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Alumrof
Ban me faggots. MOOT IS A RETARDED PIECE OF SHIT! YOU PEOPLE ARE FUCKING TWELVE YEAR OLD DIPSHITS WHO THINK IT'S COOL TO FOLLOW THE FAILCHAN THAT IS MOOT. FUCKING CAPS LOCK. YOU STUPID NIGGERS AND YOUR FAGOT LEADER SHOULD BE BEATEN WITH THE SHIT YOU ARE. MOOT, YOU'RE NOT WORTH THE DOG BALLS YOU'RE MADE OUT OF. NIGGERNIGGERNIGGERNIGGERNIGGERNIGGERNIGGER
FUCKING BAN PLX.

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NIGGERSMOOTISAHUGEFUCKINGFAGOT
GO PLAY WITH YOUR FUCKING POWER RANGER DOLLS AND YOUR NEW FANGLED FUCKING INTERNET AND KEEP ACTING LIKE BREAKING THE CHANRULES IS COOL. DON'T TALK ABOUT IT FAGOTS. NIGGERS.

Homosexuals.

penis.Ban me faggots. MOOT IS A RETARDED PIECE OF SHIT! YOU PEOPLE ARE FUCKING TWELVE YEAR OLD DIPSHITS WHO THINK IT'S COOL TO FOLLOW THE FAILCHAN THAT IS MOOT. FUCKING CAPS LOCK. YOU STUPID NIGGERS AND YOUR FAGOT LEADER SHOULD BE BEATEN WITH THE SHIT YOU ARE. MOOT, YOU'RE NOT WORTH THE DOG BALLS YOU'RE MADE OUT OF. NIGGERNIGGERNIGGERNIGGERNIGGERNIGGERNIGGER
FUCKING BAN PLX.

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>> Anonymous
I understand what you're trying to say, but I think you could use some focus. You'll never be published if you can't direct the plot a little more. Try writing shorter stories for a while, until you are a little more comfortable with character development.
>> Anonymous
Wait...weren't you here like, an hour ago. Fuck you.
>> Anonymous
i think he should space out the plot more, ya know? everything is kind of all thrown in there. there is almost no suspense *shrug*
>> Anonymous
Plus the characters are completely one dimensional. No depth at all.
>> Anonymous
Let me rewrite your post in what I feel is a more meaningful manner.

Please ban me, 4chan mods. I have come to strongly dislike moot, and would appreciate the sense of closure that would accompany a ban. It is much easier to hate a person or group if he or they hate me in return.

I've come to believe that there is not a single 4chan user above the age of twelve. The evidence of this is plentiful: your infantile obsession with pushing against meaningless rules and your obsession with the Internet, which is clearly a passing fad.

I'm quite sick of this entire site, and am glad to divorce myself of it. Goodbye, you homosexual, dog-testicle-worshiping Negroes. I shall not miss you.
>> Anonymous
Same anon as 950052 and 950060.

Have you thought about giving this moot character a love interest? I realize that it's a little cliche, but it's a guaranteed seller! People understand corny, one-sided romances, but they have trouble with the complex, deep hatreds that you're writing about.

I think you should definitely start smaller. Let the public know your name, and get comfortable with you. Then you can release you epic of life-consuming hatred and revenge.
>> Anonymous
>>950060

*clap clap clap*
>> Anonymous
sauce of that pic, OP?

,':-D
>> Anonymous
omg, someone needs to rule 34 op's pic
>> Anonymous
It's true. /b/ really is the filter of the cup of coffee that is 4chan.

Now the rest of the boards are going to catch the cancer.
>> Anonymous
people who come from /B/ should be chemically castrated so the gene pool prospers, providing any users actually have sex