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New Tonari no Sperm-san rewrite Moonraider
Here are the first five pages of my English rewrite of Episode 1 of Kamirenjaku Sanpei's futa/incest comedy, "Tonari no Seiki(superuma-san"
More to come later in the week.
Pg. 7
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Pg 8
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pg. 9
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Pg. 10
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pg. 11
That's it for now.
>> Anonymous
So are you actually translating this as best you can, or just making the whole thing up?
>> Anonymous
try /b/ for random stupid rewrites
>> Moonraider
I translate as much as i can do, but I can't read most kanji, so there are lots of gaps where I have to guess or just make up something that seems to fit. Keep in mind that even pro manga translations often take a lot of liberties in order to make the story sound natural in English.
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I guess what we want to know is how much you have to fill in.
>> Anonymous
No.496078

try /fu/ for complaints
>> Moonraider
Looking back over pages 8-11, I would say that about 50% the dialog balloons are correctly translated, (although they may have been intentionally revised to sound more natural). 25% are based on guesses based on a few isolated words, and the last 25% is flat-out made up, but is still written to fit in with the rest.
>> Keitaro-kun
Oi Moonraider~

If you could go to http://hpirates.hyperboards.com and keep us updated on when a page comes out, I would give you all the futa I own


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