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Amano Ameno - Toraware no Swan Pink TJChaos
I present my own translation of Toraware no Swan Pink (Swan Pink's Capture) by Amano Ameno, which is the sequel to Animal Five.

Enjoy.

http://rapidshare.com/files/123861410/_Amano_Ameno__Swan_Pink_s_Capture.rar.html
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>> Anonymous
WIN!
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All done.
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>>952225

Thanks. I actually just did the translation in my spare time, but I decided not to be stingy and put the text in the bubbles so that 4chan could enjoy.
>> deleted
YOU SIR, are made of WIN
>> Anonymous
wasnt this allready translated?
>> Anonymous
>>952248
yes, but re-doing existing translations poorly using mspaint automatically gives you +5 to your weeaboo staff of e-penis
>> Anonymous
...I love you, OP. Just so you know.
>> Anonymous
>>952203
Not bad for a JSL translator, but you've still got room for improvement. You've got enough grasp on the grammar, it looks like, to do some good damage; but here or there you get tripped up and make incorrect guesses about what's being said. Like on>>952208, where what she's really saying might have been liberally translated (while sticking true to the original meaning) as "I promise -- I'll come back to rescue you guys too! Just hang on a little longer, okay?" or hyper-literally as "Because I'll surely rescue everyone too, wait 'kay?" She doesn't say anything about "we" or holding off.)

Then there's the fact that you clearly consulted a dictionary for a lot of the uncommon kanji for JSL students (like shogun, which you literally translated as General, or "demon beast castle" where "fortress" might have been a better choice for ?, i.e. the enemy fortress)

Only pointing these things out to give you some specific references for where you still need to improve; otherwise, accuracy prevailed over mistranslation in the pages I read (first 5, last page) and that means you did the community a far greater favor than the shameless rewriter has to offer.
>> Anonymous
This is pure concentrated win.
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>>952657

Thanks for the feedback. I used Pig General and Devil Beast Castle to keep it consistent with the translation of Animal Five. I honestly don't intend to make translating a habit; I just did it for a little fun. As you no doubt guessed, any mistakes or discrepancies were because I was using a dictionary as an alternative to actually knowing Japanese.
>> Anonymous
My only advice: DO NOT USE COMIC SANS, WOMAN

And I know you're not a woman but Comic Sans instantly rings "webcomic" and "shitty rewrite"
>> Anonymous
So the moral of the story is.... Oh well we lost another one.
>> aaronmv2k6
>>953696
So what font would you reccomend? I'm doing a rewrite myself, and I WAS using Comic Sans.
>> Anonymous
>>953765
Not the one you're talking to, but I like to use Anime Ace for my comics. It all depends on the person though, so have a site that has plenty of nice comic-fonts for free:
http://www.blambot.com/fonts.shtml
>> aaronmv2k6
Thanks. That Anime Ace looks nice: Has style but still readable. Couple of the others look nice, but paying? For fonts?
HAHA... no.
>> Anonymous
>>953838
A good chunk of them are free. the ones with the red dots next to them are the ones you have to pay for. You can still get a chunk of nice fonts from there without paying a thing.
>> Anonymous
Bump for win
>> Ehhh.....
>>953838
Just don't use Digital Strip. Outside of default fonts such as Comic Sans, it's the ugliest comic font I've seen. Easily.
>> th
If someone could put it up on some other filehost i'd be gratefull.
>> Anonymous
moar stories like this
>> Anonymous
I didn't get off on it but the story was kind of interesting, haha. Good translation.
>> Anonymous
I'm suprised that there are no shitting pictures here, that is what Ameno Amano usually does.
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>>955582
Come again? I just thumbed through 7 of his stories (ranging from Megastore H 2002 09 to Megastore H 2007 12 in terms of date published), and there wasn't a single scat scene.

I don't doubt that he's done one or two which have had scat in them (as he falls on the Darker side of the Light/Dark spectrum), but a lot of artists have dabbled in fringe fetishes once or twice never to look back. Like this story, for example! It's not like every one of his works features pigs fucking Power Rangers. The gap between the two Sentai stories? FIVE YEARS.
>> Anonymous
Wasn't the original Animal Five story that circulated on 4chan just a small segment of that full work? I remember seeing once or twice a good amount of material supposedly from that same publication that I didn't have in my personal copy. Anyone have a link to the full original?
>> Anonymous
>>955789
"That full work"? I don't think so. I've got every single issue of Comic Megastore H and that story ("Animal Five") comes from the 2002 11 issue. It's possible Amano Ameno published a separate work that had tons of stories featuring his sentais, but if he did he didn't submit any of them for publication to Megastore H.

Masked request is poorly masked?
>> Anonymous
>>955796

It wasn't really masked so much as I don't necessarily know what I'm talking about. Maybe it was just the work presented in this thread being misrepresented to us in its untranslated state, I don't really remember. Doesn't really matter.
>> Anonymous
>>952203
Where can I get Animal Five?
>> Anonymous
>>955877
Only those smart enough to come up with basic search strings like "amano ameno animal five" and observant enough to recognize /rs/ exists are eligible. Please try again.
>> Ragnaros the Firelord
>>955882
Oh u
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Uhhh... no one's heard of H? And yes, Amano does love scat and prego, which is fine with me.

I personally enjoyed Animal Five better than this sequel. She gives in too easily here. Doesn't put up much of a fight.