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Anonymous
http://animemagicset.blogspot.com/
An Anime Magic: The Gathering set: A project

nuff said
>> Anonymous
at least you're using Magic set editor, but you need a lesson in wording magic cards. also, PLEASE change the exp. symbol. we've got tons of drawfags here and you couldn't do anything besides that little square? FAIL.

this should be "target creature gets +1/+1 until end of turn"
>> Anonymous
>>613749

Yeah just took a look at the site and those cards are some major fail if they want to be taken as serious cards for anime fans to play with.
>> Anonymous
>>613749
Actually, I believe it's "Target creature gains +1/+1 until end of turn."
>> Anonymous
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>> Anonymous
>>613812

I liek dis 1.
>> Anonymous
>>613749
Yes. Most people, including the others in this thread, haven't a clue how to word cards. This is why I never participate in card design with strangers. Also most don't know how to make balanced cards.
>> Anonymous
>>613812
2BB 2/2

1) During your upkeep put one Day Counter on Sadako.

2) Tap: Remove 7 Day counters; Deal 10 damage to target player or creature.

fix't but still... dont think it should kill player, actually i'd be happy with kills target creature only.
>> :3
>>613836
Make Sadako enchant creature that returns to owner's hand on creature death.

Haven't played MTG in a long time so the wording knowledge is gone but...

1) During your upkeep put one Day Counter on Sadako.

2) Tap: If counter > 7, remove x counters to deal x damage to enchanted creature.

But man... 7 turns? =/
>> Anonymous
>>613747
Haven't played MTG in a long time either, but even I know the OP card is terribly, terribly weak. I wouldn't pay W for 1/1 with that ability even if it weren't legendary.
>> Anonymous
>>613841
i was thinking that when its dead its dead, no need to have a creature that can deal X to you stay on the field when it dies AND it can comeback. though they should make a revive zombie card. it might have to Champion on a creature, but idk.

man i like your 2)

how's Remove 7 Day Counter to Destroy target Creature. If X Day Counters is Less then 7, Deal X damage to target Creature.
that way its more viable in the short term.
>> Anonymous
> 1) During your upkeep put one Day Counter on Sadako.

AT THE BEGINNING of your upkeep. The upkeep is not a single point in time. Triggered abilities need a single point.
>> :3
>>613844
I meant return to hand on enchanted creature's death.

Maybe instead: pay 1 life, add 1 day counter.

7 days is key for the humor of the card. D:
>> Anonymous
>>613867
oh rite sry. havent played in months and i dont have my cards. any other points?

also the 2) should have Remove X to deal X to target Creature.
>> Anonymous
what does defender do?
>> Far !!PXy1/6UF97e
>>613883
Can't attack.

Basically, it's what walls used to be.
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>> Anonymous
it shouldnt have defender and it shouldnt be a legendary. but i think it would be W 0/2 with the same effect.
>> Anonymous
Also it needs to be "[cardname] deals X damage", not "deal X damage". Damage needs to have a source.

My god. I've made four posts in /c/ in my life, and they're all on how to word Magic cards.
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>>613903
yeah i kinda wish i had my cards as a reference, but i guess thats why their are groups of people making real magic cards.


you should post more... /c/ is probably the most friendly board on 4chan.
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screwed up on the icon but i think you can tell what i was going for

i haven't played magic since tempest block. represent
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i'm sure i worded this incorrectly but i thought it was amusing this way
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maybe with a casting cost of 3? i dunno
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>> Anonymous
instead of creating shitty AD cards, improve OP superior Nanoha & Sakura cards
>> Anonymous
>>613977
Just Destroy Target Enchantment is fine.

>>613978
1W is good
just give it fear and its like a Cutthroat.

im torn on the osaka one... it makes sense but its too good and bad at the same time.... considering you tap to attack n all.
>> Anonymous
>>614085
maybe "TAP: destroy target tapped creature. play this ability as a sorcery"

just so you kill creatures after they deal damage and not before (during combat). i like the casting cost at 2, because it IS a 0/1
>> Anonymous
I'm back with some more wording fixes! Man, I hadn't done this since Kamigawa block.

>>613977
Use "destroy", not "send to the graveyard". And there's no reason to even destroy the enchantment, because it will be put into the graveyard as a SBE when the creature is destroyed. Also white doesn't get creature removal, and 1 mana is too cheap.

>>614114
I know this is clunkier, but it's "play this ability only any time you could play a sorcery".

>>613967
Very minor things, but it would be "can't attack or block". Unless you wanted to change the "can't block" to "Defender".

>>613973
Blue doesn't get 1/1 fliers for 1 even without the drawing ability.
>> Anonymous
This is fun. i was typing this and the power went out. so instead of waiting like normal people, i jumped on my bike and rode to the college library a few miles away.

>>614114
i like it. im not sure if you know if you do sry, 1W is 2 mana, W is white (duh) and the 1 is the amount of any mana (colourless is the name i think).

>>614782
oh lolz a janitor deleted the shinji! actually that card shouldnt have any text, it should just be 0/-2

yeah, Chiyo should be a BB or 1BB. i have a few BB flying 1/1 so this makes sense. most of the ones with effects are usually 1BB 2/2.
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fiddled around with the osaka and added a little bit of "Osaka comes into play tapped. Osaka does not untap as normal during your untap phase. You may pay 1 to untap Osaka once during your untap phase." captures her sleepy side i think

increased chiyo's casting cost to 1UU. i could've sworn blue had first turn flyers but i guess not
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i have no clue about the balancing on this one. it's hard to say what kind of reward is worth losing a turn over. maybe a higher casting cost
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if anyone has a picture of chiyo or osaka hiccuping, i'd appreciate it
>> Anonymous
>>616191
Awww, she missed out on lesbian cuddling. Boo-hoo.
>> Anonymous
>>616191
no, just have it

Sorcery
Remove Target Creature from Game. At the Beginning of the Owner's Upkeep, return the removed card to play under its owner's control with a +1/+1 Counter until end of turn.

same cost.

also why is every creature a legendary in this game? do you WANT to only have one on the field? if you've played the actual game you'll find that Legends are powerful and not just basic creature that should be spammed.

>>616188
Change effect to:
Haste

RW Tap: Choose a card from target Opponents Hand. Reveal that card. (might need rewording)

>>616187
pay 1... thats good. although she should NOT come into play tapped.
how's this
-Osaka does not untap as normal during your untap phase.
-At the beginning of your upkeep, you may pay 1 to untap Osaka.
-Tap: Destroy Target Tapped Creature.

gj with chiyo i like it now.
>> Anonymous
>>614782
Umm. I haven't played since Darksteel (started in Ice Age).

What in hell do you mean by "white doesn't get creature removal"?

Wraith of God? It's not much, but it is creature removal.