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the first futa work i've done bubomb
This is my first crack at drawing a futa character. More to come I'm sure. It was a fun concept :)

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/profile-SoftSoup.php
>> Anonymous
>>542633More to come I'm sure

Spare us, please.
>> Anonymous
Here,
"What's the matter? Never heard the term, "Ride `em cowgirl", before?

But that won't help your sloppy lineart, oval nipples, giant browline, masculine chin, incredibly long upper arms, or strangely shaped shaft. It WILL help people from making fun of your grammar and spelling though.
>> Anonymous
DO NOT WANT!
>> Anonymous
There are problems to be sure, but I have seen far, far worse. There are even some things in here that are going well, too. The usual advice is - no, not GTFO or kill yourself or do a barrel roll - keep drawing, keep practicing.
>> Anonymous
I encourage new artests.

Next time however, you might wanna post more than one example of your work.

And keep practicing. Perhaps take ideas from fellow /d/eviants.
>> Anonymous
>>543031
I like to encourage proper spelling. <Artists>
>> Anonymous
Looks like shit. Keep trying.
>> Anonymous
You have a long way to go. Just keep working at it and you may one day win our praise.
>> Anonymous
Remeber kids, Western and shitty art are not allowed.
>> Anonymous
>>543084
Agreed, though hopefully not implying that both are one and the same.
But really, if you want your art analyzed and torn to shreds, /ic/ is better for you.
>> Anonymous
>>543103

Unfortunately, most erotic western art is shit compared to the jap stuff. Not trying to be a weeaboo, but it's true.
>> Anonymous
Clean the lines up for sure, soften the jaw line, i wouldn't cal the shaft " Strangely shaped" It's common in futa to have the shaft slimmer at the tip then widen in the middle and slim back up at the pelvis *this is a nice touch :P * the arms are a little oddly shaped, the upper arm in this case is too long.

all in all, for your first try, this is passable. Keep it up and you may be able to post something here that wont get you flamed.