
>> Anonymous
>>436281
I vote for two futa versions and a non-futa version. The two futa versions should be balls and no-balls. Non-futa should be Agrias in panties.
>> Anonymous
keep going!
>> Anonymous
>>435635
with binoculars 8D
>> Anonymous
needs more cum
>> Mr. Synister
>>435635

Kicks ass. Needs color.
>> Anonymous
The neck is still a bit too small. I actually think fixing that (actually seeing the neck's line linking to her body next to her left shoulder) woul fix any anatomic or perspective issues with the head. Also agree with those saying she's a little bold over her left eye. The lineart version had wonderful hand anatomy, let me compliment it.
I also prefer fute with no balls, and the breasts are fine- I do enjoy non-massive airbags once in a while. I like it a lot overall. The braid with the bow is well drawn as well- cute touch.
Keep it up, this anon fully supports you.
>> Anonymous
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>>435801
What?
>> Anonymous
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the hair is just kinda similar to how the original artist did

i'll scoot the head and end up with multiples