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Kitsune
Zetsubou shitaaa !!!

Nozomu Itoshiki sensei, anyone?
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>>731612
THAT'S NOT NOZOMU. It's his brother lol
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ZETSUBOU SHITA!
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Also makes a surprisingly nice wallpaper.
>> Kitsune
Bump ! sensei no tameni!
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>>732770
You can take your fangirl japanese back to gaia, namefag.
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>>732771
sorry.. just want to share love for itoshiki
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>>732771
Oh stop whining. More pictures and less bitching please.
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>>733029
No, namefag.
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>>733047
Oh yeah, I use a name, BURN. 4chan makes me laugh sometimes lol
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>>732770
KAWAII DESU XDXD ROFL I hav 2 go tell all my fwends @ gaia ^_____^v they'll <3 this place! Everyone is so nice desu!!!!!!! ROFL <3333 XDDDD But it needs moar naruto!! They all act mean but they are really nice people! XD LMAO
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>>733086
Despair, I'm in ITT.
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male!Abiru/Nozomu ftw
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>>male!Abiru
All I'm going to ask is there more of him?

Suddenly, generdswapped Zetsubou girls greatly intrigues me.
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i know, rite?
i'm desperate trying to find male!Kiri now.
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>>733131
I think that may actually be a character. I've seen him on multiple fansites. Not completely sure yet though lol
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>>733080
I like to think I'm immune to it, but god, so moe for Itoshiki.
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Can't read japanese at all so i have no idea what the hell it said on the site but i'm pretty sure that's Abiru with male parts.

I think you're talking about Jun. He's everywhere. The only male students i've seen so far besides him are Kino, Usui and the dude with glasses.
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>>733568
Aoyama?
>> Anonymous
Yeah. And there's Haga too.

Still though, none of them look like that guy.
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>>733568
No I'm definitely not talking about Jun, because I'm a huge Jun fan lawl Maybe it is a male Abiru... Perhaps there's a chapter in the manga where the females switch genders or something.
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>>733568
what site? maybe i can read some
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>>734009
Just came across it: http://botulog.blog76.fc2.com/
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is the manga scanlated and online somewhere?
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Repost bump.
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Okay, I searched the site and it's definitely Male!Abiru. There's even a small doujin comic about it.

Here some Male!Komori and Itoshiki-sensei.
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>>735018
Woah, male!Kiri's totally hot.
I've seen the comics but i cna't understand a thing, sadly. Do you have any idea what they are about??
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Basically it's about Abiru turning into a dude and Nozomu is starting to freak the fuck out. Abiru "checks" out that he's a boy now. And Nozomu freaks out some more and gets pissed why Abiru-kun is so calm about the situation. Abiru-kun tells Nozomu that he finds himself in a lucky situation. Nozomu asks why. And Abiru-kun says that he can rape Nozomu in his new form. Then, predictably Nozomu screams for help and Abiru said that he was only joking. Nozomu tells him that's not something to joke about.

And it ends with Abiru-kun saying that he's "bigger" than Nozomu and Nozomu tells Abiru-kun not to say stuff like that so naturally.

That's the gist of it.
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Ho man. Where is it?
BUMP!
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>>735145
Oh man, there should be moar. And not just Abiru but everyfreakingone of the girls. Though the thought of male!Kafuka kinda scares me.Oh, and male!Harumi should totally be into yaoi too. That'd be hot.

