File :-(, x, )
Anonymous
This is my second release as a rewriter. I think I did a better job than my first one. It's here because there is crossdressing.

Just to clarify,
The black haired boy is Lutfi. his name means "kind and gentle"
The blonde boy is Shumayl, and he's christian. His name means "complete"
The mom is Husniyah, which means "the most beautiful"
The dad is Samman, which means "grocer" guess what his job is.
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
Oh yeah, they live in Turkey
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
>> Anonymous
     File :-(, x)
That's it. I named the folder "human after all" but I don't know the real name.
>> Anonymous
And don't be shy with the critiques, constructive criticism is the best way to learn.
>> Anonymous
Just so you know, shota isn't allowed on /d/.
>> Anonymous
>>236699
You can't be serious...Turkey? Eithr I missed something REALLY big or you are the oddest rewriter on the planet.

Fucking TURKEY?!
>> Anonymous
>>236742
I didn't really want to set it in Japan, because that really restricts what I can do with the story. I figured with Turkey, I could do more with the different characters.

Plus, I know much more about islamic culture than Japanese.
>> Anonymous
This was the most superior thing I have seen on /d/ in a long long time! Blasphemy, incest and pedo! Keep up the good work!
>> Anonymous
>>236747

I wasn't trying to be blasphemous...
>> ?????
FUCKIING REWRITERS. LEARN JAPANESE AND TRANSLATE PROPERLY OR GTFO
>> Anonymous
posting in a thread
>> Anonymous
How the fuck people have Chinese names if the whole thing is clearly in japanese?
>> Anonymous
>>236763
Because they're Turkish, duh.
>> Anonymous
>>236750

Way to be a fucking hypocrit, faggot.
>> Anonymous
>>236763

The names aren't chinese.
>> Anonymous
lame
>> Anonymous
Rewriting the story of a douji? WTF that's pathetic!
>> jo
What I'm curious about... is what gives people the urge to rewrite at all? I don't mind people re-writing so long as I've already read or have access to the original... but it's a mystery to me as to why re-editing a comic is fun. Can someone elighten me?
>> Anonymous
>>236812
The same urge to 'mark' walls with spray paint and to scratch the paint on a new car. People are no damn good.
>> Anonymous
>>236812

The people who rewrite comics are the same people who write textfiles, make mods for games, and produce fansites. They feel like supporting the community with (semi)original content. At least they are doing something.
>> Anonymous
>>236858

*stops fapping long enough to visit /d/ and leech or demand torrents*

Hey was that a crack at me?
>> Anonymous
so uh...when did turkish weaboos come into existence?
>> Anonymous
>>236892
Turkland is a very western civilization, thank you vry much!
>> Anonymous
>>236901
I dont think thats what he was trying to get across
>> Anonymous
...I... don't... get it...

Why... Turkey...?

Need... rapidshare...
>> Anonymous
HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD HOLY FUCKING SHIT STEVE IRWIN IS DEAD
>> Anonymous
>>236683

OH, SNAP, SON.
>> Anonymous
As one anonymous, I have to say:
1.) I love straight shota.
2.) I appreciate the effort of the OP to try and regionalize it.
3.) appreciate how the re-write didn't contain "OH I'M FUCKING MY MOTHER" "OH I'M FUCKING MY SON" in every speach bubble. I see too much of that crap in translated stories.

thank you!
>> Gitami
>>236812
I second this person's request for the original.
>> Anonymous
thank you
>> Anonymous
>>236671
rewrites are fucking gay, like i really want some 12 yr olds take on a h-manga to fap to
>> Anonymous
>>237087

It's always about you, you, you.

http://rapidshare.de/files/31898356/Human_After_All.rar.html
>> Anonymous
God, can someone stop those rewriters.
Draw your own comic or translate - but don't ruin a existing manga.
>> Anonymous
>>237166

Now come on guys, lets not be so hard on rewriters.
I mean, I don't know about YOU guys, but nothing makes me regret ever wasting my highs school years actually LEARNING the fucking language than to have someone get all that moonspeak out of the way and put in some GOOD dialogue.
In short "YES SIS I'M FUCKING YOUR INCEST PUSSY WITH MY INCEST COCK! I'M HAVING INCEST WITH MY INCEST SISTER! FUCK YOU ARE MY SISTER! I LOVE INCEST fucking! etc etc etc."
>> Anonymous
>>237179
signed.
>> Anonymous
Can someone please upload the original version
>> Anonymous
>>236858
Fucking up someone else's story counts as "doing something?" Hey, if I sneak into the Shonen Jump offices and take a shit on some original One Piece artwork does that count as "doing something," too?
>> Anonymous
>>but don't ruin a existing manga.

As we all know, the subject in question is overflowing with integrity, and any liberties taken on that part of the translator mar this creation terribly so.

lol
>> Anonymous
this is fucking WIN
>> Anonymous
>>237245

Yes, since you'd be making an improvement.
>> Anonymous
>>237245
One Piece is the shit of Fantastic Four.
>> Anonymous
This was deeply entertaining, hahahaha.

What a truely bizarre choice of setting. Why does she "slip" back to her native tongue of Arabic when she's Turkish? And why does she beg Jesus for satisfaction if she is using arabic slurs against the Christian kid? Is she secretly a dirty goyam too?! :o
>> Anonymous
>>237302
Jesus was A prophet in Islam, just not the Messiah.

and goyim is a yiddish term that's derogatory against non-jews. So...yes, technically she is a 'goyim'. It'd be like calling a black kid colored.
>> Anonymous
The effort is appreciated, but rewriting the script is not the way to go. Learn to translate, don't just make shit up.
>> Anonymous
>>237051
Crikey!
>> Anonymous
shota does not go in /d/
also rewrites suck