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Hey, OP here for this thread:>>623646(magical girl dump)

Thought you might like to check out a project in the works.
Yes, that's Fate on a Magic the Gathering card. I'm in charge of the magical girls portion of what is going to be an anime Magic set.
Check it out here: animemagicset.blogspot.com

Request more images to be uploaded here.
>> Anonymous
niggers
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First Magical Girl to reach anime
>> Hecate Anonymous
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From the anime Princess Knight, Hecate, daughter of Satan, the magical girl who turns against her father to aid the noble prince(ss).
>> Secret of Akko-chan Anonymous
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First magical girl in manga, and the first Magical Girl to make a habit of changing into animals, with Cat being a favored form.
>> Miracle Melmo Anonymous
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Her power was the ability to change her own age or the age of others using magical candy obtained from the Phoenix. After a few episodes, she learns to assume animal forms as well.
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LIttle Witch Chappy
The first magical girl to have a supportive family.
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>>624510
Chappy stops a hell-bound train by blood sacrifice.
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First Android Magical Girl, beating Cutey Honey to the airwaves by only 2 weeks.
I have no Cutey Honey (1973) images handy.
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>> Puppy Power Anonymous
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Lots of "first magical girl" I will probably have to include this one sometime.
>> Little Witch Chikuru Anonymous
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>> Minky Momo Anonymous
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=1AC48CAL
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Daughter of Apollo. Not really a Magical Girl until she adventures with the Argonaughts.
>> Anonymous
>>624526
I'll have to make some captures; for cardstock, WinDVD is most likely adequate, even though it makes sucky images.
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The first Magical Girl to be a traditional superhero.
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A Magical Girl who gets her power from opium.
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Magical Girl Artillery unit
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If there's no love, you're doing it wrong.
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Adolescence: becoming who you want to be, or becoming who you have to be?
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It says I've been flooding. Gosh. Y'know, it isn't that I wouldn't prefer to just post a link and let people get their own images off of the website:
http://magicalgirlacademy.nekomimicon.net/texts/MG.htm
but the post tends to get deleted when I do that.
>> Anonymous
good grief...I'll call for a team from /tg/ to fix the syntax...
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>> LIttle Witch Sally Anonymous
>>624526
Here's a bunch of captures from the first episode on DVD08 (of 19):
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=5UQ9ZTTC

Series 1, by the way; I don't have series 2, which was made many years later.
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Ink after her murder and conversion to the dark side.
Do you need Moetan images for this?
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Anyway, Moetan images:
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=HPP4JO91
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>>625297
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>>624526

holy crap, your wording could not be more inanely retarded. go back to yugioh.
>> Anonymous
>>625297
I really wish people would double check their MTG errata rules before creating cards... that and checking their own grammar.

>>In addition to Supression of Life's casting cost, tap one untapped creature under your control. You gain life equal to its toughness.
>> Anonymous
www.essentialmagic.com guru here, giving you some protips on your cards.

Fate:
- Cards are referred to with "it" by convention. Though I understand if you can't bear to call Fate an "it".
- You need a colon between the cost and the effect of the activated ability (last ability). so "{R/W}: Untap Fate..."

Sakura:
- The wording of the ability is archaic. It should read "{1}, {tap}: Remove target enchantment from the game. At the end of turn, return that enchantment to play under its owner's control." This is actually functionally a little different from what you had, but it's the closest approximation that still works in Magic rules.
- Is it too much to ask for the name "Card Captor Sakura" or "Sakura, Card Captor"? >:(

Pretty Cure:
- Just two minor issues. The word "power" shouldn't be capitalized and Magic uses "greater power" instead of "more power".

Supression of Life:
- As has been stated, the wording is a bit retarded. Though>>626456's wording basically replaces obsolete wording with a more recent obsolete wording. It should actually read "As an additional cost to play Supression of Life, tap an untapped creature you control. <line spaces> Gain life equal to the tapped creature's toughness."