Someone write a fanfic about this, damnit!
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>>735230
lol, male Kafuka would be interesting. I'm inspired for a fanart now...
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anyone knows where i can find the manga in raw? anything besides whats scanlated would be awesome
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Suddenly, Itsuki.
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>>735899
Not sure if want.....
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Mikoto <3
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>>735899
what is going on that was not supposed to happen
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>>738714
I do not recall this... What episode was it from?
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The detox one if i'm not mistaken.
that... thing there on the back is Maria's ass.
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Haha, ohhh yeah I remember now XD
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>>731726
Can I get some sauce on these please?
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>>739180
lol, I think this link is posted at least once a week. But those are from Kuraku: http://zotz.x0.com/krk/null.html
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>>739228
Thank you.
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I felt like writing something, so I did.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4123421/1/Eternity
Inspired by this .gif right here.
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>>739670
Read and reviewed, it was brilliant. Thanks for writing!
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>>739670
I won't tell you it was brilliant, but it was entertaining and I'm glad someone ficced that awesome gif. I can give concrit, if you're interested.
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>>739670
WOO, YES.
Now there's three or four Jun/Nozomu fictars up there.
It'll dominate that section, I tell you.
And probably on the strength of /cm/ alone, OH-HO-HO.
Anyway, I liked it. T'was pretty sweet, and I liked how you put 'object of obsession'. There's a desperate kind of loneliness I got from it, and I liked it. You should continue!
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>>740700
Concrit would be amazing. I'm looking for a way to improve it. As it stands, I view it as sub-par
>>740999
Haha, thanks. I plan on putting the second half up sometime later today. Don't know if I should continue after that though.
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>>739670
I liked it, but it reminded me of another Jun/Nozomu fic on there.
Some bits seemed pretty like it.
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I tried to be as original as possible? It's not like I have much to go on either seeing as theres only like three other JunxNozomu fics on there.
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Hey guys, we've got no right to let this thread die !
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Cause it's cute
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I just found some data about the male!Abiru, Kiri, Kafuka, etc. on this site : http://recorpse.xxxxxxxx.jp/zep0000-top.html
Sadly I don't know what it's talking about...
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>>742720
LOL @ stalker-tan.

Always underfoot at (176 cm in height)
First person "I".
Teacher of stalking. DIPURABU.
BUN transsexual stalking by increasing risk.
Perhaps today's teacher also knows underwear.

(google translate, stfu)
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Google translate is so much win when you just want to lol... or cry, depending on your mood.
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Out of curiosity, what are the other male students like? You know, the ones who haven't been introduced yet? Kuniya is Jun's rival, has bad fashion sense, and a crush on Ai Kaga, I got, but what his personality? And the other two? I feel pretty in the dark here, eugh.
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I awwww'd
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lol, I'm obsessed with Haga and Aoyama. As far as I know Aoyama is negative like Itoshiki Sensei but thinks the world is hopeless, and I think that Haga is a pervert. They actually showed up finally in episode 10 of season 2 but unfortunately it's going to take the subbers ages to get there.
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>>741202
Concrit:
It's either "get lost in another world" or "disappear into another world".

"Without abandon" - don't you mean "with abandon"?

"Yes, I could never hope for something more than a student-teacher relationship, right?" So is he sure ("yes") or unsure ("right?")? I think one word has to go.

"I see us sharing our own little house" - I'm not sure, but I think that wouldn't be the typical Japanese dream, what with the lack of space and all. And anyway, sounds kind of too domestic, low-scale for a teenage boy. I'd have expected something grander (and also weirder. Those fairy-tales of his led me to believe that he thinks like Orihime.)

"All I could think about was Sensei. Always in despair, it made my chest ache with an unfamiliar pain." Weird construction, use something like "His eternal despair made my chest..."
Besides, speaking as a fellow bookworm here, the pain would totally be familiar to Jun. Only an idiot wouldn't be able to recognize lovesickness after reading an entire library. Something like "a pain I've only ever read about before" or "never experienced before" is more believable.

"Abiru is insufferably cute with her various wounds and bandages because she loves to pull tiger tails." Does Jun even know that? Besides, bad sentence. "...Wounds and bandages that her tail-pulling habit always leaves her with" or something sounds more reasonable.
Anyway, Jun doesn't seem like the type to get jealous, so "insufferable" sounds too spiteful.

And generally, the tone felt way too emo to me - although it might be realistic to angst in high school, Jun strikes me as being a bit better than that.
Also, you should keep the time consistent, change back to the present when the internal monologue ends. Is there even a reason for having Jun's internal monologue in the present?

"I see so much when I close my eyes." was a pretty neat bit, though, and totally in-character, too.
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>>743920
Greatly appreciated. I guess it also doesn't help that Jun gets almost no screen time, so I don't know too much about him.

I just went back and read it, and oh wow, I definitely see your point of view. I probably shouldn't have posted it so soon after typing it up. Though I must admit, it's been an ass-long time since I've written fanfiction...
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Ahh, same with me! I haven't written anything in about a year and a half, then suddenly get this flash of inspiration, lol. Mainly from here, oh-ho-ho.
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Being ashamed together sounds awesome. At least I'm not alone in it!
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Well, I'm glad it was useful! I know how you feel. Posting things too soon after finishing them has left me in despair several times.