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beinbeisser
we just NEED more of this set!!
>> Anonymous
Thats so hot. We need more grown dickgirls with loli.
>> Anonymous
google purple bonus and browse there for all of the pics from this set. there's not all that much, which irks me since it's so hawt. I wonder if the artist (what's his name?) would ever consider doing an h-doujin.
>> Temprus !Zim0DJ9qJ2
Y'know I've been wondering about this pic for a long while (since I've had it for a long while). If Tuxedo Mask were to throw a rose at her dick, would it shatter into puzzle pieces?
>> beinbeisser
>>180366
yes, of course
>> beinbeisser
i cant fint the pic, where this mostergirl is fucking Rei.
>> Anonymous
a fanfic was written based on the whole nekonneru transforming rei by fucking her. i wish i had that fanfic, it's actually fucking hot.
>> Anonymous
>>180759

http://www.smartgroups.com/groups/transitions

Look there
>> Anonymous
>>180759

if you like guro, killing, and a insane mary sue SI. then it might be hot. Other then that. ick.
>> Anonymous
>>180860

Don't start that again, just 'cause he booted your ass from the group. For the record, TSI has only ever banned one person from his group, and that was a serious heckler who was trying to tell him what to do under the guise of "Helping" him with the fic.
>> Anonymous
>>180895
eh? come again?

No really thats what the fics like i remember it from the yahoo group.
Good for some hot catgirl sex in the first chapter then it goes down hill so fast its scary.

You must have me confused for some one else, why would i give a shit and try to help this wack job improve?
>> True Sailor Io
>>180931

I write the story how I want, for those too lazy or impatient to see the bigger picture of the story, that's too bad. And there is a bigger picture to the story as a whole, the two people I've told it to understand it. But in the fanfic biz, patience and common sense among many of the readers is rare. Anyway, why don't you just let the people read it for themselve and come to their own judgements before forcing yours on them?
>> Anonymous
>>180935
Oh? and how is telling them whats in it forcing any thing on them?

Most fan fiction places have warnings that get posted with em. Kinda like Guro,SI,Rape

Comes in handy to filter out the junk.

And bigger picture? Whats that? I must have missed it as your SI rapes his way from world to world killing all the males and leaving slave girls behind. Oh, lets not forget all the "children" Who are all so rapeing and killing there way down the road of life.

You can find saner shit in /b/
>> Anonymous
That wasn't me, you know. It is possible more than one person can find your product lacking.

Oh by the way, saying that you need to define a protagonist and antagonist is not "serious heckling". It's a goddamned fact, Jack.
>> Anonymous
TSI, you wrote better stories when you didn't fag everything up with a bunch of bullshit plot and boring fucking story. I'm not saying that you wrote good stuff when you didn't write much of a plot, but you still made something that was a little more entertaining than the eight part furry cluster fucks you try to pass off as decent writing these days.
>> Anonymous
>>180895
>>180935
I actually hate to say it but I am with anonymous on this one. I thought he was an ass but then I read the full conversation..yall provoked it for no reason and..ya there's not really a bigger picture in a rape fest..you can have all the symbolism you want...but in the end it's still a story about furry and rape.
>> Anonymous
Let me finish that last post for you: and a story about furry and rape is off to a good start with or without a plot.

Seriously, i wouldn't be turning to ero fanfics for engaging stories if i were you lot. Try some established fantasy authors. If you're looking for a hot read about rape, then this might be the perfect thing.

There's nothing "wrong" with a story about furry and rape, except that the former isn't allowed here. Post 181169 almost sounds like he disapproves of such things.
>> Anonymous
>>180860
>>180895
>>180931
>>180935
>>180940
>>181122
>>181164

SAME PERSON
>> Anonymous
No, it really is a very irritating story. Pointlessly killing every single male character in every genre you touch so you can turn all the girls into futa? It gets old after the first 10,000 words describing the EXACT SAME THING.
>> Anonymous
>>181212

I'm with Anonymous. There were only so many chapters of the "SI comes to planet, rapes girls, graphically slaughters men, then moves on to next world" formula that I can stand. Ignoring the fact that I think rape is one of the most sick and twisted things imaginable, and that masturbating at the thought of women having their minds cave in is pretty disturbing, the plot sucks and detracts from what the story is.

I'd hate to see the kind of people that enjoy it for the plot.
>> All of you TSI Fan
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>>180940
>>180931
>>180860
>>181122
>>181164
>>181169
>>181178
>>181212
>>181231
Though I honestly suspest most of these post were done by the same guy, they're all 'anonymous'
>> Anonymous
Oh hey, the "anyone who disgrees with me is a Nazi" card, PLUS the "only one person disagrees with me and justs posts a bunch of times as different people" card! Merry Christmas, you're a faggot! Look under the tree to recieve your present!

