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Artemis
Dear /d/, I drew you a picture. Is it worthy?
>> Anonymous
nope
>> Anonymous
Hey wait...This isn't /b/! How did I end up here?!
/d/. /b/. Eh. I'm still fappin...
>> Anonymous
>>475449
You overdid it a bit with the skin detail shading. Also, some people might find the design of the come a bit unappetizing (figuratively).
>> Anonymous
>>475482
yeah, she's cumming a metric FUCKTON like thats possible pfft!
>> Artemis
>>475482

The skin's over done, huh? Hm, Well, to make future corrrections, tell me, what do you not like about the skin. Too realistic?
>> dmitrys
try be more economic with line and sahding , cirently it looks a bit "muddy" needs more claraty and edge defenition.
>> Anonymous
>>475482
Well, it's not bad. You have a good grasp of skeletal structure and musculature, as well as shading. I'm just not sure all of it would be seen at once in a healthy person, that is to say too good a grasp on shading.

If anything, the only thing about the coloring is to fill it out rather than leave it to appear as splotches amid the rest of the skin tone. The skin detail on the side of the breasts looks out of place.

Check your arm length.
>> Artemis
>>475489

Ah, Dmitrys, sort of an inspiration, that you are. I'm honored to get any sort of criticism from you. I'll do what I can.

>>475498
Alright, I'll see what I can do to fix it up. But explain the healthy part again, I'm not quite sure I'm getting the picture.
>> Anonymous
the face and the top of the boobs
>> Artemis
>>475505

The top of the boob is intentional, I realize it doesn't actually mold in that direction.

But the face, what about it?
>> Anonymous
Hmm.. i like it :) Its not bad.. good overall structure. Could be more cleaner with lines n shading tho :) Keep it up!
>> Artemis
>>475511

Thanks. I'll work on the shading, this is my first picture ever drawn on any program outside of MS paint. So, I'm new to all of it.
>> Anonymous
Wow constructive critique in 4cha. THE END IS NIGH :) btw I like it too but try and tone down on lines :) Less is more :)
>> Anonymous
>>475529

When you have future fap material, you have incentive to give good crits
>> Artemis
When I posted this, I noticed the hair was kinda funky, so I fixed that tweaked a few other places. But what I'd like to know, is where exactly should I be focusing on to make it better over all. For some reason, i can't see it. Perhaps I've been staring at it too long? Don't know.
>> Artemis
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Lol, oops wrong picture, that was in the very early stages of this picture. I meant to post this.
>> Anonymous
The lower back is shaded in well, but as you progress upward the black outline is to thick and blotchy. Try using a thinner, more fine pen/marker.
>> Anonymous
>>475686

alright, thanks. I'll try that.