General tip:
- Creature subtypes are always single words. So "Legendary Creature - Magical Girl" would actually make it a "magical" and a "girl". As gay as that sounds, it's how the rules of Magic works. For "magical girl" to be one creature type, it would need to be "magical-girl". Again, I understand if that sucks, cuz it really does. =/

It's always good to see fan-sets for Magic, especially decently or even half decently done ones. Keep up the good work.
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>>626456
>>626467
I appreciate your input on re-evaluating my Suppression of Life card. I would have rewritten it as - Tap one untapped creature under your control. You gain life equal to that tapped creature's toughness, but I denounced the - As an additional cost... part, etc.

Silly me. I happened to create that card in two quick minutes as some kind of a side joke. >_< Thanks again for your input. It's refreshing when MTG experts speak out for once.

Considering how 4chan won't allow rather lengthy posts... I won't bother getting into the greater details, so I'll get to the point.

To provide a deepened source of clarity for all players of various levels to understand, it was rather supposed to go like this from the beginning - "Gain 4 life." or "You gain 4 life." @_@ Maybe 5 if I was feeling that charitable. Or give one creature some sort of a lifelink; until end of turn ability. But I wanted to do something a little more creative and use a creature's toughness instead. Good times.

[Added one card I happened to have created ten minutes ago, just for the heck of it. Unfortunately, unlike the creator of this thread, I kind of gave up making cards like these a year ago. -_-'' I'm definitely back into RPGs like Mana Khemia now. ~_~ Can't stand how EB games can be so biased, promoting their North American sports games on a consistent basis.]
>> Anonymous
>>626739
Are you a troll?
if not, please go back to gaia and don't come back
>> Anonymous
My inner Magic player is vomiting and crying blood. The wording on every one of these cards, along with EVERY card on that blogspot site, is completely wrong.
>> Mr. magic
>>626739
this card's wording if the vest of the bunch by a landslide, but it still needs work:
-counters are put on cards, not tokens
-"you may choose to" can be cut down to "you may"
- 3rd ability should be "Remove a blaze counter from this card: deal 2 damage to target creature you don't control that had combat damage dealt to it this turn"
-Needs a power and toughness. for 2RRR with those abilities, I'd say 2/2 or 2/3.
>> Mr. magic
>>624464
name could use a bit more, but that's not a rule problem.

2nd effect should be "gets +1/+1 for every aura enchanting (cardname)"

also, the card cost is too low for those abilities. make her 2/2 or up the cost to 2 r/w r/w
>> Mr. magic
>>624526
again name needs work.

effect should read "remove target enchantment from the game. return it to play under it's owner's control at end of turn"
>> Mr. magic
>>624547
effect should read "whenever (carname) blocks a creature with more power than (cardname), (cardname) gets +1/+1 and first strike until end of turn"

added first strike to make it more playable, so it can sometimes take down a bigger card without dying.
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>>626781

>Remove a blaze counter from this card: deal 2 damage to target creature you don't control that had combat damage dealt to it this turn"

Should be "Remove a blaze counter from Scorching Overseer: Scorching Overseer deals 2 damage to target creature you don't control that was dealt combat damage this turn."

See pic for an example of this wording, except that it doesn't specify 'combat damage'.
>> Mr. magic
>>625297
you could also word it as "tap target untapped creature you control. you gain life equal to it's toughness."

I know, making changes when I'm not submitting anything isn't exactly fair. I'll have a few cards up soon enough for you to bitch about.
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>>626781
Fixed like this here. [Tokens are primarily for Saprolings, etc. Whatever.]

I chose 2/3, considering how much of a choke hold opponents can nail these little sore eyes with only the use of one or two mana.

>>626785
That's the kind of point of reference that players needed. For all the thrashings about, if this card didn't have the Legendary status, it would have been a nightmare stacking the Bushido abilities on top of one another considering its somewhat god-like.