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Pretty good. Way better than I can draw. ~~
The criticism I'd give is basically that which>>264666said, specifying that the eyes are spread a bit far apart and the mouth is a bit high. Also, the eyes are unfocused ...well, at least not looking in the same direction.
I also would add that the plain white feathers seem rather distracting from the whole; they feel photoshopped whereas the others seem drawn, and give the picture a busy feel. You migh consider toning them down, shading them, replacing them with drawn feathers, or getting rid of them.
Otherwise, it looks pretty nice. The coloring is pretty and the lines are crisp. You do a pretty good job with feathers.
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