(your present is AIDS)

(protagonist. antagonist. not that hard. if you are going to have things in between the sex scenes, if you are going to act like it's serious shit, you should at least put forth some goddamned effort.)
>> Anonymous
Duh! There's a TON of protagonists but they all die almost instantly to the shamelessly self-inserted antagonist... or is the insertion the protagonist and he's just a murderous 2 dimensional asshole?
>> Anonymous
>>181212

To be fair TSI DOES find new ways to evicerate super-powerful characters gruesomely and with mind-blowing ease. I wouldn't be surprised to see him easily take down an Evangelion unit or Goku with a single attack.
>> Anonymous
how about TSI just accepts me into the group so i can fap? thanks
>> TSI Fan
>>181257
Thanks for the support whoever that was. To the rest of you, what I'm seeing here is pretty much an old argument Chaosbringer and I call the "Save the Men" campaign. Couple with those truely impatient people who can only see what's right in front of their faces and have no eye for sublty or undertones unless they are blatantly pointed out for them. Right now I really just pitty all of you. You don't like my story, fine, everyone has critics. What I really don't like is the way you seem to believe that the only way is your way and no other. When someone asks about the story that was done to go along with that picture at the top of this discussion, you could be nice and say, "I didn't like it." It is quick, simple, and above all, polite. Instead, you go into a tirade of posts saying that who ever asked shouldn't read it. By doing that, you're doing the same thing as the art nazi picture, just retroactively. Here's the compressed version of this nay sayer arguement, "Don't read it, you could possibly like it and then I would be wrong because everyone doesn't think like me." Now I'm sure you'll have some long winded way of reacting to this post in yet another attempt to break me down, well, I hope it makes you feel better because from where I'm sitting, you all must feel really bad that some people just like dark stories without the bubblegum ending where Good Triumphs over Evil and everyone lives happily ever after. Stories where the Protagonist and Antagonist are not so clearly cut for all to see right at the very beginning, and where every detail is accounted for right at the instant you read it. Have a happy life, though I reccomend you stay away from Mystery novels/movies, they might irritate you more than my little series.
>> TSI Fan
>>181278


Oh and for the reccord, not all my stories are like the Transitions series, some have the more boring aspects you like. And if anyone can find my old stories written under my old Lord Falcon handle, you might like them even more, though even in my oppinion, the writting was poor, I was still working on my writing style then.

(Minor note, I'm IMing with TSI now and this is what he's telling me to put up for him.)
>> Anonymous
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

ATOR much?

ps: that's a bunch of horseshit, other people don't like the story not because "oh no it is not a happy bubblegum ending", but because it's REPETITIVE AS FUCK. And when I say "you need a protagonist and antagonist" I don't mean good guy and bad guy, I mean protagonist and antagonist. A central character who is attempting to accomplish a goal and a character, event or phenomenon that hinders the protagonist from accomplishing his goal. You don't have an antagonist because nobody hinders the protagonist in any meaningful way, and never does so for more than a chapter. And maybe you might want to turn down the persecution complex a little bit there, Ace.

Then again, if you have to be inventing people to take your side, perhaps you might want to look into why everyone seems to be arrayed against you.
>> True Sailor Io
>>181265

Okay, I'm here now. Got no plans to touch Dragon Ball in the series to respond to that. As for Evangelion, still undecided about if we'll even see the Eva's fight. Got a nice several page long fight plotted out for Tifa in Midgar Transitions before she's taken down, and Cloud puts up a decent fight as well. Barret never really got a chance to fight before he's taken out. As the series enters some of the more powerful anime's and games, the fight will become progressively longer and harder. From what's been published, the heroes taken out weren't really all that powerful to begin with.

>>181275
To this guy, what was your email and how long ago did you apply for entry? Smartgroups can be slow to get the entry requests to me sometimes.
>> Anonymous
>>181282

my request message has <3s in it!
>> True Sailor Io
>>181281

How about turning down whatever complex keeps you posting in this thread. I'll grant the repetative angle to you, hard to keep coming up with totally original sequences for the hentai scenes. But what I don't understand is your need to have everyone see things your way. Anyway, I'm done with this thread for one night, please, feel free to rant and rave until you get it out of your system. I'm heading over to /e/ to see if there's anything good there tonight.
>> True Sailor Io
>>181286

I think I remember that one, I approved it, check the group and see if it lets you in, the link is somewhere way up in the beginning of this "debate"
>> Anonymous
>>181291

there's one from a gmail account too besides that yyhmail one

did you greenlight both
>> True Sailor Io
>>181296

I'm fairly sure I did. I greenlight most requests for entry right off the bat, save those who totally misinterpit the meaning of the group. I get a few transvestites looking for info on how to better alter their gender. Them I email and tell them this isn't the group for you.
>> Anonymous
Hey, if your writing style is so amazing why don't you explain some of these subtle undertones to us? You obviously haven't done a staisfactory job showing them in the story to most of us, if you have something to say that is more complex than "Shit, furry dickgirl guro rape!" please, by all means point it out to us. I've read all of transitions and I can't explain what the theme of the story is, except for maybe "shitty fanfic writers are bad at writing so they try to make their stories more complex and deep by killing characters off left and right."

TSI was a fanfic writer that was semi-comptetant when it comes to beat-off material. Expecting someone who's just so-so at something as simple as writing erotic fiction to be good at fleshing out characters, establishing interesting plotlines or even making us care about things in the story is just downright stupid. TSI has fallen prey to the worst folly of fanfics, your characters are already defined by the series creators, you can't really go and change their complete outlook on life. All you can hope to do is add a gimmicky twist on some facet of the character to appease your base emotions. If you wanted to be creative in writing you wouldn't be writing fanfics. Please stop treating your sub-par beat off material as if it's anything but poorly written fan-wank. It's not, and you're certainly not fooling anyone by dressing it up in a bunch of "serious" shit.

I await your reply with at least 2(two) concrete examples of well thought out, well written passages with subtlety and undertones and all that other shit you profess your stories to have.