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Thank you, please keep it up, etc.
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I KEEP REFRESHING BUT ITS NOT GETTING POSTED FAST ENOUGH. FUCK MOAR PLZ!
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i used 56k
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last one if anyone got moar post them thank you
>> Manxmouse
... is it wrong that I only really read these things for the hilarious dialouge?
>> Anonymous
It creeped me out the mom never opens her eyes.

But my waffle was roffled by the amusing dialogue.
>> Anonymous
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>> Anonymous
>>189611
>It creeped me out the mom never opens her eyes.

oh jesus
now i can't fucking read this manga anymore :(
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Glad to help
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This should be it ^_^
>> Anonymous
I'll never understand why characters in incest scenes have to keep repeating "Mom!" "Son!" "Sister!" "Daughter!" etc. I mean, does the author expect me to forget who's doing the fucking every other panel?
>> Anonymous
>>189904
They have to put something in those little word boxes. Try to rewrite a hentai manga, the sex scenes are the hardest part. So many bubbles, and what the hell do people say during sex? Not much, I can tell you that.
>> Anonymous
>>189907
Agreed, but surely it could be something better than "Yes! Fill your paternal aunt's pussy with your nephew's twice-removed cousin's former roommate's sperm!"

...

Aw, dammit.

*Fap* *fap* *fap*
>> Anonymous
rapidshare or torrent of this please! also, source please?
>> Anonymous
age
>> Anonymous
>>189907
not only that, but most of the time the action in the image is left pictured from right to left, as in the original japanese, so that makes things even harder since sometimes it just doesnt look right flipped.
>> Anonymous
>>189907
...okay, so first, read a translated manga. Then, read this shit.

Translation:
"You wanted me to suck you outside, didn't you?" (dribble)
"Ah... but... that was some time ago and completely different!!"
"What's different is, with AV, fellation is 'seen'... but here, fellatio is 'given to' and 'felt by' the man I love."

See, this is GOOD hentai dialogue. They're just explaining what's going on, but they're doing so in a hot way that's not repetitive and not retarded. Seeing "FUCK ME! YES, FUCK ME! I LOVE IT, FUCK ME!" in every speech bubble gets boring.

Oh yeah, and...
"GUESS WHO KNOWS YOU'RE FUCKING YOUR SISTER? IT'S MOMMY!"
AUUUUGH KILL ME NOW!
>> Hyper Man
Holy crap Rapidshare PLZ!!!
>> SMAP
>>190196
Hate to tell you, but most people will find your "good" translation boring as shit. It's a rare H doujin/manga that has anything close to a plot worth caring about, so translating for exact perfect accuracy is not really a nescessity.

Which is not to say that your example #2 is a stellar translation job either, but remember that the original Japanese may have been somewhat repetitive to start with. (The Japanese language, at least in my experience, is more tolerant of repeating than English is.)
>> Incest Anonymous
post incest whit a nice and realistic story
>> Cheater
>>190306
I have to agree with the other guy - the "FUCK ME" x10000 thing gets old in a hurry
>> Anonymous
well, this is a rewrite done for an incest forum, so what do you expect?

in the original, the guy and the girls aren't even related
>> Anonymous
why not re write it your self then
>> Anonymous
Rapidshare PLZ
>> Anonymous
>>190510
here's the full doujin untranslated:
http://rapidshare.de/files/23257738/shota.zip.html